A Shining History: Unmasking America’s Shadow Self (Part III): A Deep Derwent Dive

Oh, he was afraid of what face might come to light when the time for unmasking came around at last.

Stephen King. The Shining. 1977.

Unmanned Vehicles

As Texas enters its coronavirus surge, I’m still stuck on the object of the mask and its shifting connotations. Staying at home to avoid all the people refusing to wear one–connoting to me a refusal to accept reality, but hey, that’s me–I happened to watch the movie Room 237 (2012), in which several people expound (invisibly, via voiceover) on their theories about Stanley Kubrick’s film adaptation of The Shining over spliced footage from that movie and several others. I initially thought this movie must have been a spoof (it’s not, apparently) while observing that some of the theories make more sense than others. These theories range from literary analysis (Kubrick is representing the carnage of past American genocides) to outright conspiracy theories (the movie is about Kubrick faking the moon-landing footage).

Room 237 did give me a better appreciation of the historical commentary Kubrick is potentially making, using the roaring 20s and Native American history in lieu of King’s source material about the dawn of the post-WWII era. Both the novel and movie point to different periods to draw the same conclusion that America’s history is a nightmare, the very thing we’re having to confront as a culture right now. One concrete manifestation of this confrontation is the toppling of Confederate monuments (the erection of which in the first place is a fascinating rhetorical story). Accepting a version of American history that doesn’t glorify defiant white guys is proving as difficult for a lot of people as the idea of wearing masks to go about any daily public business…

One theory from Room 237 I appreciated was that Kubrick was toppling the monument of his source material by changing the color of the Torrance Volkswagen from the red it is in the novel to yellow, then showing Dick Hallorann pass by a red Volkswagen that’s been crushed by a flipped semi:

Room 237.

This symbolic aggression strikes me as symptomatic of that white guy defiance manifest…that characteristic patriarchal machismo that may or may not have driven Stephen King to write an entirely new screen version of The Shining in the 90s, or to direct his own film adaptation of his own work (in 1986) in which the horror was specifically vehicles unmanned by drivers…

Maximum Overdrive.

Kubrick’s wringing new meanings from his source material may be some version of a pissing contest, but is not unrelated to the idea King acknowledges in On Writing (2000), that a text is no longer solely the property of the writer once the writer releases it into the world.

So now I’m taking the wheel.

The Howard Hughes Connection

Here’s a theory I was working on before I saw Room 237 that, after seeing Room 237, made me wonder if I was as crazy as some of that movie’s crazier commentators…

The figure of Horace Derwent, that “aircraft, movie, munitions, and shipping magnate” who is shadow proprietor of the Overlook Hotel and whose arc seems to embody that of America post-WWII in King’s version of The Shining, bears an uncanny resemblance to Howard Hughes.

Fiction writers have to tread carefully when taking…inspiration from real-life figures, as an author’s note at the beginning of The Shining reflects:

Some of the most beautiful
resort hotels in the world
are located in Colorado, but
the hotel in these pages
is based on none of them.
The Overlook and the people
associated with it exist
wholly within
the author’s
imagination.

But according to Lisa Rogak’s biography of King, before writing The Shining, King stayed in Room 217 of the Stanley Hotel:

When he and Tabby entered the hotel, he noticed that three nuns were leaving, as if the place were about to become godless, and when he and Tabby checked in, they learned it was the last day of the season before the hotel closed for the winter.

Rogak, Lisa. Haunted Heart (p. 78). St. Martin’s Publishing Group. Kindle Edition.

King discussed imagining how someone had died in the room’s tub, and their dinner in the creepily empty dining room. It seems fairly safe to say based on these tidbits that the Overlook is based on the Stanley, which to this day derives tourism from people wanting to stay in Room 217. Perhaps before the book was such a success, it seemed that the management of any real-life hotel might not be pleased to see their hotel depicted as a gallery of murderous ghosts, hence the book publisher’s legal department felt the need to have King slap this note on to cover its ass.

It’s funny they felt the need to do this on top of the standard legal boilerplate that appears on every novel’s copyright page, including this one’s:

This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places, and incidents either are the product of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, events, or locales is entirely coincidental.

So let’s look at how many coincidences there are in the Derwent-Hughes resemblance…

Howard Hughes is buried in Houston in an elaborate gated-off plot in Glenwood Cemetery, whose grounds are replete with phallic obelisks and stone angels weeping over the dead vestiges of oil fortunes. The Hughes name is not visibly displayed for the layperson, so you have to know where to look.

The Hughes family plot in Glenwood Cemetery.

It’s possible that my proximity to Hughes’ highly decorated if long decomposed corpse–it lies roughly a mile from my apartment–might make me biased in terms of reading too much into his resemblance to Derwent, that expression of our post-WWII national moral fiber. But I do have evidence from the text.

A lot of it comes from a text-within-the-text, the newspaper clippings about the Overlook that Jack finds in the scrapbook in the basement (King’s third novel in a row to integrate some epistolary element). And it’s not a perfect corollary.

Born poor in St. Paul, [Derwent] never finished high school, joined the Navy instead. Rose rapidly, then left in a bitter wrangle over the patent on a new type of propeller that he had designed. In the tug of war between the Navy and an unknown young man named Horace Derwent, Uncle Sam came off the predictable winner. But Uncle Sam had never gotten another patent, and there had been a lot of them.

The patent battle does echo some of Hughes’ government-contracting work; the biggest divergence is the “[b]orn poor” part. A rags-to-riches story is a fairly quintessential American narrative, though it is interesting how here King sets up a dichotomy of Derwent v. America rather than Derwent representing America, and interesting how in other places the text links Derwent to England, as though it’s also quintessentially American to aspire to the aristocracy we patently (so to speak) denounced…

But Howard Hughes was hardly born poor. The fortune with which he was able to make his grand and risky investments originates in Houston oil; according to Wikipedia, his father “patented (1909) the two-cone roller bit, which allowed rotary drilling for petroleum in previously inaccessible places.” King makes no mention of Derwent’s fortunes being connected to oil (perhaps that would have made the resemblance too much to pass for coincidence), nor does Derwent seem to have any of the OCD-characteristics that made Hughes so distinct and eccentric in his later years (he died in 1976, the year before The Shining was published). Giving Derwent a rags-to-riches narrative–even if those riches were gained, Gatsby-like, through nefarious means–feels less interesting here than a magnate who started off with money, because logistically you probably need inherited wealth to start off with in order to build up to the level of wealth attained by a Hughes or by a Koch brother…

At any rate, Hughes’ significant contributions to aviation, Hollywood, and Vegas are fairly unique markers that Derwent’s many distinctions echo–or the distinctions he’s reputed for, anyway:

When Derwent, who is rumored to have substantial Las Vegas holdings, was asked if his purchase and refurbishing of the Overlook signaled the opening gun in a battle to legalize casino-style gambling in Colorado, the aircraft, movie, munitions, and shipping magnate denied it … with a smile. “The Overlook would be cheapened by gambling,” he said, “and don’t think I’m knocking Vegas! They’ve got too many of my markers out there for me to do that!”

Wikipedia mentions Hughes’ Vegas connection:

Hughes extended his financial empire to include Las Vegas real estate, hotels, and media outlets, spending an estimated $300 million, and using his considerable powers to take-over many of the well known hotels, especially the organized crime connected venues. He quickly became one of the most powerful men in Las Vegas. He was instrumental in changing the image of Las Vegas from its Wild West roots into a more refined cosmopolitan city.

from here

That final sentence has a “citation needed” at the end of it, but regardless of how strictly factual that evaluation may be, this transition is a fairly significant/symbolic development in our country’s history in general–what amounts to a shift from an overtly brutal ethos to a covertly brutal one, both equally predicated on profit motive. King seems to be capturing this national shift by channeling Hughes via Derwent.

King pushes the Vegas stuff a bit further:

There had been rumors, Jack recalled, that some of the means employed by Derwent to keep his head above water were less than savory. Involvement with bootlegging. Prostitution in the Midwest. Smuggling in the coastal areas of the South where his fertilizer factories were. Finally an association with the nascent western gambling interests.

The newspaper articles debate whether Derwent has intentions of trying to legalize gambling in Colorado and turn the Overlook into a casino, a version of Vegas with inverted topography and climate. Vegas, that great neon oasis of the American west, is a glut of excess that seems to play out capitalism’s logical endpoint while also representing a distilled form of its mechanics via the act of gambling, which is a microcosm of financial investment and playing the stock market.

After Derwent sells the Overlook in the 50s, a “Las Vegas Group” buys the Overlook in the 60s, and scrapbook articles hint that Derwent may be involved via a series of shell corporations masking his involvement. An investigating reporter can’t get a comment from Derwent, who “guards his own privacy jealously”–another potential Hughes link. The aforementioned mob connections arise in connection to Vegas people, stockholders in a slot-machine company who have a laundry list of extreme gangster criminal charges on their records (including murder by ax, though a couple could only be charged officially with income-tax evasion), making these gangsters’ official titles “investors.” It’s these investing gangsters in particular that fire up Jack’s imagination:

Making deals that would turn over millions of dollars, maybe in the very suite of rooms where Presidents had stayed. There was a story, all right. One hell of a story.

Again this occupation of the same space, even if theoretical, draws a parallel between Presidents and gangsters, implying that they are not so different. Presidents, too, the country has learned the hard way by the 70s, do shady illegal sh*t.

The very last article Jack reads in this extended chapter 18 sequence reinforces the President-gangster connection, reporting a violent murder-by-shotgun that took place by some of the gangsters in “the Presidential Suite where two American Presidents have stayed.” Danny saw remnants of this murder on the tour earlier (right before Ullman swept open the windows for the grand public view) and he sees it again very briefly in the climactic sequence. Only “two” Presidents are reported here, when Ullmann listed four; these murders are reported to have occurred in 1966, which means Nixon, inaugurated in 1969, would have stayed in the room after the murders (signifying the state of the country when he took office), but the other three–“Wilson, Harding, Roosevelt”–would have already been President by 1966…

Jack also finds a mysterious note after the article describing the Presidential-Suite murder: “They took his balls along with them.” This tidbit links an element of toxic masculinity to these linked exchanges of money as the Overlook changed hands (or at least purported to) and of bullets between gangsters, toxic masculinity that characterize the Overlook’s sordid history (and thus the country’s) as one that’s necessarily the product of bull-headed (white) men who are bull-headed precisely as a means to prove their masculinity….marking our dirty history of imperialism as a product of such?

Hollywood Hells

In both their similarities and differences, Derwent and Hughes illuminate how the horror of our history is in many ways a product of an underlying but inextricable connection between politics and pop culture. According to the Century of the Self documentary I mentioned in a previous post, Edward Bernays, in his pioneering deployment of Freud’s psychological techniques in public relations, was one of the first to link politics with celebrity, inviting movie stars to White House parties in a consolidation of appearances and power.

It is via this Hollywood link that I will justify bringing up The Aviator, Martin Scorsese’s 2004 biopic of Howard Hughes (played by Leonardo DiCaprio), as a reference point for some other similarities and differences between Hughes and Derwent that further illuminate some specifically American…character foibles. Perhaps most prominently the prominence of the male ego and the importance of heroic (pop) cultural narratives masking more sordid exchanges in the forging of our collective identity…

Hughes’ life is too complex for the scope of a single movie, even a three-hour one. Scorsese omits the Vegas stuff and focuses on the aviation and Hollywood elements, while with Derwent, King focuses more on the Vegas and Hollywood stuff instead of the aviation. King also omits mention of anything resembling this figure having obsessive compulsive disorder, another critical element of The Aviator‘s depiction.

The Aviator‘s main plot revolves around Hughes’ efforts to build the biggest plane ever, the Hercules, and how rival airline CEO Juan Trippe (Alec Baldwin) uses political connections to try to ruin Hughes for his failure to deliver on his contract for the plane by the end of WWII.

A white man naming his thing in The Aviator.

Subplots touch on Hughes’ ongoing Hollywood film projects (he’s a multitasker). In keeping with its main plot, it focuses most on Hughes’ breakthrough aviation-related picture, Hell’s Angels (1930), while still reinforcing the impression that he pioneered the Western and gangster genres by single-handedly introduced the concept that appealing to sex (The Outlaw in 1943, released in ’46) and violence (Scarface, 1932 precursor to the 1983 Al Pacino version) were pretty much the hottest possible selling points cinema could perpetrate on the mass populace. Basically bringing Edward Bernays’ mass manipulations of Freudian fears and desires to Hollywood.

Spelling it out in The Aviator.

Derwent’s Hollywood contributions seem to be in a similar Bernaysian vein; he not only owned a movie studio (whose main child star is noted to have died of a heroin overdose in 1934), but helped make it profitable by pushing the boundaries then set for public decency:

During one of [Derwent’s studio’s movies] an unnamed costume designer had jury-rigged a strapless bra for the heroine to appear in during the Grand Ball scene, where she revealed everything except possibly the birthmark just below the cleft of her buttocks. Derwent received credit for this invention as well, and his reputation—or notoriety—grew.

The Aviator shows Hughes designing a very similar bra in a manner identical to how he engineers his airplanes–that is, with blueprints, which he unveils for the bra in the exact same scene he unveils the idea for the Hercules and its blueprints (drawn on the back of a headshot of his future girlfriend Ava Gardner). Just a few lines after Hughes tells his inner circle the name of his new plane, he says he wants them to “rig up something like this”–the viewer is led to believe he’s talking about the Hercules because there’s been nothing to overtly indicate a change in topic, but then, in a bait-and-switch played for comedy, it’s revealed the blueprints he’s holding up this time are actually for a bra.

Plane blueprints and bra blueprints in The Aviator.

Though both emphasize the concept of sexual appeal in cinema being a systematically designed feat of engineering, King’s rendering seems richer for revealing that Derwent didn’t really design this groundbreaking contraption himself, further developing the theme of the American character constituted by duplicity. This small-scale difference reflects the main large-scale difference between King’s Derwent and Scorsese’s Hughes: The Aviator, while purporting to show the shadowy underbelly of a great man’s mind in depicting his struggles with OCD (even more of a struggle for it not being a recognized disorder at the time), ultimately seems to valorize Hughes and imply that his reputation was not overblown, but should be even more impressive because of what he had to overcome. King’s Derwent(-America) is a sinister figure; Scorsese’s Hughes(-America) is a hero, if a tragic one. Hughes’ heroic arc is a narrative of individual triumph against the larger collective forces of the American government conspiring with private industry.

The movie’s opening scene with Hughes as a child plants the seed for his future OCD-related issues–and apparently his coping mechanism for it–in the opening lines from little Howard himself: “Q-U-A-R-A-N-T-I-N-E. Quarantine. Q-U-A-R-A-N-T-I-N-E.” Spelled out twice. A little freaky to watch during the coronavirus…as his mother bathes him while quizzing him about cholera and typhus and if he’s “seen the signs on the houses where the coloreds live.”

Later, we see Hughes as an adult attempting to quell an episode in which he can’t stop repeating himself (“Show me the blueprints”) by again spelling out “Quarantine.”

Verbal coping in The Aviator.

Scorsese thus seems to inadvertently reinforce a Kingian theme of the formative influence of childhood fears, as it would seem Howard internalized his mother’s lesson as much as he inherited his father’s money…

Escaping the swamp in The Aviator.

Using Hughes’ failure to deliver the Hercules as a pretext to launch a government investigation means that the twin villains of our conspiring senator Alan Alda and rival airline CEO Alec Baldwin can send G-men into Hughes’ home to touch all of his stuff, something that upsets him a lot more than most people (which they know–dirty tricks). It also means that the figures Hughes sometimes sees that he knows aren’t there, might, sometimes, actually be there. Despite this psychological warfare and threats of a public hearing to air his dirty laundry, Hughes refuses to kowtow to his foes’ demands that he support a bill that would grant a patently un-American monopoly on international air travel to his rival–though they won’t call it a “monopoly,” even behind closed doors.

Blatant verbal obfuscating in The Aviator.

Hughes’ ability to fight this battle is further compromised by his physical state after he’s nearly killed in a plane crash piloting a test flight. (During his meeting with the senator, he hides his cane in the foyer before he enters so as not to appear as weak, and boldly erupts that Juan Trippe can kiss both sides of his ass before storming out and almost immediately collapsing.) The senator, true to his word, launches the public hearing, inducing a purgatorial period during which Hughes quarantines himself in his screening studio, pissing in the milk bottles we’ve seen him drink from over the course of the film in what started as a cute quirk, now unable to complete the loop of spelling “quarantine” to bring himself out of his mental spiral (“Q…R…N…T…Q…U…E…I…T…I…N…E…N…E…I…”, the letters strung out like the lined-up piss-filled bottles).

Jack Torrance imagines the secret illicit deals that took place behind the closed doors of the Overlook. After Leo’s Hughes has a behind-closed-doors but face-to-face meeting with the slimy senator, he meets with Baldwin’s Trippe through the closed door of his quarantine studio, and Trippe, while blowing smoke through the door’s keyhole, gloats about the impending bankruptcy of Hughes’ airline, TWA. This confrontation galvanizes Hughes to emerge and get cleaned up by his ex-gf movie star Ava Gardner, who dumped him earlier after discovering a certain unseemly habit of his reminiscent of a certain government agency I know….

Blatant verbal obfuscating in The Aviator.

But it seems Ava’s ready to forgive and forget; while shaving and trimming Hughes, she offers an answer that represents the movie’s larger Shining-reminiscent themes about the duplicitous dichotomy between the public and private faces of government:

Questionable wisdom in The Aviator.

Hughes pulls himself together for a fine performance during the hearings (hearings the senator, a committee chairman, has repeatedly noted he had the power to render private or public) via rhetorical appeals to logic (“coming clean” about bribing military officials for contracts by explaining it as a standard business practice necessitated by the system), outing the interrogating senator’s unseemly relationship with Juan Trippe, and vowing to leave the country if the Hercules doesn’t fly.

Hughes’ performance here is the movie’s real climax, and what renders him heroic via what amounts to telling the truth by outing the politician’s duplicity and exposing the real mechanics of the capitalist motivations grinding the gears of our country’s legislation. Yet instances of Hughes’ own duplicity elsewhere in the film–as when he calls on an employee to testify with some blathering pseudo-science before the motion-picture censorship board about the “mammaries” on display in The Outlaw–are treated as cheeky and endearing strokes of genius…

The Hercules does fly–Hughes’ third test flight shown in the movie, and the only one that doesn’t end in a crash–and the bill that would have destroyed Hughes’ airline is defeated. The movie concludes with a reminder that Hughes’ victory here and achievements in general have come at a cost, as he again spots (presumably) phantom figures and ends the film stuck in one of his verbal loops, this time repeating “The way of the future.”

And that would be….

Covid resonance in The Aviator.

Another possible piece of evidence for the Derwent-Hughes connection, which I didn’t notice until re-watching The Aviator, is that the turbulent flight Dick Hallorann takes from Florida to Colorado is on TWA, Hughes’ airline:

Another hard bump rocked the plane and then dropped her with a sickening elevator plunge. Hallorann’s stomach did a queasy hornpipe. Several people—not all women by any means—screamed.

“—that we’ll see you again on another TWA flight real soon.”

“Not bloody likely,” someone behind Hallorann said.

This passage immediately precedes the sharp-faced woman bringing up the CIA and “dollar-diplomacy intervention,” that key component of America’s shadow self I discussed in the first post of this series.

I guess it just goes to show, the higher you fly, the farther you fall…

Out of gas in The Aviator.

Playing with the Phallus

In a post about queerness in ‘Salem’s Lot, I discussed the chapter “On Stephen King’s Phallus: or The Postmodern Gothic” in Robert K. Martin and Eric Savoy’s book American Gothic: New Interventions in a National Narrative (1998), which analyzes “a desire for verbal acuity that is coded queer” in King’s work by applying Jacques Lacan’s theory about the phallus. This chapter mentions Derwent:

While the phallus-as-signifier in Lacan does not equal the penis, it can never be divested of the penis; it must always signify the penis at the same time it transcends it. Language, the phallus-as-signifier, has it both ways (like Harry Derwent of The Shining), and its AC/DC nature troubles the straight male writer, who is, as Thad Beaumont knows, “passing some sort of baton” (437) in a phallic play that is pleasurable, homoerotic.

AMERICAN GOTHIC: NEW INTERVENTIONS IN A NATIONAL NARRATIVE (1998), P. 91

Which brings us to the fact that in The Shining Derwent is depicted as bisexual:

Such queerness is realized in the ghostly voices of the Overlook Hotel in The Shining. Harry Derwent, the hotel’s erstwhile owner, is “AC/DC, you know,” and during the spectral masquerade party that takes over the hotel and the Torrances’ lives, Derwent coyly pursues Roger, the man in the dog suit. Roger “is only DC,” the voices tell Jack. “He spent a weekend with Harry in Cuba once … oh, months ago. Now he follows Harry everywhere, wagging his little tail behind him” (The Shining 347). And it is this same Roger who represents to Danny the threat of castration (“I’m going to eat you up, little boy. And I think I’ll start with your plump little cock”) as he equates Danny with his ex-lover Harry.

AMERICAN GOTHIC: NEW INTERVENTIONS IN A NATIONAL NARRATIVE (1998), PP. 87-88

This was the first time I learned “AC/DC” was a term that could mean (or signify) bisexual…which made me think of the name of the band differently–a band that’s one of King’s favorites based their doing the soundtrack to his one-off film directorial effort Maximum Overdrive in 1986:

Car carnage in Maximum Overdrive.

And also based on this quote from On Writing:

I work to loud music—hard-rock stuff like AC/DC, Guns ’n Roses, and Metallica have always been particular favorites…

First on the list!

Anyway, since Derwent is more sinister than heroic, this is similar to coding the Lot‘s villain Barlow as queer, creating an association that bisexual/queer = evil.

Which brings me to the phrase “skeletons in the closet”… a phrase connoting general unsavory secrets but also including a phrase specifically about hiding queerness:

Many gay men, for instance, described negotiating their presence in an often hostile world as living a double life, or wearing a mask and taking it off…

Quoting George Chauncey’s Gay New York: Gender, Urban Culture, and the Making of the Gay Male World.

It seems like King is (consciously or unconsciously) developing a problematic metaphor in Derwent’s “going both ways,” his doing so sexually a reflection of his going both legal and illegal in his business dealings. A newspaper headline muses:

MILLIONAIRE DERWENT BACK IN
COLORADO VIA BACK DOOR?

This is referring to a sneaky chain of companies snaking back to Derwent that seems designed to obscure his Overlook ownership in later years. I wouldn’t put it past King to be amusing himself with a “back door” joke here, and linking Derwent’s financial double dealings to sexual double dealings is itself pretty shady…but Jack’s considerations about illicit business dealings taking place behind the closed doors of the Overlook invokes ideas of what else might be going on behind closed doors there…

The depiction of the dynamic between Derwent and his apparent lover Roger is also all kinds of f*cked up in other ways; the academics discussing the “AC/DC” bit above say the Overlook’s voices tell Jack that Roger is “only DC,” but what the specific ghost telling him this actually says is “‘Poor Roger’s only DC'” (emphasis mine), and that this comes at the end of an extended sequence of the Derwent ghost having Roger literally perform in front of an audience as though he’s a dog, and this passage makes it seem like the performance is enacting/symbolic of male-on-male sex being “grotesque” and also weirdly impotent, as though negating its own possibility:

Roger capered grotesquely on all fours, his tail dragging limply behind him.

Really this Grand Ball scene is Derwent’s (narrative) climax, since it’s when we actually get to see him “in the flesh”/”in person,” whereas before we were only getting accounts about him from newspapers. Of course, the newspapers don’t mention anything about the “AC/DC” stuff–that’s the shadowy truth that lies beneath the surface of what the media reports. Derwent’s “in person” performance seems designed as a representation of the worst that (American/British/imperialist-capitalist) humanity has to offer–the Overlook (and thus postwar America) is run by a guy who would publicly, and sexually, exploit another man like a dog…and a man who has felt the need to keep his continued ownership of the Overlook a secret… I’m just saying that using the “grotesqueness” of male intercourse to cement/characterize the grotesqueness of the corruption of the American postwar character would cross the line into homophobia on King’s part–probably also reflective of white mainstream attitudes at the time while potentially further exacerbating them.

Kubrick also seemed to find the homosexual-sex-with-a-dog bit horrifying enough to include completely out of context…

Unexplained figments caught in the oral act in The Shining.

The Aviator depicts Hughes as a ladies’ man, as does his Wikipedia page, that end-all be-all authority. The main basis for the rumors that Hughes might have been AC/DC seems to be a biography, Howard Hughes: The Secret Life by Charles Higham, supposedly based on testimony from Hughes acquaintances. This was published in 1994, so it seems doubtful any rumors about Hughes’ sexuality were really on King’s radar when he was writing Derwent, if Hughes was on his radar at all. Also, based on the many other lurid celebrity bios this biographer has penned, these rumors seem to have as much credibility as a checkout-lane tabloid. Funny, because this book is dubiously credited as the basis of The Aviator, a claim that seems like it originated with Higham himself in a 2009 memoir…

Spaghetti Spawn

Ultimately, whether King intended any correlation or not, the way Hughes directed his business ventures quarantined in Vegas penthouses in his later years resonates with both The Shining‘s cabin-fever themes and its behind-closed-doors corrupt political/business themes. Potentially there is some overlap in King’s representation of Derwent as perpetually trapped in the Overlook, not just trapped in the hotel but trapped eternally at the same party–the party that’s a direct parallel to the quarantine party in Poe’s “Masque of the Red Death.” The grand opening of America’s postwar society is now on a nightmarish loop at the Overlook; since the novel’s present is the 1970s, enough time has passed to reveal the fault lines in its foundation, as the climactic unmasking of the ghostly partygoers reveals:

There had been other things at the Overlook: a bad dream that recurred at irregular intervals—some sort of costume party and he was catering it in the Overlook’s ballroom, and at the shout to unmask, everybody exposed faces that were those of rotting insects—and there had been the hedge animals.

This passage is from Dick Hallorann’s perspective, showing that the Overlook’s ghosts are not just the manifestation of Jack’s skewed perceptions…

Thinking big in The Aviator.

And maybe there’s even a little redemption in the largely undeveloped characterization of Hallorann that he gets to be the one who actually sees what’s beneath the mask…

Maybe I can’t fault The Aviator for not exploring unsubstantiated rumors about Hughes’ sexuality (unless it really is based on the book that the rumors came from…). But it does feel like this Oscar-bait flick about an American hero directed by Scorsese, one of the most “influential directors in film history”–and one whose legacy is largely derived from gangster flicks–is valorizing some aspects of toxic masculinity as much as any of the violent westerns Hughes had a hand in spawning.

I recently learned more about the history of the so-called “spaghetti westerns” from my mother when I called her on Father’s Day and asked what movie I should watch in honor of my father, who died a few years ago. He loved movies, but when my wife had asked what his favorite was, I couldn’t come up with an undisputed victor out of the many that seemed to run on intermittent loops throughout my childhood.

My tentative answer was McClintock! (1963), starring John Wayne. My father had converted my brother’s old bedroom into the “John Wayne Room,” including such accents as light-switch plates bordered with tiny rifles. (If my default present for my mother is the latest Stephen King book, my default for my father was John Wayne paraphernalia.) The final sequence of McClintock! had embedded itself on my psyche: John Wayne, playing self-made rancher George Washington (G.W.) McClintock, stalks his wife–played by Maureen O’Hara, whom my red-haired mother bore some resemblance to–through the streets of their small western town (Maureen, for some reason, clad in only a slip and high heels). When he inevitably catches her, he serves her a public spanking in front of the whole town. (She was getting mouthy before, but this does the trick, and they live happily ever after.) The promotional poster on the movie’s Wikipedia page pretty much sums it up:

But McClintock! is not what my mother said. She said, The Good, The Bad, and the Ugly–1966, starring Clint Eastwood.

I said, I’ve never even seen that!

She said, Don’t you remember his ringtone?

I immediately heard it in my head, the tinny sound of it issuing from the black square my father had always kept holstered, gun-like, at his hip. (He had an ankle holster for his actual gun.) I’d never connected it with a specific movie. It was the ubiquitous sound of all westerns, probably because I’d only ever heard it in parodies.

There were also, I realized, posters for Clint Eastwood movies in the John Wayne room.

I said, If that was his favorite movie, how come I never saw him watching it?

She said, Oh, I wouldn’t let him watch that in front of you kids. It was much too violent.

I thought of John Wayne publicly walloping Maureen O’Hara. But I didn’t mention that. I said, That’s funny, because I was just watching the Back to the Future trilogy (released in ’85, ’89, ’90 respectively).

In the third one, they take the time machine back to the old west, where Marty McFly adopts the alias and attire of “Clint Eastwood” and re-enacts an Eastwood trick set up earlier. I asked my mom if it was The Good, The Bad, and the Ugly playing in that scene in the second one where Biff is watching a Clint Eastwood western in the hot tub.

Film homage in Back to the Future II.

(Side note: the inspiration for the trilogy’s villain and quintessential bully Biff Tannen was, supposedly, one Donald Trump. Which doesn’t really bode well for our futures…)

It’s a different “spaghetti western“–the one on the Wikipedia page for this genre. I’d heard the term but didn’t know its origin. My mom explained they were called that because they were directed by Italians. She said John Wayne refused to do them because he thought they were beneath him, but Clint Eastwood did a lot of them. My dad loved them. Then she said, offhandedly, that her knowing about them–one of her sisters was a film buff–was probably the reason they’d gotten together in the first place. I was unaware that my mother’s familiarity with Clint Eastwood’s spaghetti westerns was where my father’s interest in her originated…

…and therefore was where I originated?

Hughes & Hoover, Hoover & Hughes

When inspired to watch J. Edgar (2011) for the first time, another portrayal of a historical figure who, as founder of the FBI, played a significant role in forging America’s deep-state shadow self (and who is also played by Leonardo DiCaprio into the point of needing old-age makeup), I wasn’t expecting much representation on the queerness or corruption fronts when I saw it was directed by Clint Eastwood, whom I primarily associate with violent westerns and talking to chairs.

Eastwood in conversation at the 2012 Republican National Convention (from here).

Boy was I wrong.

Conceiving of Eastwood as a symbol of American imperialist machismo and having no prior knowledge of his directorial efforts, I had a low bar. But a New Yorker critic notes in his review of J. Edgar:

Eastwood long ago gave up celebrating men of violence: the mysterious, annihilating Westerners and the vigilantes who think that they alone know how to mete out justice. But Clean Edgar, working with an efficient state apparatus behind him, is a lot more dangerous than Dirty Harry.

David Denby, “The Man in Charge,” November 7, 2011.

J. Edgar was undoubtedly clunky in many places, but I was frankly shocked at the thematic complexity and queer-repping in this movie. I was expecting a movie about a heroic macho male leading this country to greatness, and got a movie about a male projecting a heroic macho male leading the country into moral ambiguity…

Howard Hughes’ and J. Edgar Hoover’s careers both straddle the shift to post-WWII society, starting out in the 1920s and ending with their deaths in the 1970s. Hughes is but a “private citizen” as he designates himself in his Aviator public Senate hearing, while his life reveals the power a private citizen can wield with his wealth, as well as a potentially inevitable involvement with the public sector in order to maintain that wealth and power. Hoover’s life reveals how power is most effectively wielded in the public sector via the support of private buttresses–“private” in both the personal and business senses.

As a narrative about a man formative in implementing what King would (via the sharp-faced woman on the TWA flight) classify as “dirty tricks” (or working in the shadows) in the American government, dirty tricks that include manipulating narratives and information, J. Edgar was framed as a manipulative narrative, as Hoover relayed his account of pivotal moments in the FBI’s development (or rather, his development of the FBI) to an FBI public relations officer. Hoover is extremely conscious of his dictation as a narrative; when one of these PR guys asks if Hoover himself was actually at the scene of a Communist crime he’d just described, Hoover says “let’s leave that to the reader’s imagination,” because “it’s important we give our protagonist a bit of mystery.” The movie explores the fine line between hero and villain, if at times with a leaden hand, by portraying Hoover as primarily interested in the “spotlight” and appearances above all else.

The acute tension in the present, ongoing as Hoover is telling his version of the FBI’s story to his PR minions, is a covert battle against Martin Luther King, Jr. As the past timeline Hoover is describing unfolds, we see this battle is predicated on the pattern that enabled Hoover to maintain his position of power in the notorious snakepit of D.C. for seven decades–pretty much way longer than anyone. His secret weapon is…secrets.

Once Hoover created a secret domestic police force by leveraging the horror of the Lindbergh baby kidnapping, he pioneered effective forensic science techniques like fingerprinting, but also did some pretty questionable shit when he wrangled permission to use secret wiretaps without a warrant.

Going outlaw in J. Edgar.

Hoover’s pattern, as Eastwood shows it, is to use illicit information he gains from the wiretaps–info unrelated to why the wiretaps were authorized in the first place but nonetheless useful for blackmail, usually involving sexual “indiscretions.” Having caught MLK thus with his pants down, Hoover makes a threat to out MLK’s extramarital affair if MLK accepts the Nobel Peace Prize–though Hoover makes the threat covertly, dictating the blackmail letter to his secretary as though it’s from someone else.

Identity politics in J. Edgar.

Notice how shadowy the shot is of him dictating this shadowy letter…you can’t even see his face. Eastwood seems to be highlighting the dirty covert political-rhetorical trick of accusing someone else of doing what you yourself are doing as he shows Hoover dictate this historically verifiable document:

The pot calling the kettle black in J. Edgar.

At the climax of this arc, Hoover watches MLK go through with accepting the Nobel Peace Prize on TV, having moments before been utterly convinced his gambit would be successful and MLK would decline. Eastwood thus seems to highlight a certain irony at play here: accepting this peace prize is essentially, secretly, an act of war. The new warfare, information warfare, is secret, undetectable as warfare in the traditional sense of overt violence. But Eastwood positions as the climax a failure of this warfare, and in so doing doesn’t seem to condone it as essential for national security as so many (other) right-wingers tend to, but rather seems to confront it as part of our horrific national past in a way King (Stephen, not Martin) would condone based on the way Danny faces down the Overlook’s ghost….

The subject of the FBI’s covert campaign against MLK and the Civil Rights Movement was raised again this past MLK Day, when the FBI tweeted a tribute to MLK. (I guess we have their PR department to thank for that…) That some people have called for the FBI’s building named after Hoover to be renamed seems connected to the idea of getting rid of Confederate monuments as a means of confronting our racist past.

The reason Hoover considers MLK a threat in the first place would appear to be that he’s riling up the Communists, which the arc of the movie shows were a legitimate threat when Hoover was starting out in the 1920s, but the menace of whom was increasingly used as a pretext. (The relationship between MLK and what’s referred to as “Hoover’s FBI” is quite complicated, made more so by the continued declassification of government documents.)

By the end of his decades-long reign, J. Edgar‘s Hoover is more interested in power for power’s sake…

Continued delusion in J. Edgar.

His fight against tyranny has gone and turned him into a tyrant without him even realizing it–but Eastwood makes (extra) sure the viewer realizes it.

Early in his rise, Hoover acquires a right-hand man, Clyde, who makes quite the googly eyes at Hoover from the get-go. Clyde and Hoover live happily ever after, except for never having sex–just a fistfight that stands in for it after Hoover suggests he might marry a woman. Eastwood addresses their non-platonic love for each other overtly (= jaw-drop for me), framing the whole celibate aspect of it as a product of what would seem to be Hoover’s own inability to commit what he perceives as “indiscretions” because he’s intimately aware of how that could be exploited as leverage against him, having used it as leverage against so many other people himself. (Plus we see his mother Dame Judi Dench tell him she would “rather have a dead son than a daffodil for a son.”)

The odd couple in J. Edgar.

Hence Hoover is sexually frustrated by his own lust for power, sad…in a way that felt similar to how Scorsese depicted Hughes as being trapped by his own great mind, the whole your greatest strength being your greatest weakness thing…

Clyde also serves the useful narrative purpose of calling Hoover’s version of events into question–of bearing witness to his manipulation of them. Clyde keeps him honest…sort of. Near the end of the movie, Clyde tells Hoover he read the account Hoover dictated to the PR reps, calling out several of the more pronounced inaccuracies. Clyde also tries to question Hoover’s increasing interest in the covert dirty tricks like what he’s trying to pull with MLK, though to little effect.

The movie showcases a production of myth as history, and thus the power of narrative, information, and language. The word “indiscretion” is set up in an early scene at the Library of Congress, where Hoover shows his future lifelong secretary Miss Gandy the cataloguing system he created at the Library of Congress, setting up the (false) dichotomy between sexual and political indiscretions.

The blurred lines between these indiscretions are on display during an exchange between young Clyde and Hoover when Hoover invites him to spend a weekend with him at the horse races, staying at a hotel on the FBI’s dime. Clyde is uncomfortable with this, on the surface because he doesn’t want to cost the FBI money. Hoover proposes that if they get an adjoined suite, that will save enough money to address Clyde’s concern, and Clyde agrees. Their conversation is then interrupted by the scientist who’s supposedly some kind of wood expert helping with the Lindbergh baby case, who seems to express the themes latent in Clyde and Hoover’s preceding exchange via phallic language play in the Lacanian vein…

Not-so-subtle subtext in J. Edgar.

Another theme reminiscent of The Aviator was the influence of Hollywood, or more specifically, how Hoover was bent on using that image to his own ends in promoting the FBI. Frustrated at the cinematic glorification of gangsters due to the success of Hughes’ Scarface and its descendants, Hoover helped switch the trend to glorifying G-men, villain and hero trading roles.

This is a collaboration that the so-called Deep State has continued, the CIA working with Hollywood from its inception and starting a more active campaign in the 90s to be portrayed favorably on screen (the CIA has also manipulated literature, for what it’s worth). And in that light, as well as in light of the fact that this is a movie made to make money (if not also burnish its director’s legacy), it feels a little ironic/hypocritical to have this Hollywood movie essentially criticizing this character’s seeking of the “spotlight,” even if the idea is that the context of that character’s role as head of a government organization is specifically what makes his obsession with appearances over reality so problematic.

On a final note about J. Edgar‘s historical “reality,” the rumors about Hoover’s penchant for cross-dressing are probably more prominent in the cultural imagination than rumors about Hughes’ bisexuality, judging by the fact that they’re mentioned on Hoover’s Wikipedia page and joked about other places.

The Simpsons, “The Springfield Files,” 8.10

These rumors are apparently uncorroborated, but Eastwood addresses them, if briefly. Clothes are prominent in general as a theme reinforcing Hoover’s obsession with appearances, and how these essentially manifest as a mask or disguise. If Eastwood’s Hoover is remotely accurate, probably nothing would be more horrifying to him than to be represented as a crossdresser in a pop-culture touchstone…

In the end, both of these films were helmed by old white men who have had the privilege of directing lots of other movies. (Not to mention that Harvey Weinstein produced The Aviator.) Eastwood seems to be calling attention to how these institutions have shaped our cultural/national narratives, but he’s still doing that within the framework of white-male-shaped narratives…

There were some other similarities between these two white-male biopics…

Hiring a weather expert in The Aviator.
Hiring a wood expert in J. Edgar.
Testifying at a public Senate hearing in The Aviator.
Testifying at a public Senate hearing in J. Edgar.

Yet again we have Leo showing us the arc of a young whippersnapping upstart growing grizzled under the weight of his own genius and/or power… showing us, in short, how hard it is to be a white man!

And if Hughes brought Vegas out of the Wild West and into the appearance of being more urbane (if no less cutthroat), J. Edgar is a modern western on the East coast, seat (or chair?) of the country’s real power center.

And if Hughes beget the classic western, he may or may not have killed it when he filmed John Wayne playing Genghis Khan in The Conqueror in the desert downwind of fallout from the government’s nuclear testing….

(And for another nugget of Hollywood-related history, Armand (Armie) Hammer, the actor who plays Clyde-the-covert-love-interest in J. Edgar, is named for his grandfather, an “oil tycoon” prominent in the papers of the ostracized scholar Antony Sutton (mentioned in the first post of this series). Sutton theorizes that polarizing dichotomies like capitalism v. communism are really just pretexts for power and money grabs; Hammer’s business ties to the Soviet Union demonstrate this by his profiting from the Cold War conflict developing resources that would be used against Americans in a fortune that presumably at least in part made its way down to his grandson….)

Hoover died when Nixon was President, and at the end of J. Edgar we see Nixon call Hoover a “cocksucker” in private and then a “truly remarkable man” (emphasis mine) in public. Nixon’s quest for power via the dirt of secrets on his adversaries has much in common with Hoover’s covert tactics, and led to his own ejection from the seat of power via Watergate. Apparently there are rumors that Hughes was actually somehow involved in this scandal in another tangled web of wealth’s influence on politics. Since Hughes’ connection to Watergate apparently came under more scrutiny because of The Aviator‘s release, it’s again unlikely this connection was on King’s radar in the 70s. But if Watergate is a public exposure of the previously Deep-State shadow self thus marking the site of a national collective trauma, and if The Shining can be read as tracing the horror of Watergate back to a necrotic rot underlying the prosperity that emerged from the carnage of WWII, then ultimately the novel is tracing the roots of the political horror we’re living right now…

The Trump Card

Though The Shining‘s literal details evidence a more concrete corollary between King’s Derwent and Hughes, in some ways Derwent has more in common with Eastwood’s Hoover, who’s repeatedly shown taking credit for things he didn’t do.

In The Shining‘s “Closing Day” section, we see Ullman have an interesting exchange with a woman who is checking out after he’s asked to handle her by an employee:

“It’s Mrs. Brant,” the clerk said uncomfortably. “She refuses to pay her bill with anything but her American Express card. I told her we stopped taking American Express at the end of the season last year, but she won’t …”

The woman, whose clothes denote her class, rants a bit more about how she’s always paid with this particular credit card before Ullman escorts her behind a closed door to “take care of it,” and we don’t get to see how it’s taken care of. There’s an implication that American credit has run out in light of exposure of the crimes our politicians and government agencies have committed…yet also a sinister implication that despite that, we’ll underhandedly force its acceptance anyway…

No one has leveraged this lapsed American credit more than Trump, and in so doing, damaged it further. Invoking the “Deep State” and claiming it’s out to get him has become a rather convenient device that enables him to turn the tables on absolutely anyone accusing him of absolutely anything. If he’s been accused of something, it’s because there’s been a conspiracy on the part of these long-standing covert experts to frame him. This proliferation of accusing accusers sows confusion to the point that facts, reality, and words no longer mean what they used to…

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“Under Control,” by Brian Stauffer.

I didn’t realize until I was actually using political conspiracy theories as the course theme for my comp classes that Trump gained traction in politics in the first place because of his spreading the baseless–except in racism–Obama “birther” conspiracy theory: the theory that Obama was not born in the U.S. and thus that his Presidency was illegitimate. Trump has pretty much never wavered from the tactic of spouting baseless conspiracy theories since then, often, still, about Obama:

…at a press conference on the White House lawn, Trump made that clear, in a memorable exchange with Phil Rucker, of the Washington Post, that echoed the paranoid fulminations of Trump’s hero Joseph McCarthy at his worst. “What crime, exactly, are you accusing President Obama of committing?” Rucker asked. “Obamagate,” Trump replied. “It’s been going on for a long time,” he added, without offering specifics. “What is the crime, exactly, that you’re accusing him of?” Rucker asked again. “You know what the crime is,” Trump answered. “The crime is very obvious to everybody.”

Susan B. Glasser, “‘Obamagate’ is Niche Programming for Trump Superfans,” May 15, 2020.

If Trump’s political success was built on the back of a conspiracy theory, it was also because of a methodical cultivation of image and a manipulation of “reality” that we have certain television producers to thank. His administration is the logical conclusion of the intersection of pop culture and politics, a triumph of capitalist imperatives and Bernaysian rhetoric. Not to mention his money also has tentacles in that sinful epicenter of the American west…

The polar opposite of paradise in Back to the Future II.

That we’ve ended up in Trump country might mean, according to King’s haunted historical model as figured in The Shining, we have not properly exorcised the demons of Watergate because we have not properly reckoned with Watergate’s roots. This is the equivalent of an alcoholic–such as Jack Torrance–giving up the bottle without dealing with the psychological and emotional issues/trauma that gave rise to the urge to drink in the first place. And Jack’s continued craving for alcohol is precisely what makes him ripe for the Overlook’s taking.

The Amazing Roach Motel

There’s still plenty more to say about The Shining, not least of which is the novel’s treatment of addiction and how it unconsciously manifests some personal demons King had yet to deal with at the time. But if I don’t move on to King’s next work now it feels like I never will…

Kubrick’s changing the Volkswagen’s color in the movie is a change a lot of viewers might not notice (at least I didn’t), but the substitution of the topiary maze for the topiary animals is largely the most noticeable/significant change he made, a more memorable symbol of adaptive liberties, of making the material his own. As I write this, the maze increasingly seems a symbol of the writing process itself, a symbol for the process of trying to make sense of history, a symbol for the endless signification inherent in interpretive analysis once you get started…

A sign in The Shining.

The more of King’s work I read, the more connections there are to make. I’m getting deeper and deeper into a Kubrickian maze of my own making, though what is the maze but another version of the winding corridors of the Overlook itself….

Overlooking the maze in The Shining.

Some might argue you can’t move forward if you keep looking at the past, others that you have to look at the past in order to move forward. The more I think about it, the more tangled the possible readings of the Overlook exploding in the novel get. It ties into King’s idea that evil destroys itself. But if the Overlook represents history, that’s not something that can just be destroyed. It seems like we need to learn to acknowledge and thus live with our historical ghosts, that destroying them would mean ignoring and thus not learning from past mistakes…so I guess ultimately I can’t look to a King novel for all the solutions to our problems.

But I can’t get too bogged down in analyzing anymore analysis or making anymore historical connections, or I really might end up stuck in the Overlook forever…

…and ever…

-SCR

A Shining History: Unmasking America’s Shadow Self (Part II): George Floyd

In death, George Floyd’s name has become a metaphor for the stacked inequities of the society that produced them.

Jelani Cobb, “An American Spring of Reckoning,” June 14, 2020.

“No one ever asks about the language.”

Stephen King quoting Amy Tan in On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft, 2000.

[Dick] Hallorann had the dark eyes and that was all. He was a tall black man with a modest afro that was beginning to powder white.

Stephen King, The Shining, 1977.

Black America

In the time I’ve been compiling this post since making my last one, the world has changed again in the wake of George Floyd’s murder. Trying to process the immense scope of systemic racism and injustice–in the face of an ongoing global pandemic, no less–can be more than a little daunting. But I want to be clear (to myself not least of all) that I don’t consider reading Stephen King’s work to be a distraction from the world’s horrors, but rather a way of engaging with them. Because most of us are horrified right now, whether we know it or not.

It might seem counterintuitive to address issues surrounding race by writing about a white man’s writing (not to mention for a white person such as myself to do so), but examining representations of race in the writing of one of America’s premier white male writers (in terms of numbers of readers, at least) can reveal quite a bit about a major component of our collective national unconscious, or America’s shadow self. What my wife calls my “white man problem” is also the country’s white man problem.

New Yorker writer Jelani Cobb recently discussed George Floyd’s murder as a sort of flashpoint through which White America has become conscious of the existence of Black America–i.e., become aware of the fact that black Americans live in an ostensibly different country than white Americans. More aware of that national shadow self constituted (so to speak) by an economic system based on racial exploitation that’s continued long after Juneteenth. Ongoing and flagrant police brutality reveals how the legal system in this country is explicitly, staggeringly, appallingly racist, but White America needs to maintain a larger awareness of systemic problems and how white people’s daily lives, habits, and choices are continuing to perpetuate them. The systemic problem that the capitalist system is rigged in favor of white people–specifically because of this system’s American origins in slavery–creates other problems, not least of which is that white people are not naturally inclined to see their having this inherent advantage as a “problem,” and it’s to our advantage to remain in denial about the fact that this advantage exists, because if it does, that means we haven’t “earned” what we have based on our own merits, which would be horrifying…

Toni Morrison articulates the relationship between capitalist power structures and race via her character Booker in her 2015 novel God Help the Child:

He suspected most of the real answers concerning slavery, lynching, forced labor, sharecropping, racism, Reconstruction, Jim Crow, prison labor, migration, civil rights and black revolution movements were all about money. Money withheld, money stolen, money as power, as war. Where was the lecture on how slavery alone catapulted the whole country from agriculture into the industrial age in two decades? White folks’ hatred, their violence, was the gasoline that kept the profit motors running. So as a graduate student he turned to economics—its history, its theories—to learn how money shaped every single oppression in the world and created all the empires, nations, colonies with God and His enemies employed to reap, then veil, the riches.

Toni Morrison, God Help the Child, 2015.

So a bit more of an academic gloss on the old maxim money is the root of all evil

In narrative structure, for a plot to “work” you ideally need an intersection of chronic and acute tensions–there is an ongoing problem before the story starts (chronic tension), and the story starts with an incident (acute tension) that forces up that which was previously submerged beneath the emotional surface: the acute tension incident causes the character to confront the chronic tension problem they were avoiding dealing with. If our country is a character, George Floyd’s murder is the acute tension incident that is forcing the problem of White America’s lack of awareness of Black America to the surface.

As Toni Morrison has it in the aforementioned passage, a critical element of this chronic tension problem pivots around money: more specifically, that White America doesn’t want to recognize that slavery’s effects continue to this day, that the capital generated by slave labor has trickled down through white families and white businesses to form the backbone of our current capitalist economy. The economic landscape of our country, in other words, would look quite different had those white European settlers never kidnapped people from Africa and forced them to work for free. Morrison further points out that the motivation to forcibly remove people from their homeland and violently oppress them was ultimately the profit motive, the incentive of a capitalist system. And it seems important to note that while we nominally abolished slavery, we still abide by the same system that fostered it, created it. Abolishing slavery is treating a symptom, not the disease itself.

White America doesn’t want to face the truth of this disease. The books of King’s I’ve read so far seem to advocate for the necessity of facing the problem/monster head on in a specifically verbal confrontation. As King would have it via Carl Jung, we need to face it, or it will continue to fester. It’s festering right now as people pour into the streets, and as I heard one commentator say on my local independent radio station, if the murders and violence by police continue, we could cross the line from predominantly peaceful protests into true civil unrest.

Narratively, it’s often a satisfying plot to have a character figuratively shoot themselves in the foot. That is, they cause their own problems, in literary fiction reflecting a flaw(s) in their personal character, and in having to deal with a problem caused by their flaw, they’re forced to confront the flaw itself. As human beings, we’re implicitly burdened with the possible unforeseen consequences of the choices we make. In terms of this country, before it even existed as such, a choice was made to kidnap people from another continent and exploit them for free labor. But free labor came at a non-monetary price. Mat Johnson touches on the fear of rebellion that existed among white slaveowners in his book The Great Negro Plot: A Tale of Conspiracy and Murder in Eighteenth-Century New York. I can imagine a type of Newtownian fear equation: the more horribly a white slaveowner mistreats the people they’re enslaving, the more likely those enslaved people will be to want to take violent revenge against the white slaveowner. Power creates paranoia, and the more horrible you are, the more afraid you should be.

A deep-rooted fear still exists within the White psyche–the fear of vengeance for White America’s original sin, a sin that deep down we still harbor shame and guilt over. But we are unable to face that shame–don’t want to admit we feel it because we don’t want to admit we did anything to merit feeling it, which would be to admit a lot of other things, opening a can of worms with an explosive force that might knock us off our pedestal of privilege. So we deflect that shame onto others, a kind of emotional alchemy wherein we try to convince ourselves our original sin was not really a sin: if the groups that white European settlers slaughtered and subjugated are not really our “equals” as human beings, then we can conceive of what we did to them as acceptable…

The kind of duplicitous Bernaysian rhetoric I talked about in my last post that infuses our capitalist marketing and foreign policy is very present in our figuring of these marginalized groups, aka the other, such as the indigenous people already living on the North American continent when Columbus arrived, as “savage,” and us European settlers as “civilized,” when the Europeans are the ones who slaughtered the indigenous people (via both outright overt violence and more covert duplicitous methods like smallpox blankets) to take their land by force.

The idea articulated by one character in The Stand, that “nobody is as afraid of robbery as a thief,” reflects a lot of White America’s unconscious fears: we stole the land we live on, and we stole human beings to do work to generate wealth from it. By this logic, by this history, everything white people has comes from theft. Nothing we have is really, truly ours by the terms of which we understand ownership. It’s another common narrative device that doing something “wrong” may entail a certain payout, but that payout frequently comes at a cost that’s too high. The cost is often psychic/psychological–fear of getting caught, guilt, etc. Fear that the consequences will catch up with your, fear that there will be a reckoning. Toni Morrison’s concept of Africanist “othering” is a reflection of White fear of a reckoning for the reason Black people are in this country in the first place.

White America owes a debt, a debt we don’t want to own up to because it will mean giving up the advantages that constitute our cushy comfortable lifestyles, and there’s an implicit unconscious shame attendant in that failure that constitutes a collective national psychic wound. The bottom line is reparations have to be paid somehow, or White America will continue to live in fear that Black America will rise up to take what they are owed by force. (This idea is related to depictions/figurations of black violence, the construction of the black criminal/”thug” archetype.) We nominally abolished slavery, but not the system that enabled it–not just enabled it, but actively motivated it–capitalism. The demons White America needs to face, its chronic tension, is that we continue to abide by the system that engendered this horror. Slavery is not the true monster that needs to be slain, but a mere appendage of it.

The N-Word

King’s brief cameo on the first season of The Chappelle Show in 2003 is fairly representative of the posture toward race/blackness that appears in his work: outwardly innocuous-seeming, like your best friend’s dad with his somehow endearingly nasal voice and the pen clipped inside the neck of his weathered black tee, but with somehow insidious implications/undertones. Despite sensing their existence, I cannot even properly explicate the problematic implications of King’s question(s), which itself is indicative of my own white privilege and lack of awareness, but what I can tell you is that when King takes a humorously long time to come up with the word “undertaker,” thus prompting the segment’s titular “Black Person” interlocutor Paul Mooney to quip that King “almost said” the N-word, Mooney invokes a word that appears disturbingly often in King’s work.

As an English teacher and a writer, I am someone who believes in the power of words. I’ve never used the N-word in any of my own fiction that I can recall; I can’t even recall considering using it, and I wouldn’t use it without consideration. The N-word is the only word I have ever censored in any published fiction I’ve assigned to students as an English/creative-writing teacher. There have been two writers off the top of my head I’ve had to do this with: Ernest Hemingway and Flannery O’Connor.

Of course there’s a whole debate about censorship in literature, accuracy of historical representation, etc. One of my English professors in college (a Latino man, for what it’s worth) said he used to use the N-word outright in class in the context of reading/discussing passages from novels, but after a student expressed to him how traumatic it was for her to hear it, no matter the context, he substituted “N” for any time he needed (“needed”) to say it in class discussion. Context seems critical to the situation described here about a white professor being investigated for using the N-word in class in reference to a quote of James Baldwin’s. There is a subjective question at the center of this debate about whether censoring the N-word in contexts that are not invoking it as a racist slur is going too far and potentially stifling the interrogation and/or critique of the history and meaning of its use and what it says about our country, etc.

King himself contributes to this discussion in On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft (which wasn’t published until 2000, but reading King chronologically in 2020 means allowing for the context of hindsight):

Not a week goes by that I don’t receive at least one pissed-off letter (most weeks there are more) accusing me of being foulmouthed, bigoted, homophobic, murderous, frivolous, or downright psychopathic. In the majority of cases what my correspondents are hot under the collar about relates to something in the dialogue: “Let’s get the fuck out of Dodge” or…

Stephen King, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft, 2000.

He then quotes two more fake examples of offensive dialogue, one invoking the N-word (in a metaphor invoking “cotton” to boot), and one invoking an anti-gay slur that I don’t really feel like repeating either. King’s point is one that I raise in my comp classes when we look at pop culture texts: just because a character does something unethical doesn’t automatically mean the text/author it/themself is unethical; it depends on the text’s ultimate message/attitude toward that unethical aspect. King’s defense is thus that in representing racist characters saying unethical things, he is representing the ugly truth of the existence of racism and homophobia–not endorsing it, but revealing it, and additionally, providing a sense of reality via verisimilitude. “It’s important to tell the truth,” he says two sentences after the above passage in which he spells out the N-word, a passage that comes some pages after he parenthetically designates H.P. Lovecraft a “galloping racist,” noting the frequent inclusion of “sinister Africans” in Lovecraft’s stories, an analysis it seems like Toni Morrison would have appreciated.

King’s going out of his way to use the offending words in his fake examples seems a way to intentionally underscore this point. And yes, there is a distinction between depicting a racist/homophobic/etc. character and the narrative promoting racism/homophobia/etc.; it can be important and necessary to depict such characters as he argues, though I’m sure that nuance is lost on some (if not many) people. But it was notable to me how King juxtaposed the racist and gay slurs in his fake examples, because at this point in my King reading project, King’s work’s racism and homophobia are definitely some major twin emergent threads. At points King threads a finer line than others in telling the “truth” about these things in a way that is perpetuating problems he’s supposedly telling the truth about rather than addressing them in any productive way. There’s an underlying assumption symptomatic of white male privilege in King’s claims about truth-telling: he assumes that if he doesn’t intend his fictional depictions to be racist, but to be in the service of what he deems some greater truth, then his work can’t and won’t be racist. I guess he forgot about his own unconscious…

It strikes me as further emblematic of white male privilege that King should basically declare such slurs acceptable to use in the service of truth-telling. He has the authority to declare it acceptable to do so because of his status as a white man. But since he’s a white man, there is literally no slur, no word with the power to inflict on him the pain those words have for the groups they’ve been used against–for white men such a word cannot exist by concept. It’s supposed to be King’s job as a fiction writer to imagine other people’s experiences and what being able to be hurt by words might feel like, but I’m starting to think it’s a problem how often we give fiction writers the license to render their imaginings of things they have no firsthand experience with.

This is all a pretty big can of worms–a can of snakes, really. The reason I’m writing this blog in the first place is indirectly related to these issues, a way to explore the politics of representation, which basically came to paralyze my own fiction writing. All writers are political, whether they want to be or not. It’ll be a white man who advises you not to think about that stuff, to just put your head down and do the work.

A Screwed Up Interlude

A year ago, when we lived in a different world, I was teaching a summer literature class at the University of Houston. Providing a brief overview of literary history, I noted the trend of the death of the all-knowing author (not to be confused with Roland Barthes’ concept of the death of the author, which applies to literary criticism rather than to literary fiction). If you look at 19th century novels, Tolstoy and the Victorians and the like, you’ve got an entity making sweeping statements about mankind, who not only knows what all of the characters are thinking, but things that not any of the characters know–essentially amounting to a God-like figure. Then the theretofore unknown level of carnage inflicted in the Great War blotted out the concept of any overarching deity harboring a grand design, heralding the advent of Modernism, in which fiction reflected the concept that we were all necessarily trapped in the prison cells of our own perspectives. The more I think about it, the more it seems presumptive, and usually a symptom of the inherent authority of white male privilege, to invoke a fully omniscient perspective. (King is prone to invoking it, but probably more for the sake of creating suspense than necessarily making sweeping generalizations about humanity.)

I’d been grappling with the debate(s) about racial representation in fiction, with who had the right to tell whose story in fiction. On the one hand, a novel, which is what I was trying to work on, ought to incorporate a diversity of perspectives, otherwise it would implicitly privilege the white perspective it was my own default to write from, because that was my personal perspective. On the other hand, as a white person, I did not have the right to presume to describe the experience of a person of color; I could feel the inherent element of identity theft in this, of exploitation. But plenty of (probably white) writers had said or implied that you could do enough research, talk to enough people, put in enough work, to get it right. Secondhand experience substituting for first.

It wasn’t until the president of the University of Houston sent out an email after George Floyd’s murder mentioning it that I learned Floyd was a member of the Screwed Up Click. I was not overly familiar with DJ Screw, which is another travesty that reveals my ignorance and privilege, since I’m a Houstonian–a college transplant, not born and raised, but still–until about a year ago, when I happened to read Jia Tolentino’s “Losing Religion and Finding Ecstasy in Houston” detailing some of Screw’s history and influence, and recalled the archive of materials dedicated to the city’s hip hop history in the UH Library, and visited it on the last day of my summer class. It’s in the Special Collections Department, which means you have to put your bags in a locker and sign a bunch of forms before they’ll unlock the glass doors for you.

At that hour on a Friday afternoon, this windowless inner sanctum was otherwise empty. I found what I didn’t know I was looking for in a box of photo negatives taken by Peter Beste for his book Houston Rap. I was there to find out more about the world I wanted one of my characters to inhabit, a world I lived adjacent to–commuted through on a daily basis to get to the UH campus, in fact–but only knew what it looked like from the outside. The Houston Rap book itself is pretty immersive–in both the photos and the interviews–but in the full collection you can see the negatives of all of the photos Beste took, of which ultimately only a fraction made it in. So many were taken contiguously they were like little film reels.

I also had the person behind the desk haul out a few boxes of Screw’s records, the ones he used to make his Screw Tapes. (They had some of his Tapes too, but they didn’t have anything you could listen to them with.) There were old flyers for house party shows, magazine articles, a handful of grillz, the program for “Robert ‘Screw’ Davis”‘s funeral with an image of a turntable xeroxed onto the cover. I was there for a couple of hours.

I bicycled home through the Third Ward just ahead of a thunderstorm, past Cuney Homes, where George Floyd grew up, past the corner stores and the churches and the row houses and the Garden of Eat’n (est. 1985). I crossed the main drag of Emancipation, which until very recently was Dowling, named for a Confederate general. The Ward ends at a knot of freeways; I bike under one and over another, giving me a view of the back of an exit sign graffitied with the tag KONQR in enormous letters that must be taller than a person, hovering in space over a steady stream of traffic.

DJ Screw has loomed fairly large in my creative life since then, something I hope to return to (eventually) in a discussion of King’s use of (black) music in The Stand. For now I’ll just mention a couple of my takeaways from that afternoon of vicarious cultural immersion from the academic citadel.

One is the blatant misogyny that rages through hip hop, which might qualify as “common knowledge” by this point, but was reinforced by image after image of fully clothed men tossing green paper at women naked but for the rubber-banded bills above their knees and the occasional tattoo.

It’s a dichotomy we’ve all had to deal with (I won’t say “accept”), that an artistic creation might have merit in some ways and be problematic in others. Artists are mere mortals, after all. I was reminded of this problem again reading James Baldwin’s “The Creative Process” and feeling many lines that resonated, but then being irked by his constant references to the ubiquitous “artist” as “he,” and his using “men” when he really meant–or at least should have meant–“people.”

But the conquest of the physical world is not man’s only duty. He is also enjoined to conquer the great wilderness of himself.

James Baldwin, “The Creative Process,” 1962.

I was reminded of the problem again reading a recent article re-evaluating Flannery O’Connor’s racism–and how scholars have consistently glossed over it. While the white writer of this article patently acknowledges O’Connor’s racism, he did elect to use the uncensored N-word in the context of his discussion. And back on the subject of that subjective debate, I’m in the camp that white people shouldn’t use it (as my not using it here might have implied). White people can claim they’re using it for a purpose that they’ve deemed productive, but it’s a dubious defense and a fine line.

Which brings me to the second takeaway from DJ Screw I’ll mention. As a DJ, Screw’s creative work was screwing together other people’s creative work, emblematic of the eminently subjective fair use principle and raising questions concerning intellectual ownership. Which reminds me of the idea of collective ownership over nebulous non-physical entities, over something like the N-word. White people don’t like to hear that black people can say it and they can’t, that black people might have ownership of something they don’t. The implication that only white people have the right to own something (whether concrete or abstract, living or inanimate) strikes me as being a product of that old psychic slavery-related wound.

Dick Hallorann, Magical Black Man

In an earlier post about Carrie I analyzed King’s treatment of race via Toni Morrison’s theory in her book Playing in the Dark:

The Africanist presence exists in the marginal shadows of the white mainstream that has dominated literature–the Africanist presence is the white mainstream’s shadow self, implicitly a site of horror that whiteness can define itself in relation to.

From here.

This presence is “shadowy” because a) it exists on the margins and b) it’s an unconscious reflection of white attitudes toward blackness. And as Jelani Cobb has it, via George Floyd’s death White America is becoming conscious of these formerly unconscious attitudes, which have been contributing to the ongoing oppression of Black America as much as overt police brutality.

These formerly unconscious attitudes include guilt/shame over white privilege and continuing to profit from the original sin of slavery. Like a grown son of a mother forced to continuously bail him out of situations of his own creation who lashes out at her because he’s displacing/redirecting his shame and anger at his own inadequacy, White America lashes out against the minorities who have more of a right to lash out at them, and White American maintains recourse to plenty of psychological and rhetorical contortions to position themselves in the “right,” which include, among other things, Morrison’s concept of “Africanist othering”–depicting the Africanist presence as “other”–necessarily different, and implicitly something to be feared.

But in certain attempts to rectify past racial injustices, the pendulum can swing too hard in the other direction. White people at pains to demonstrate that they’re not racist can overcompensate in their narrative depictions of black people–instead of depicting them as something to be feared, as a sort of demonic presence, white writers have fallen to depicting black figures as something to be revered, divine, magical.

The problem is, even if a divine presence is “good” instead of “evil,” it is technically as inhuman as a demonic presence. This type of implicit dehumanization is potentially even more problematic than explicit dehumanization because it’s masquerading as its opposite–it’s in disguise, and thus, according to King’s narrative logic in The Shining, even more insidious–another characteristic/aspect of duplicitous Bernaysian/Hegelian rhetoric. The irony is that while King seems to almost consciously render such rhetorical duplicity as “evil” through The Shining‘s plot, he does not seem to recognize that he’s resorting to a sort of rhetorical duplicity himself. Though to be fair, if it’s unintentional, I guess it can’t technically be called duplicity through definition, which implies purposeful deception. Through Hallorann’s character, King seems to be making conscious efforts to not be racist, or to be even anti-racist, but in doing so reveals unconscious racism. His good intentions are precisely the problem, symptomatic and indicative of White America’s larger aforementioned problem(s). Because you know what they say the road to hell is paved with.

In On Writing, King jokes that “Dick” is “the world’s most Freudian name,” though without noting the times it’s appeared in his own fiction, like the character Dick Hallorann in The Shining. This Dick would appear to be King’s first significant use of the trope of the magical black man:

These Black characters, often referred to as “magical Negroes,” generally focus their abilities toward assisting their White lead counterparts. At first glance, casting the Black and White leads in this manner seems to provide examples of Black and White characters relating to each other in a constructive manner; however, a closer examination of these interactions suggests a reinvention of old Black stereotypes rather than authentic racial harmony. 

Cerise L. Glenn & Landra J. Cunningham, “The Power of Black Magic: The Magical Negro and White Salvation in Film,” Journal of Black Studies 40.2, Nov. 2009. 

Another academic examined this same issue the same year:

I find that these films constitute “cinethetic racism “–a synthesis of overt manifestations of racial cooperation and egalitarianism with latent expressions of white normativity and antiblack stereotypes. “Magical negro” films thus function to marginalize black agency, empower normalized and hegemonic forms of whiteness, and glorify powerful black characters in so long as they are placed in racially subservient positions. The narratives of these films thereby subversively reaffirm the racial status quo and relations of domination….

Matthew W. Hughey, “Cinethetic Racism: White Redemption and Black Stereotypes in ‘Magical Negro’ Films,” Social Problems 56.3, August 2009.

A key word here being “subversively”–being racist specifically through depictions that seem anti-racist on the surface. These articles are specifically examining films, but the trope holds true in books as well; both articles discuss the use of the trope in the film adaptation of King’s The Green Mile. King mentions the character that’s the trope in that source novel in On Writing:

…not long after I began The Green Mile and realized my main character was an innocent man likely to be executed for the crime of another, I decided to give him the initials J.C., after the most famous innocent man of all time. … Thus death-row inmate John Bowes became John Coffey.

Stephen King, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft, 2000.

Here King is invoking the trope indirectly, unconsciously rather than consciously, since some have posited that Jesus Christ is the original manifestation of this trope, and because “Coffey” had to be the C-word you chose to name your black character, Steve? Really?

But almost twenty years before that, we have Dick Hallorann in The Shining. I mentioned before that while all three (white) members of the Torrance family were extensively developed as human beings, Dick felt like a plot device. King explicitly takes up Dick’s point of view at the beginning of the final section of the book, and we’re with him for quite awhile along his arduous journey to drive to the Overlook through a snowstorm (and to encounter a white woman on the plane prior to that who’s very conscious of America’s deep-state shadow and very nice to him), and yet nowhere was I really made to feel that Dick Hallorann has a legitimate personal or emotional reason to risk his life to save a little white boy he’d talked to once for all of half an hour. (That Danny has the strongest shining ability he’s ever encountered and Dick somehow feels the need to preserve this would be based more on concept than character.) Not only risk his life, but face down a force so malevolent as to be able to project into his mind racist slur-filled rants that I will not excerpt here. I’m tempted to say these slurs were “appalling”; all slurs should be appalling inherently, but if you take a regular appalling slur and multiply it by ten, then just mathematically it should be ten times more appalling. King multiplies it by ten at least.

Also, Dick Hallorann verbally sacrifices his own family in order to save Danny when he has to lie and tell his boss, Queems, that his son was shot in order to justify taking off work:

“Hunting accident?”

“No, sir,” Hallorann said, and let his voice drop to a lower, huskier note. “Jana, she’s been livin with this truck driver. A white man. He shot my boy. He’s in a hospital in Denver, Colorado. Critical condition.”

That Hallorann says he has to leave for his son creates an implication that Danny is his figurative son. Hallorann is thus still being defined as a character by Danny rather than himself–we don’t even know if anything he says to Queems is based in fact.

One might argue that since the (appalling) racist invective–rendered in ALL CAPS–is being hurled at Hallorann by the ghost of the Overlook, that figures this racist invective as bad: the monster is doing it, which means it’s a monstrous/evil thing to do, which means King is sending a message that expressing racism through such virulent slurs is bad, so don’t do it. I basically argued before that the Overlook ghost represents the worst of our country’s history, which would make its invective here in line with King’s idea of truth-telling about our country’s ugly history.

But there’s a significant distinction in the way the Overlook ghost makes very individualized character-tailored seductions and threats against Jack (like putting Jack’s former student George Hatfield in 217’s bathtub) while exclusively interfacing with Hallorann as an individual who is defined only by his race–saying things to Hallorann that would in theory be offensive to any black person, but saying things to Jack that are about Jack’s personality and history, things that could not be applied to anyone else. Maybe one could argue that this still makes the Overlook ghost racist instead of making King’s authorial depiction of it racist, but I’m not so sure. The sheer amount of racist invective that gets airtime undermines this emotionally if not logically. At the same time, it does effectively demonstrate words’ potential to be weaponized…just too effectively, is ultimately the problem.

Then there’s the fact that the title of the book derives from a racially loaded term that King was, according to Lisa Rogak’s biography, unaware of:

[King] based the title on a song by John Lennon and the Plastic Ono Band called “Instant Karma,” with a refrain that went “We all shine on.” But he had to change the title to The Shining after the publisher said that shine was a negative term for African-American.

Rogak, Lisa. Haunted Heart (p. 84). St. Martin’s Publishing Group.

The way Rogak says “the publisher said” is a little weird, as though this connotation doesn’t really exist beyond the publisher’s claim that it does… There’s also an interesting moment in the biography when Rogak depicts King as the marginalized outcast in the publishing world due to his foundation in genre:

In the winter of 1976, Steve went to a publishing party in New York where he met an agent who primarily worked with fantasy and horror writers. Kirby McCauley, who had recently moved to New York from the Midwest, had read only one of King’s two books when they met, Salem’s Lot, but after chatting with Steve discovered they shared many of the same interests in obscure authors from the 1940s and ‘50s. … McCauley saw out of the corner of his eye that most of the other writers were queuing up to talk with author James Baldwin, who was holding court in a corner of the room. But Steve was happy to stay with McCauley, and he was impressed when the agent mentioned some of his other clients, including Frank Herbert, Piers Anthony, Robert Silverberg, and Peter Straub.

Rogak, Lisa. Haunted Heart (p. 81). St. Martin’s Publishing Group.

In other words, Steve was impressed with the roster of White Man, White Man, White Man, and White Man… And there’s some kind of implication that the establishment, ignorant of King’s value at this point, is ignorant in the way it’s fawning over (black man) James Baldwin.

Anyway, another tidbit reinforcing Hallorann’s lack of development is one of the few memories we get from Hallorann of his past. (We know his brother died when Hallorann was in the army, but this is used only as a device to explain–to Danny specifically–how the shining works.) In the novel’s climax, just after the hotel has exploded, Hallorann looks back and sees what one can only assume is the Overlook ghost dispersing in a black cloud that reminds him of when he and his brother were kids and blew up “a huge nest of ground wasps” with a “[N-word]chaser…saved all the way from the Fourth of July.” Which is an interesting linkage of our most patriotic holiday’s explosive symbolism of our (explosive) history with that slur so casually dropped by a black person…in a way that definitely does not seem would be so casually used or thought by an actual black person. That term is slang for a firework that (racist) white people would use. Yet this slang is put not even just in the mouth, but the head of a black person, as we’re in Hallorann’s close-third-person point of view for this passage. Putting it in the thoughts of a black person in this way creates an implication that it’s patently not a racist term, that it’s a term Hallorann himself is completely fine with; he thinks it as breezily as he would think a word as mundane as “bread.” But if the bombs that gave us the freedom that we so patently celebrate and venerate, both in the fireworks whose fuses we light on July Fourth every year and in our National Anthem (not to mention the funding of our military-industrial complex), are replicated in another layer of symbolism here as “[N-word]chasers,” that’s sending some kind of message about the purpose of these venerated bombs to be targeting a certain group, or being designed to “chase” them away, which is kind of ironic (but hardly uncharacteristic of our country’s patriotic rhetoric), considering that this demographic was specifically brought here in the first place by force against their will. (It might have been more verbally logical to imply the fireworks were bombs chasing away Native Americans, since that’s the demographic white Americans actually had to chase away.)

My original point about this passage concerning Hallorann’s memory is that the whole wasp thing has already been extensively developed through Jack’s reflections and experiences. Jack is thus someone who as a character it would make sense for him to associate something he sees with wasps. It’s like a Rorschach blot. Wasps characterize Jack, so to use them here with Hallorann is to apply Jack’s characterization/experience to him in a way that problematically blots out Hallorann’s point of view/individuality. Hallorann should see something else, his own personal Rorschach association, but he just sees what the white man saw. Again, there could be a potential white apologist reading here: it’s the Overlook ghost Hallorann is mentally making this linkage to wasps about, so you might argue the wasps are the Overlook’s thing, not Jack’s, so it’s not discriminatory to have Hallorann associate wasps with it. The fact that the wasp passages are directly in the different characters’ points of view makes it feel more problematic, though again a big part of the Overlook ghost’s insidiousness is shown to be its ability to penetrate a person’s thoughts…and that it might be making both Jack and Hallorann think about wasps is potentially even creating a type of theoretical equality between them. But even if the white apologist defense might hold up logically, Hallorann still feels subsumed into the white man’s perspective.

I doubt King was necessarily consciously aware of Hallorann’s lack of character development, especially at this point, in the 70s, but I can almost feel him trying to mitigate the problematic nature of Hallorann’s lack of development by making him…magical. Magical by sharing Danny’s telepathic ability (the one accidentally named after a racial slur against Hallorann’s racial demographic), and magical in the heroic role he plays in saving Danny and Wendy (an extension of his original magical ability). Heroic, but inhuman.

Danny also has magical, technically inhuman abilities, and he sees things generally associated with the hotel rather than his personal life, but this is largely because he’s still a child, and his love for his father is developed in a way that makes him feel like a human with a magical ability rather than nothing but a cipher for the magical ability. So it’s important to note that it’s not just Hallorann’s magical abilities that make his character problematic, it’s that his magical abilities and his desire to help Danny are the only things that characterize him.

After watching Kubrick’s adaptation, I’m tempted to say that King’s version is less racist in letting Hallorann not only survive but be the critical figure who literally carries Wendy and Danny out of the hotel as it’s exploding. In the film, Hallorann is also critical: he brings the snow plow that enables Wendy and Danny to flee the hotel. He also does this in the book, but then instead of surviving to be a hero, he is almost immediately axed in the chest by Jack as soon as he enters the hotel, fulfilling another racist trope of the black man in the horror movie being first to die.

Another adjustment Kubrick makes concerns the use of the N-word: instead of having the Overlook ghost scream racist invective in Hallorann’s head, its sentiment is quietly subdued–yet no less sinister–as it issues from the mouth of Grady, the former caretaker, in that critical scene where Jack shifts his loyalties from his family to the hotel (and Kubrick shifts the setting from the pantry to the (red) bathroom). This exchange shocked me almost as much as the book’s all-caps invective–in fact seemed almost an homage to it. The N-word is used three times in a row (separated only by the article “a”) as Grady uses it to specify the “outside party” Danny is bringing to the hotel, Jack then repeats it back to him, and Grady says it back, this time adding “cook” (thereby extending Hallorann’s characterization to his job in addition to his race). The exchange pretty closely mirrors that in the book except for adding an extra N-word, in the film replacing where in the book Jack actually identified Hallorann by (last) name. This excessiveness almost seems like it’s calling attention to the word’s evil itself, with the hotel’s evil embodied in Grady and his use of this slur infecting Jack, but that feels like another white apologist explanation to me, as does the reading that Jack’s axing Hallorann in the film is symbolic of the callousness of white America’s crimes. It is symbolic of that, but likely more unconsciously than consciously…

Unsurprisingly, considering that the characterization of the white Torrances is less developed in the film than in the novel, Hallorann’s film characterization is no more developed than in the source material either. The most significant hint of Hallorann’s personal life we get in the film is a glimpse of his bedroom when he’s watching the news and Danny shine-messages him. What do we see in there to give us an idea of Hallorann as an individual? (The news he’s watching is a pure plot device warning about the bad weather he’s about to have to navigate, so no characterization there.) He has two framed images on his walls–both of black women with afros, one topless, the other fully nude. These feel like images that primarily highlight his identity via categories: his blackness, and his maleness, kind of like how Grady defines him by the category of his job. Kubrick generally seems more interested in categories than character, and again I can foresee a white apologist counterargument of these images being a symbol of/calling attention to the stereotypes emblematic of the blaxploitation film genre, but I can’t really see what these images are doing to counteract those stereotypes.

I recently read If It Bleeds, King’s latest book (I had to since I got it for my mother for Mother’s Day), and it seemed like King was trying even harder to be NOT RACIST in ways that are still revealing a lack of awareness of his own unconscious racism and white privilege. He is still, in 2020, using the N-word, and his publisher is allowing it. The apparent progress would be that instead of it being used as racial invective, as a slur hurled against a black character in an effort to intimidate and belittle them, it’s used by a black character to explicate/express the historical racial injustices his black grandfather suffered as proprietor of a speakeasy he dubbed “The Black Owl,” the same title this black character plans to use for his own book on the subject. The sentence the N-word is invoked in is the final one in a lengthy chunk of dialog, and really, I thought, the sentence with it is utterly unnecessary to get the point across, feels excessive in a way that seems like he’s using it just for the sake of using it. It feels like the white author using it, not the black character. The black character is reduced to a device, a mouthpiece–a mask, if you will–through/from behind which the white author can safely use the word under cover of context.

Say Their Name

The converse of not using the N-word outright–if you’re not part of the demographic that’s been oppressed by its usage–would seem to be the articulation promoted by the “Say Their Name” mantra that’s arisen in response to our country’s ongoing race-related hate crimes. Rayshard Brooks. George Floyd. Breonna Taylor. Ahmaud Arbery.

The idea of the importance and power of naming is something used as an effective narrative device in Bryan Washington’s recent story collection Lot, set in the city of Houston, where Washington, an alum of the University of Houston, lives (and from which he’s been writing dispatches about the city’s protests and Floyd’s visitation for The New Yorker). Several but not all of the stories in Lot are about the same character, whom we see grow up (or “come of age” as the copy says) over the course of the book. This first-person narrator, whose mother is black while his father is Latino, remains nameless until the final story. The very naming of his character (Nicolás) represents his emotional breakthrough of finally being able to trust someone else enough to try an intimate (gay!) relationship instead of running from his feelings so he won’t eventually get hurt, as we’ve seen him do in the stories leading up to this one. The dropping of the name (in dialog by the character he’s finally trusting) feels visceral to the reader after the consistent withholding of it; the name has been withheld because the character has been withheld from himself. Name is identity. Its use in the climax of the collection’s climactic story is a way to show that the character is coming to terms with who he really is. It was powerful.

In the comedy special Douglas, Hannah Gadsby makes a recurring theme of “white men naming things” as part of a vendetta against that which she names the “patriarchy.” I started noticing more how often King uses proper Brand Names, a tendency that seems to mostly come from a desire for verisimilitude and a general love of pop culture, but often feels like he’s cutting deals on the side for product placement. Whether he is or not, his verisimilitude is usually a boon for whoever he’s mentioning in a way that’s unconsciously perpetuating a patriarchal corporate system much like the way he unconsciously perpetuates implicit racism. White men naming things, mindlessly…

In fiction, naming specific places–using proper street names, neighborhood names and the like–provides a more convincing sense of setting (and often poetry), just as naming those individuals who have been murdered hopefully helps keep them from fading into statistics. A name signifies an individual identity, a distinct existence. In Lot, Washington constantly names places as a way of rendering the setting of the city I live in; I was excited to recognize many, and ashamed of how many I didn’t. Washington also often utilizes names as a way to form lists that efficiently create a sense of passing time and/or accumulation, as in this passage:

But it didn’t stop the two of us. We touched in the park on Rusk. By the dumpsters on Lamar. At the pharmacy on Woodleigh and the benches behind it.

Bryan Washington, “Lockwood,” Lot, 2019.

My initial reaction to this passage was probably as a Houstonian: to be excited to recognize the names. My second was as a creative writer: that neither “the dumpsters on Lamar” nor “the pharmacy on Woodleigh” were actually very specific location descriptors, since the roads mentioned would have lots of dumpsters and pharmacies on them. This isn’t really a weak point, though, since there’s just one pharmacy on Woodleigh for the character…that’s how he thinks of it. But I was reminded of my initial impulse to judge that element of the style of Washington’s writing–too many names, and lazily used, leaned on like crutches!–when someone I’d told I was reading the book said someone else they knew hadn’t liked it, because Washington had gotten the names of some places in Houston wrong. And he could at least go to the trouble to get the names right!

But Washington is rendering a different landscape, one that the above (presumably white) person’s reaction to his use of names seems evidence of their inability to see. He’s rendering the landscape White (and Straight) America hasn’t seen, the one that it does, in theory, see now, via the flashpoint of George Floyd’s murder. Washington uses understatement as a way to render his protagonist’s pain and inability to face that pain, creating a sense of a character at a distance from himself. Washington also frequently kept me, a white reader, at a distance with uncontextualized slang, inserting little hurdles in the language itself, in the use of the names that reflect a different experience than the mainstream (i.e., white) mode of expression that defines the patriarchy that defines everything else. And in making me feel that distance, Washington invited me in.

-SCR

A Shining History: Unmasking America’s Shadow Self (Part I)

“I think this place forms an index of the whole post–World War II American character. That sounds like an inflated claim, stated so baldly … I know it does … but it’s all here, Al!”

Stephen King. “The Shining.” iBooks.

Oh, but I trip on the truth when I walk that wire
When you wear a mask, always sound like a liar

Tune-Yards, “Find a New Way

As I mentioned in my previous post, Stanley Kubrick’s film adaption of Stephen King’s third novel, The Shining, omitted not just Jack Torrance’s extensively developed personal history, but the history of the Overlook Hotel (whose real-life counterpart happens to be named the Stanley). For me, this omission stripped the narrative of a significant source of its power. The development of the Overlook’s history in the novel becomes a commentary on American capitalism and culture–more specifically at a rottenness at the core of these things–that I would say pushes the novel into literary territory (even if Kubrick apparently said that “[t]he novel is by no means a serious literary work”).

Or put another way, I’m now reading The Shining through my American flag sunglasses (and the film adaptation, again).

The rotten heart–or put another way, the shadowy underbelly–of these United States of America is a recurring theme in King’s work, and unsurprisingly so in light of his impoverished upbringing. King may be a cis white male, but he did not grow up particularly privileged, and he has an intimacy with this country’s systematic exploitation of its underclass that many literary writers only know conceptually via expensive ivy-league educations. By this point in 2020, King may not have been that intimate with it in decades, but at the point he was writing The Shining in the mid-70s, he had only just escaped the clutches of that capitalist quicksand that sucks so many under, and was still close enough to it to fear it might still.

All of which is to say that King’s commentary here, encompassing the capitalist v. communist dichotomy that defined our country’s post-WWII values and identity, feels less pretentious than that of some of his more “literary” counterparts. I know for some readers, King’s graphicness and violence can seem gratuitous and/or adolescent, but on the other hand, this adolescent mode could itself be a kind of commentary. As King’s biographer Lisa Rogak notes, his first published story, “Graveyard Shift,”

was about giant rats in an old factory basement and the men who were sent in to clean out the basement. He’d based it on the stories he’d heard from the July Fourth cleanup crew at Worumbo Mills.

Rogak, Lisa. Haunted Heart (p. 60). St. Martin’s Publishing Group. Kindle Edition.

If that story ends with these giant rats devouring a man (in a scene that at least in the version collected in Night Shift is not actually that graphic in comparison to the scene of rats devouring someone that got cut from ‘Salem’s Lot), and if that ending disgusts and appalls readers, well, that’s actually a fairly apt evocation of the disgust and horror one ought to feel at the prospect of being slowly eaten alive by a numbing life of manual labor, the sort of manual labor necessary to maintain the infrastructure of the basic lifestyle of American comfort and convenience that we’ve been conditioned to believe is a fundamental right, and that the coronavirus pandemic has perhaps forced us not to take so much for granted….

The commentary in The Shining seems to dig even deeper into the horror latent in this country’s history. (In certain ways it might make a good companion text for Howard Zinn’s A People’s History of the United States, though there are aspects of our country’s history the text seems to actively ignore that I plan to address in a future post.) The horror derived from the commentary here is developed largely around the theme of class, or more specifically, the American construction of class via capitalism (and largely in response to communism). And in light of the class theme, I guess I’m picking an ironic starting point for the discussion.

The Academic Angle

Ironic because academic jargon is frequently impenetrable to the point that it almost seems designed to be inaccessible–unless you’re of a certain class able to attain a certain education that costs a certain amount of money. “Academic” articles from scholarly journals are in large part only accessible to members of these educational institutions, electronically walled off in databases like Academic Search Complete and JSTOR (which the hacktivist Aaron Swartz was federally prosecuted for downloading articles from).

Fortunately, I teach at one of these educational institutions, so I have access.

Kubrick’s film adaptation’s commentary on class and capitalism is a subject that academic theorists have commented on in some detail. The essay here points out and agrees with the critical consensus that the movie is better than the book:

Indeed, as Jameson suggests, Kubrick’s adaptation, while it maintains elements necessary to cue the genre of the horror film, expands King’s work of popular entertainment into a thoroughly postmodern work of art.

Rob Giampietro, “Spaces and Storytelling in The Shining,” 2000

Indeed. Referenced here is the prominent academic literary and political theorist Fredric Jameson, a famous voice in academic circles for decades now for critiquing capitalism’s effect on mass culture. (Giampietro, though in general agreement with Jameson, does point out failures of his argument in ways that show the venerated Jameson is not accepted as infallible about lit and culture crit.) Giampietro notes how the characters of Jack and Wendy are “flattened” in the film adaptation from the developed versions they are in the book as a reflection of a postmodern tendency that

…suggest[s] a “flattened” human psyche, and these “depthless” characters bring with them a flattening on the film’s thematic and metaphysical levels: where King’s story is an epic of Good versus Evil, Kubrick’s film is more ambiguous.

Rob Giampietro, “Spaces and Storytelling in The Shining,” 2000

Though I did have to take some academic classes for my creative writing masters degree, I read primarily as a creative writer, and through that lens I find the developed versions of Jack and Wendy who actually feel human more compelling than these “depthless” versions that represent a larger/more general loss of humanity engendered by the controlling mechanisms of a late capitalist society–even if, intellectually, I might be in agreement with the sentiment expressed by the characters’ lack of humanity.

Pop culture critic and theorist Michael J. Blouin notes that critics have generally read the film as “about the corruption of the American dream at the hands of its own excesses,” quoting Valdine Clemens’ book on Gothic literature, The Return of the Repressed:

“…the Overlook on its lofty mountain peak not only represents the failure of the American Dream since World War II, but it also represents the failure of the original promise of the City on the Hill, the dream of America’s puritan forefathers.”

quoted in Michael J. Blouin, “The Long Dream of Hopeless Sorrow: The Failure of the Communist Myth in Kubrick’s The Shining,” Magistrale T. (eds) The Films of Stephen King. Palgrave Macmillan, New York (2008)

Blouin then goes on to offer a “radical rereading” suggesting that the film is not only condemning capitalism as so many have argued, but is also condemning Communism. This is interesting in light of Clemens’ quote above, which in essence links communism to puritanism in a way that recalls Arthur Miller’s classic play “The Crucible” (1953), that staple of required high-school reading written about the puritan witch hunts so early in our country’s history that Miller himself has said are representative of the Red Scare in the late 1940s:

But by 1950, when I began to think of writing about the hunt for Reds in America, I was motivated in some great part by the paralysis that had set in among many liberals who, despite their discomfort with the inquisitors’ violations of civil rights, were fearful, and with good reason, of being identified as covert Communists if they should protest too strongly.

… The Red hunt, led by the House Committee on Un-American Activities and by [Joseph] McCarthy, was becoming the dominating fixation of the American psyche.

…The Soviet plot was the hub of a great wheel of causation; the plot justified the crushing of all nuance, all the shadings that a realistic judgment of reality requires.

Arthur Miller, “Why I Wrote ‘The Crucible’,” October 14, 1996

I’ll come back to the idea that the origins of this country rest on a foundation of fear exacerbated by a manipulation of language.

Blouin positions a lot of his reading in relation to Fredric Jameson’s reading, quoting Jameson’s argument that Jack is “yearning for the certainties and satisfactions of a traditional class system.” Blouin claims in contrast that Jack actually wants “to join a larger social movement that dissolves the hierarchies that are already established from the moment Jack enters the Overlook.” Blouin argues that the Overlook tempts Jack to abandon his family with a “horrific fantasy” that parallels the “Communist myth,” which is comprised of two promises:

…according to Marx, to overthrow the bourgeois and to make goods ultimately accessible to all.

Michael J. Blouin, “The Long Dream of Hopeless Sorrow: The Failure of the Communist Myth in Kubrick’s The Shining

According to this reading, the trajectory of the film’s plot reveals the fantasy to be horrific by being false, false because the community of Overlook workers (Grady the caretaker, Lloyd the bartender, et. al) who are staging a collective “workers’ revolution” that they want to enlist Jack in is ultimately “striving toward power and wealth more than Marx’s ideal community.” The Overlook’s promises of a collective community are false, not true; they are ultimately only manipulations, hollow rhetoric, for the ulterior motive of getting to Danny. According to Blouin, ultimately attempting to reach this “capitalist dream” of “power and wealth” turned out to “characterize[] many ‘Marxist’ economies in the twentieth century.” Blouin is invoking a larger historical context in which Communist leaders were essentially implementing a system of hollow rhetoric–i.e., false promises, lies–to enrich themselves. Of course, it seems to me that false promises/manipulations made in the service of self-enrichment happens just as often under capitalism. It makes me think of the chicken-or-the-egg conundrum: are capitalism/communism as systems the problem, or are corrupt individuals manipulating these systems the problem? Are individuals controlling the system? Or is the system controlling the individuals? Or is it some complex/convoluted combination of both…

The Power of Rhetoric

So a vulnerability to corruption and a deployment of hollow rhetoric/false promises seem to be shared characteristics of these two systems that are, in theory, supposed to be antithetical to each other. It seems to me that King is not necessarily interested in offering a critique of the effectiveness (or lack thereof) of these systems per se, as he is interested in critiquing the exploitations of these systems by fallible power-hungry humans, and the means through which these exploitations occur: false promises. In this reading, the systems of capitalism and communism aren’t actually economic systems so much as systems of language/rhetoric/narrative: both systems are perpetuated through mythical–i.e., false–promises, and are different versions of the same means to the same end, that end being for an elite class to maintain control and rule over a majority. The different versions of the same means are in this case rhetorical constructions of theoretically opposed ideologies that embody opposing values: the dichotomy of capitalism v. communism offers us the dichotomy of the individual v. the collective.

My reading is that King’s version of The Shining critiques a shadow history of governance in America, that which is the ancestor of the mutation Trump now refers to as the “deep state.” The form of governance critiqued seems based on a belief that governance will be most effective in maintaining control if its true nature is disguised, masked, kept in the shadows. King’s critique, in my reading anyway, seems to show that this form of governance is kept in the shadows, or masked, in order to disguise that government policy is really motivated by protecting a capitalist bottom line rather than an interest in the well-being in the majority of its citizenry. This duplicitous masking is critiqued as, in a word, evil. In more words, this shadow form of governance is critiqued as being self-destructive, carrying the seeds of destruction within itself. King seems to me to be saying that the influence of this shadow government on our history and present situation needs to be unmasked. Which is to say, discussed.

So buckle up.

While this reading of mine does have textual evidence to support it, how I’ve interpreted this textual evidence is of course influenced by my personal perspective(s) and probably says as much about me as it does about King. I teach rhetoric-and-composition classes in addition to creative-writing classes, and for them I use subject matter I have some personal interest in for the college students to read and write about: pop culture for the first-semester section (analytical writing) and political conspiracy theories for the second-semester section (argumentative writing). I emphasize to the students that I’m not an “expert” on either of these topics (which in this context would mean an academic researcher/scholar), but rather on making experts’ research accessible to non-experts.

At any rate, it’s not surprising that connections between King’s subject matter and the subject matter in my classes are constantly jumping out at me. King increasingly strikes me as embodying a great nexus between pop culture and politics, with The Shining illustrative of not just the independent influence of these two elements on our country, but how their inextricability from each other has specifically influenced America’s history.

The use of “rhetoric” is ultimately what I’m teaching via the themes of pop culture and politics, and as a teacher of rhetoric, it strikes me as interesting that one of the foundational pieces of rhetoric that the ethos of our country is based on is “all men are created equal,” and yet it seems that in theory, the system of communism with its stated goals of abolishing the class system is more in line with this tenet of equality than a capitalist system in which we’re all rendered from before the moment of our births as patently unequal as the balances in our respective bank accounts. According to Blouin at least, quoting Edgar Allan Poe’s poem “Dreams”:

…though the “cold reality” of capitalism may seem “hopeless,” the dreams it provides are a way to keep moving forward, to stay sane in the midst of crisis.

Michael J. Blouin, “The Long Dream of Hopeless Sorrow: The Failure of the Communist Myth in Kubrick’s The Shining

So capitalism offers a way to stay sane in a crisis, though the crisis was created/exacerbated by/is the system of capitalism itself… But implicit in Blouin’s point is that the capitalist system enables (in fact is necessarily predicated upon) “dreams” that are largely unrealistic–the existence of possibility, however unlikely, that one could become wildly rich or at least more successful than one is currently–and such dreams of greatness patently can’t exist in a system where everyone is actually supposed to be completely equal, because “greatness” is inherently predicated on being better than others. (Of course it’s worth nothing that King’s own personal arc from rags to riches through a mixture of talent and hard work is a quintessential version of the American dream that might provide hope to a lot of writers toiling in poverty…which could also be a good or a bad thing, depending on your (political) perspective…)

That these dreams should sustain our sanity would seem to suggest that fundamentally, as people, we don’t actually want to be equal at all. We’re living in a society where success is inherently defined as being better off than someone else. The operating idea would then seem to be that we’re all equal in that we’re all striving to be better off than everyone else; that is, we’re all equally striving to be unequal…which would then seem to mean that the entire system we’re operating under is based on faulty logic?

George Costanza as the Joker. (From here.)

As Blouin has that Kubrick has it, the Communist system is based on not just faulty but horrific logic, in that this system’s blanket equality necessarily erases the defining distinctions of both individual and family (this system’s devaluation of the latter is covered by prominent communist and philosopher Friedrich Engels in his The Origin of the Family). The family is an inherently capitalist unit in its original design: man works while woman stays home to take care of children to ensure continuation of system. But of course by this point, we’ve evolved past a point of sheer utility in our institutions to attributing more significant meaning to the family unit, and hence we figure the Communist abolition of the family unit as horrific, as represented by Grady’s insistence on Jack’s killing his family:

There is no sympathy or need to preserve the family for economic stability; instead, it must be ruthlessly chopped into pieces and neatly stacked in one of the wings.

Michael J. Blouin, “The Long Dream of Hopeless Sorrow: The Failure of the Communist Myth in Kubrick’s The Shining

So through this lens, it perhaps starts to become more understandable just why the Red Scare was so scary to Americans. This reading about the Communist destruction of the family could apply equally to the novel, though Blouin points out some textual evidence that the film implicates the false promises of the Communist myth more directly than the novel seems to, namely in shifting the setting of the critical moment where Jack’s alliances shift from his family to the hotel being a red bathroom, and adding both the recurring curtain of red blood and the infamous “All work and no play” phrase, neither of which were in the book.

If Kubrick is emphasizing how scary Communism is, here’s what King’s version shows is actually so scary about how scary Communism is: the scarier we find its potential to destroy the very things that we’ve been conditioned to define our humanity (ironic as it is that the thing we should be most horrified of is true equality), the greater the potential we have to be manipulated and controlled through this fear that can then be exploited for ends more horrific than (or at least as horrific as) the thing that we were afraid of in the first place. And the means of that manipulation and control?

Rhetoric.

And what is rhetoric but a mask made of language?

The Shining reveals our shadow history to be a pattern of being governed through a predominantly rhetorical manipulation of our fears, and how America’s post-WWII identity was predicated on a manipulation of a fear of Communism specifically. The Shining is about the psychological fallout of this governance-by-fear on a collective national identity, what Arthur Miller calls the “dominating fixation of the American psyche” during the McCarthy era. The Shining‘s link to the post-WWII McCarthy era is thus linked, through Miller’s “The Crucible,” to the ideological frameworks in which the founding of this country was forged, the ghosts that haunt our collective national consciousness–which for a lot of us might have become unconscious by this point, which also seems part of King’s point: the importance of facing the unconscious shadow, as bringing it to conscious awareness might be the only way to dispel it.

Capitalist Crooks

King apparently thought his conceit in ‘Salem’s Lot applied directly to the dark aspects of our country that The Shining takes on, according to a quote of his I included in one of my previous ‘Salem’s Lot posts:

I wrote Salem’s Lot during the period when the Ervin committee was sitting. That was also the period when we first learned of the Ellsberg break-in, the White House tapes, the shadowy, ominous connection between the CIA and Gordon Liddy, the news of enemies’ lists, of tax audits on antiwar protestors and other fearful intelligence… [T]he unspeakable obscenity in ‘Salem’s Lot has to do with my own disillusionment and consequent fear for the future. The secret room in ‘Salem’s Lot is paranoia, the prevailing spirit of [those] years. It’s a book about vampires; it’s also a book about all those silent houses, all those drawn shades, all those people who are no longer what they seem.

TEACHING STEPHEN KING BY ALISSA BURGER (2016), P. 14

It’s funny that these aspects of our country’s history are something I’m fascinated by and even construct part of a writing course I teach around, and thus am aware of, but it didn’t occur to me how the conceit of ‘Salem’s Lot was exploring them until I read this quote. I definitely thought of them without being prompted when I was reading The Shining.

The history of the Overlook is a prominent element of the narrative from the very first chapter, with its manager, the “officious little prick” Ullman, spouting off about its supposedly more savory aspects during Jack’s job interview:

“Vanderbilts have stayed here, and Rockefellers, and Astors, and Du Ponts. Four Presidents have stayed in the Presidential Suite. Wilson, Harding, Roosevelt, and Nixon.”

“I wouldn’t be too proud of Harding and Nixon,” Jack murmured.

Ullman frowned but went on regardless. “It proved too much for Mr. Watson, and he sold the hotel in 1915. It was sold again in 1922, in 1929, in 1936. It stood vacant until the end of World War II, when it was purchased and completely renovated by Horace Derwent, millionaire inventor, pilot, film producer, and entrepreneur.”

“I know the name,” Jack said.

Derwent basically turns out to be the critical figure in the Overlook’s history in many ways. Ullman goes on to note that Derwent was personally responsible for having the roque court installed, which becomes extremely relevant in light of the fact that the roque mallet is later Jack’s potential murder weapon–the one the hotel directly supplies him with via Grady. It’s also interesting that roque is the “British forebear” of croquet, as though Derwent has a hint of aristocracy about him rather than having pulled himself up by the good ole fabled bootstraps of American capitalism (though Ullman also notes Derwent was taught the game by his “social secretary”).

The next time Derwent comes up is when Ullman waxes more poetic about him on Closing Day when the whole Torrance family is there, and here there’s another England link:

Fashioned to look like London gas lamps, the bulbs were masked behind cloudy, cream-hued glass that was bound with crisscrossing iron strips.

“I like those very much,” [Wendy] said.

Ullman nodded, pleased. “Mr. Derwent had those installed throughout the Hotel after the war—number Two, I mean. In fact most—although not all—of the third-floor decorating scheme was his idea. This is 300, the Presidential Suite.”

At this point, basically the apex of the Overlook’s glory, Ullman dramatically sweeps open the Presidential Suite’s drapes:

The sitting room’s wide western exposure made them all gasp, which had probably been Ullman’s intention. He smiled. “Quite a view, isn’t it?”

“It sure is,” Jack said.

The view of the beautiful mountains is then described in some detail, which is a symbol reinforcing the figurative view of history the Overlook offers; the beautiful view through this most magnificent suite’s windows contrasts starkly with the supplementary information about the Overlook Jack will finds in the dark dank basement. This hotel represents a Newtonian conundrum: Ullman has designated the Overlook the single most beautiful spot in the country, precisely because of its perch in the Rocky Mountains. But as the narrative arc of the book will go on to show, the isolation necessarily connected to the beauty of this perch can flip the most beautiful spot in America to precisely its opposite–the most horrifying, which even the hotel’s biggest champion, Ullman, begins to foreshadow by describing to Jack how cut off from the rest of the world the hotel is rendered in the dead of winter (so to speak). This means, essentially, that the beauty and isolation of the hotel correlate directly so that the more beautiful the hotel is, the more dangerous it has the potential to be (which is the figurative Newtonian aspect).

What I’m figuring as this “Newtonian aspect” is really the shadow aspect, what lies beneath the surface facade–any great, triumphant story–like that of the Overlook, as told by Ullman, which basically represents the skewed account of American history in most high-school history books–probably hinges on some omitted/ignored aspect, which I was reminded of in a recent article about “mutual aid” during the Covid crisis:

There’s a certain kind of news story that is presented as heartwarming but actually evinces the ravages of American inequality under capitalism: the account of an eighth grader who raised money to eliminate his classmates’ lunch debt, or the report on a FedEx employee who walked twelve miles to and from work each day until her co-workers took up a collection to buy her a car. We can be so moved by the way people come together to overcome hardship that we lose sight of the fact that many of these hardships should not exist at all. 

Jia Tolentino, “What Mutual Aid Can Do During a Pandemic,” May 11, 2020

The Overlook’s basement, that shadowy corollary to the grand views afforded from the Presidential Suite, is actually the next place Derwent comes up again. That this scrapbook is a deliberate malignant manifestation somehow orchestrated by the Overlook itself seems evidenced by the vision Danny has in a self-induced trance at the doctor’s office, seeing Jack find the scrapbook before he actually does in what amounts to a sequence that should have very scary music playing during it because of its context: in Danny’s creepy vision. This scrapbook is apparently a successful gambit on the Overlook’s part, since it makes Jack feel like:

…before today he had never really understood the breadth of his responsibility to the Overlook. It was almost like having a responsibility to history.

The fact that the scrapbook supplements Ullman’s one-sided savory aspects about the Overlook with a lot of unsavory ones seems to reinforce this feeling of Jack’s. Notably, the very first thing Jack finds in the scrapbook is an invitation:

It looked almost as though you could step right into it, an Overlook Hotel that had existed thirty years ago.

Horace M. Derwent Requests
The Pleasure of Your Company
At a Masked Ball to Celebrate
The Grand Opening of

THE OVERLOOK HOTEL

Dinner Will Be Served At 8 P.M.
Unmasking And Dancing At Midnight

August 29, 1945

RSVP

Of course, later Jack will step right into this party, so this invitation is foreshadowing a significant plot development…a plot development that reinforces the thematic importance of the date of the Overlook’s grand opening (notably not its original opening, but its opening under Derwent)–1945. More specifically, less than a week before the official end of World War II. The text’s emphasis on this date is evidence that I would argue refutes a major reason the aforementioned academic Fredric Jameson characterizes the novel version as “mediocre”:

Yet at this level the genre does not yet transmit a coherent ideological message, as Stephen King’s mediocre original testifies: Kubrick’s adaptation, indeed, transforms this vague and global domination by all the random voices of American history into a specific and articulated historical commentary, as we shall see shortly.

Fredric Jameson, “Historicism in ‘The Shining‘” (1981)

I’d argue the pattern of history presented in the novel is not “vague” and that the historical voices it presents are hardly “random.” The ball at which the climactic unmasking will occur–has been occurring over and over in its ghostly fashion–is a very specific historical point, the significance of which is commented on directly:

The war was over, or almost over. The future lay ahead, clean and shining. America was the colossus of the world and at last she knew it and accepted it.

And later, at midnight, Derwent himself crying: “Unmask! Unmask!” The masks coming off and …

(The Red Death held sway over all!)

He frowned. What left field had that come out of? That was Poe, the Great American Hack. And surely the Overlook—this shining, glowing Overlook on the invitation he held in his hands—was the furthest cry from E. A. Poe imaginable.

Sure it is, Jack.

This passage describes America’s postwar future as “shining,” linking it directly to the titular concept, and indirectly to the idea of shadows/surfaces. Here we’re also seeing something King’s done before–directly integrating one of his epigraphs into the text. The Shining actually doesn’t have multiple epigraphs for all the different parts like a lot of King’s novels do, which lends this particular epigraph more weight. Poe seems an appropriate author for the context, being one of the early major American writers and one who used horror/the gothic as commentary (not to mention one who was also a drunk in the classic white American male writer mode). The idea of masks/unmasking is developed into a fairly extensive motif throughout King’s text, and it originates in the narrative with this party, the grand opening of Derwent’s Overlook. This party basically directly correlates Derwent to Prince Prospero from “The Masque of the Red Death,” the 1842 short story from which the Poe epigraph is taken, because in that story Prince Prospero also throws a grand party, one that spans seven ballrooms. Since he throws it for a select group of rich people to isolate themselves while a (seemingly Ebola-like) plague rages outside killing all the poor people off, this is a story that’s attained new resonance during the current coronavirus pandemic, which is changing the meaning of a lot of things, including the connotations of masks in general, once a sinister signifier of a criminal with something to hide, now a banner of protection that signifies you’re doing your part for both yourself and others to preserve the American way of life:

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But at the time The Shining was published in the 70s, the cultural resonance would have rendered the significance of Poe’s plague figurative rather than literal, representative of the wealthy and powerful preserving their own interests while leaving the poor majority to fend for themselves. Exactly how the wealthy during this period were figuratively isolating themselves in a castle was (and is) connected inextricably to both economic and governmental systems.

At that time, the corruption and rot at the heart of the American government was becoming increasingly apparent via the Nixon presidency, as King pointed out in his quote about ‘Salem’s Lot, and which Jack himself comments on directly when Ullman tries to cite Nixon as a check mark in the column for the positive (or shining) side of the Overlook’s history. Nixon, along with the other U.S. Presidents who have stayed at the Overlook and symbolized by the whole idea of the Presidential Suite, is a link the text offers between the Overlook’s history and the country’s history in general, and Nixon specifically is a link between the overt and covert facets of this country’s government, which is what the Watergate scandal essentially revealed–a President ordering a government spy to do illegal shit. This scandal, and the resulting impeachment and Presidential resignation, was potentially a collective national trauma on the scale of the Kennedy assassination (which we saw King explore the fallout of in Carrie), and occurred just over a decade later. Nixon resigned on August 9, 1974. According to Lisa Rogak’s biography of King, the King family, flush with the money from the Carrie movie rights and a multibook contract, moved from Maine to Boulder, Colorado in August of 1974.

This means the country was going through a significant, essentially unprecedented transition at the same time King was going through a significant, essentially unprecedented personal one. (Which kind of feels like me getting married during the coronavirus pandemic….) King was moving away from the state where he’d lived his entire life and which would become a defining element of his oeuvre. Colorado was in the same country as Maine but might as well have been an alien land (though the climate transition must have felt less jarring than, say, moving to Texas). Moving so many literal states away must have been significant, but it seems King was also moving figurative ones: for the first time in his life, he could write full-time, and shouldn’t have had to worry about crushing poverty the way he once had (though he still did anyway).

In this new alien land, King was casting about for ideas to fulfill his multibook contract. That the country’s fresh collective trauma would have influenced the development of these ideas doesn’t strike me as all that far-fetched. After all, King himself has commented on how he’s a writer “of the moment,” frequently more than he’d like to be. The whole Watergate thing seems like an essential element of The Shining‘s DNA, a book in which King traces that national mid-70s trauma to a particular origin point.

And that origin point would be: 1945, the dawn of post-WWII America. Via Horace Derwent’s 1945 Overlook takeover, the scrapbook reveals how the Overlook “forms an index of the whole post–World War II American character” in the different iterations it will undergo under this capitalist titan. It’s the nature of this “American character” that will ultimately culminate in Watergate (and not even really culminate there, but continue on…). The corollary created in the text is that Derwent is to WWII what the Overlook is to America: or, the Overlook post-Derwent’s 1945 takeover represents America post-WWII–and everything that’s wrong with it.

Through the Overlook’s unsavory aspects revealed in the scrapbook, we learn that at one point post-Derwent, the Overlook was run by mobsters whose illegal/illegitimate dealings are implied to be no less shady than Derwent’s legal business dealings. A parallel is thus created between the implicit brutality of the sanctioned system of American capitalism and the explicit brutality of gangsters engaging in blatantly illegal violence and coercion. The latter is implied to be the necessary counterpart/shadowy (Newtonian) underbelly of the former, both in the Overlook and in America(n history) itself, since that’s what the Overlook is symbolic of. In that light, the hotel’s fictionalized name is also notable, symbolically providing an overview of the dynamics underpinning American history–which is to necessarily “overlook” or ignore its own unsavory aspects.

This is the essence of the country’s figurative shadow under discussion–the dark side of our history, the bad things we’ve done that are too shameful to acknowledge (or put another way, the lies we’ve told and the reasons we’ve told them…). Jack’s arc is a microcosm of the Overlook’s, which is a microcosm of our country’s: a dream corrupted.

“Dirty Little Wars”

Connected to Dick Nixon’s crookedness being the culmination of America’s rotten post-WWII character, the ghosts concealed in the walls of the Overlook–and in the Presidential Suite itself, where it’s revealed a violent mob murder took place–could be read as government “spooks,” or agents of the government’s covert agencies, primarily the CIA, as King invoked in his aforementioned quote about ‘Salem’s Lot, and as he invokes in the text of The Shining much more directly than he does its predecessor when Dick Hallorann makes up a lie to explain to a stranger his reaction to Danny telepathically screaming in his head:

“I’ve got a steel plate in my head. From Korea. ….”

“It is the line soldier who ultimately pays for any foreign intervention,” the sharp-faced woman said grimly.

“…This country must swear off its dirty little wars. The CIA has been at the root of every dirty little war America has fought in this century. The CIA and dollar diplomacy.”

That this woman ends up having some “shine” to her, and that she and Hallorann bond in their brief but intensely turbulent time on the plane, would seem to raise the possibility that the woman is right about what she’s saying here and not just a crazy conspiracy theorist. At this time in the 1970s, the CIA was embroiled in a series of public scandals–involvement of former agents in the Watergate burglary not least among them–because evidence was coming to light about the “dirty little wars” this minor character is referring to. Her descriptor “little” would seem to distinguish these wars from the two “World Wars” of that century, and actually wouldn’t have happened until after the end of the second one–would have happened, actually, precisely because of developments that were a consequence of that second one. The dirtiness of these wars is part and parcel of the trajectory of the “post-WWII American character” that culminates in the disgrace and shame of Watergate–and that didn’t really culminate there, but has continued to evolve to give us the Trump Presidency, taking the intersection of pop culture and politics that began in the decades leading up to WWII to another level entirely….

The history of these “dirty little wars” originates with the American government’s increased use of “covert operations,” which can be traced back to…WWII. And these covert types of operations–practiced on domestic soil by the FBI and on foreign soil by the CIA–led to a pretty slippery ethical slope, as Watergate revealed. “Covert operations” are “political and psychological warfare,” and/or spying, and initially came to be practiced by the CIA in the 1950s, according to Tim Weiner’s Legacy of Ashes: The History of the CIA (2006). Largely based on CIA documents declassified decades after their origin, this book describes all of the CIA’s “dirty little wars” that the “sharp-faced woman” (never named otherwise) is referring to.

So why, exactly, are they “dirty”?

In the novel the sharp-faced woman on the plane doesn’t specify, but they’re pretty much dirty both in the means they employ and for the end goal the means are designed to attain. The end goal of a series of covert campaigns the CIA undertook around the globe in the decades after WWII was to overthrow the established governments–democracies, in many cases–of foreign countries in order to install leaders the CIA appointed who would do what they wanted (the political aspect of the warfare, which is directly connected to business interests) while the means was to use deception and misinformation to weaken the targeted government’s resistance and/or stage a fake coup. The first such operation, Operation Ajax in Iran in 1953, was spearheaded by CIA agent Kermit Roosevelt (grandson of Theo and cousin to FDR), working in conjunction with the UK. Unsurprisingly (from a Houstonian’s perspective), the motivation for this first dirty little war is that dirty little substance that makes the world go round–oil. The democratically elected Iranian president, Mohammad Mossadegh, had plans to nationalize Iran’s oil industry, essentially kicking out private American and British petroleum companies (like BP, or British Petroleum), and that was going to be a major problem for these companies’ profits. Faking an uprising against Mossadegh by the people worked like a charm, to the point that the CIA did it again. And again. And again.

You can read more about this “campaign of coups” that spanned from the 50s to the 70s here; the last one I’ll mention is the CIA’s 1954 coup in Guatemala, Operation PBSUCCESS. As an example of how psychological warfare works, it’s based on duplicitousness/deception, which is in large part why it might be characterized as “dirty.” It’s effective because you don’t need to actually organize a coup to overthrow the government–you just have to make the leader of that government think that there’s a coup. The CIA pulled this off with democratically elected president of Guatemala, Jacobo Arbenz, who, in what you might start to recognize as a pattern, wanted to nationalize Guatemalan land that belonged to an American corporation, the United Fruit Company. (The effect the essential invasion of this foreign company had on the country of Guatemala and on other parts of South America serves as the backdrop for part of Gabriel Garcia Marquez’s classic novel One Hundred Years of Solitude.) This war was waged on foreign and domestic fronts: not only did the CIA more or less drive Arbenz insane and create unrest across Guatemala by broadcasting misinformation on the radio that the rebel (American-backed) army was winning, at home in America the CIA spread propaganda convincing the populace that Arbenz represented a significant Communist threat. They won the war on Guatemalan soil not by having a bigger or more sophisticated army, but by tricking Arbenz and the Guatemalan people into thinking they had the bigger army. And they made the American people believe this dirty trick was actually a triumph of national security by portraying Arbenz as a threat to America rather than as a threat to one very specific American business.

This two-pronged “dirty little war” is significant because it represents a confluence/convergence of private and public interests–or rather, public interests being used as a rhetorical smokescreen for private interests. The convergence is further represented by the roles of the key players who waged it, specifically the Dulles brothers, both graduates of Princeton and George Washington University Law School: John Foster, secretary of state under Eisenhower in 1954, and Allen, head of the CIA. Before stepping into these critical governmental roles, both brothers worked at a law firm that brokered deals for the United Fruit Company. The implication is that government officials were using pretexts of protecting the public to protect their own business/financial interests, the “dollar diplomacy” King’s “sharp-faced woman” is referring to, which emerges as something of a pattern in our country’s history…having currently evolved into the present legal occupation of “lobbyist.”

Bernays and Banana Brains

For another rhetorical twist, the type of third-world exploitation exemplified by the United Fruit Company is where the term “banana republic” originates (originally coined by the fiction writer O. Henry near the dawn of the 20th century, apparently), and in that light it strikes me as a little…off-putting that there’s a popular clothing brand named Banana Republic. The original iteration of the name was meant to evoke a safari theme before Gap bought and re-branded it with a more “upscale” image–these days most frequently donned by lawyers and their aspirants–that seems to evoke the importance of rhetoric in masking the predominant but unacknowledged imperialism central to this country’s identity….

Gwen Stefani, “Hollaback Girl,” March 21, 2005

A central figure in the saga of the United Fruit Company was a man named Edward Bernays, who, as the “father of public relations,” I would argue is a critical figure in our country’s history in general. This is the man who essentially invented modern advertising. The BBC documentary The Century of the Self details how Bernays did so by exploiting a theory developed about human nature by his uncle, none other than Sigmund Freud, the inventor of psychoanalysis. (The Medium post here offers a helpful summary of the documentary.) Freud’s seemingly rudimentary but fundamental theory about human nature goes that humans are primarily motivated by two factors:

Fear.

Desire.

Terminator 2: Judgment Day (1991)

Understanding why people do things turns out to be information relevant to a range of career fields. Fiction writers, for instance, need to understand this to create realistic, sympathetic characters, as many craft books point out:

Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.

Kurt Vonnegut, Introduction to Bagombo Snuff Box: Uncollected Short Fiction (2000)

Aristotle rather startlingly claimed that a man is his desire. It is true that in fiction, in order to engage our attention and sympathy, the central character must want, and want intensely. / The thing that the character wants need not be violent or spectacular; it is the intensity of the wanting that counts. (40)

Janet Burroway, Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft (1982)

We yearn. We are the yearning creatures of this planet. There are superficial yearnings, and there are truly deep ones always pulsing beneath, but every second we yearn for something. And fiction, inescapably, is the art form of human yearning. / Yearning is always part of fictional character. In fact, one way to understand plot is that it represents the dynamics of desire. It’s the dynamics of desire that is at the heart of narrative and plot.

Robert Olen Butler, From Where You Dream: The Process of Writing Fiction (2005)

All of these quotes focus on the desire aspect; but the fiction writer Steve Almond acknowledges how fear is desire’s necessary counterpart:

Plot is the mechanism by which your protagonist is forced up against her deepest fears and/or desires.

Steve Almond, This Won’t Take But A Minute, Honey (2011)

I introduce Freud’s concept of the “twin engines of human motivation” to both my composition and creative-writing classes; it’s critical to studying rhetoric (how language persuades) in the former and character in the latter. I ask my students to think about why they do the things they do, pointing out that they’re probably in college because they want a job and/or are afraid of not having one and what that will mean. Freud’s main point, the one Bernays exploited to a degree of untold influence on the current landscape of our culture, is that humans are creatures governed/motivated by emotions rather than logic:

[Bernays] showed American corporations how they could make people want things they didn’t need by systematically linking mass produced goods to their unconscious desires.

From here.

Before Bernays, a car company would be more inclined to use logical appeals in its advertising: buy this vehicle because you need a way to get from point A to point B. Post-Bernays, such companies could tap into the more “primal” unconscious desires that are really motivating us–buy this vehicle because it will make you appear more sexually attractive/masculine/outdoorsy/classy–and they would sell more cars because of it. Logically, these emotional appeals might sound ridiculous, but the fact is they’re extremely effective. Bernays’ biggest “coup” is credited as overcoming the social taboo on women smoking in public by linking cigarettes to the women’s movement via branding them as “torches of freedom.” This is also why associating emotions with objects via T.S. Eliot’s concept of the “objective correlative” is effective in creative writing, as I noted King illustrated with his use of wasps’ nests and potatoes in The Shining.

The Sopranos, “Mayham,” 6.3 (March 26, 2006)

The theory would seem to have a range of applicability based on where Bernays peddled his services–to private companies for the purpose of selling products, and to the government for the purpose of selling wars. On United Fruit Company’s payroll in the 50s, Bernays helped design the “terror campaign” to intimidate Arbenz (psychologically terrorizing him with strategic misinformation), was critical in generating media coverage portraying him as a Communist menace, and bolstered the public image of the dictator Castillo Armas that the CIA installed in Arbenz’s place (reminiscent of Jennifer Egan’s story/chapter “Selling the General” from her 2011 Pulitzer-winning novel A Visit From the Goon Squad).

The “terror campaign” aspect is significant in light of the development of “terrorism” in the modern world, the role this “ism” would play in shifting American culture after September 11, 2001, and the unrest and instability generated in the countries and surrounding regions where the CIA orchestrated its “dirty little wars” that would last for decades–violence and unrest that continues to this day and is largely the reason there are caravans of migrants seeking asylum in our country currently.

We could look at this through a lens of an even broader historical context, all the way back to the country’s beginnings. America’s foundational documents have some…contradictions. A major one being that our Founding Fathers wanted to claim all men were created equal while building an economy on the backs of slaves that evolved into the systematic inequality that continues to this day despite slavery being nominally abolished. You might say wealth is still essentially “trickling down” from the original wealth that was generated from slave labor–though only through time, not social classes, which could be another thing the blood pouring around Kubrick’s Overlook’s elevator doors symbolizes….

King seems to be commenting more on the shadiness of the CIA’s using covert ops to support a capitalist bottom line rather than the shadiness of slavery being foundational to our economy, but both are connected by the duplicitous rhetoric innate to covert ops.

The economist and historian Antony Sutton was an academic whose research ties into the idea of governance via duplicity, a duplicity derived from something called the thesis/antithesis/synthesis triad in Hegelian philosophy:

In classical liberalism, the State is always subordinate to the individual. In Hegelian Statism, as we see in Naziism and Marxism, the State is supreme, and the individual exists only to serve the State.

Our two-party Republican-Democrat (= one Hegelian party, no one else welcome or allowed) system is a reflection of this Hegelianism. A small group – a very small group – by using Hegel, can manipulate, and to some extent, control society for its own purposes.

Progress in the Hegelian State is through contrived conflict: the clash of opposites makes for progress. If you can control the opposites, you dominate the nature of the outcome.

Antony Sutton, America’s Secret Establishment: An Introduction to the Order of Skull & Bones, (1983)

Some key words here are “contrived conflict.” AKA those “dirty little wars,” since the purpose this small group (the 1%) has in controlling society is to advance a capitalist bottom line. Sutton’s research shows that:

the conflicts of the Cold War were “not fought to restrain communism” but were organised in order “to generate multibillion-dollar armaments contracts”, since the United States, through financing the Soviet Union “directly or indirectly armed both sides in at least Korea and Vietnam”[3]

From here.

Sutton was doing this research from 1968-1973 as a fellow for Stanford University’s Hoover Institution on War, Revolution, and Peace, and he claims to have been forced out because they were unhappy with his conclusions. Perhaps this is unsurprising considering that part of his conclusions were that the American education system exists to dumb us down and make us more susceptible to the government-by-duplicity model. Sutton basically claimed we’re being trained to become “mindless zombies” to serve the state, but that we’re being trained to do so through a rhetoric that promotes our unique individualism, or in other words, a rhetoric expressing that we’re the exact opposite of what the rhetoric is designed to condition us to be…which is another iteration of Hegelian rhetoric’s thesis/antithesis/synthesis manipulation, achieving an outcome by deploying opposites against each other.

From here.
Fight Club, 1999

This mask-like nature of our country’s fundamental form of governance could be a potential progenitor of the CIA’s later “dirty”–i.e., covert–tactics. Instead of creating a government “of the people, by the people, for the people,” just use some sleights-of-hand to make the people think they have freedom. It almost seems in some ways that the Founding Fathers were operating under a Bernaysian dictate/mandate long before he actually brought Freud’s ideas to American soil, in that they created a form of government through which an elite ruling class (now known as the 1%) maintains control over the populace specifically through the illusion of not being in control (in an overtly oppressive authoritarian/totalitarian sense)–making the populace believe they exist in a so-called democracy where their vote and voice matter. In other words, democracy is essentially a mask made of words. Words like government “for the people,” when really the people are just cogs in a capitalist machine that keeps the wealth moving up toward the 1%. It makes me wonder if the right to “free speech” is really the right to lie, in that it essentially grants the freedom to say the complete opposite of what you mean….

Century of the Self argues that the cultivation of a consumerist/materialist society of the sort that cultivates a healthy bottom line for the 1% further placates the “masses” and makes them easier to control by giving them the illusion of freedom via individual expression via buying products, enslaving us with our own desires. This connects slavery to capitalism figuratively, but recent academic scholarship about just how integral literal slavery is to modern capitalism and our current economy has apparently shifted, as the article here outlines in discussing a new book by a historian of slavery:

Once slavery is positioned as the foundational institution of American capitalism, the country’s subsequent history can be depicted as an extension of this basic dynamic. This is what Walter Johnson does in his new book…

Johnson’s guiding concept is “racial capitalism”: racism as a technique for exploiting black people and for fomenting the hostility of working-class whites toward blacks, so as to enable white capitalists to extract value from everyone else.

Nicholas Lemann, “Is Capitalism Racist?” May 18, 2020.

Whether or not Johnson explicitly acknowledges it as such, he’s essentially describing a Hegelian dynamic: the intentional “fomenting” of a conflict between two sides–white workers and black workers–to benefit a third party, the 1% “white capitalists.”

To keep our economy going (for the 1%), desire and/or fear must be kindled and cultivated. Once you understand Freud’s formula (or rather Bernaysian/Hegelian manipulation of it), this isn’t all that difficult to do. It can be done quite simply with an image. If you’re driving in your car or sitting on your couch and see an image of a burger on a billboard or a television screen, then you very well might get an inclination to eat and end up eating a burger when you would not have otherwise. Of course, with increasing capitalist competition, if you encounter a bunch of different images of burgers, then the message the picture is sending might need to be refined to gain an edge over its competing images, and hence make more specific appeals to those primal unconscious urges:

(Please don’t go to Burger King now…)

Bernays understood the importance of image on multiple levels–the power of pictures to place an idea in the viewer’s mind, and how images and objects can be used to create certain impressions.

Rene Magritte’s “The Treachery of Images.”

Of course, as good writers know, images can also be created through words, a medium whose power to influence and deceive Bernays also understood well. “Public relations” is basically smoke and mirrors, a panoply of words and pictures obfuscating reality, and it seems to have permeated our culture on every level. In this society, it’s less important to be a certain way than it is to seem a certain way. This “seeming” is why we dress “professionally” for jobs and job interviews. It’s why we buy things. It’s why we vote for presidents. It’s why we support wars. It’s why I believe it really is important that I’m teaching college freshmen to analyze rhetoric. The language and images we’re bombarded with on a daily basis are shaping our fears and desires, and thus shaping our actions and lives, and thus shaping our country.

Superpower(s)

It’s almost like a superpower, one that could be used for good or evil, this power to persuade by pulling the levers of human emotion via language and image. The shadow history of our country is that these levers have been pulled with motives more or less precisely the opposite of the motives declared to the humans whose emotional levers are being pulled. The motives are capitalist–i.e., profit motive, bottom line–and our country’s emphasis on this motive has led to blood on our hands. The bloody murders that took place at the Overlook are symbolic of all of the blood this country was built on because of its capitalist system specifically–the blood that’s trickled down from the once legal slaves to the third-world laborers who are sewing our blue jeans in dilapidated sweatshops as we speak. The blood of empire.

Terminator 2: Judgment Day (1991)

Sutton’s research bears out a Hegelian arc of wars fomented for profit motive focusing on the Soviet Union specifically; during the Cold War everyone was constantly terrified they were about to be instantly incinerated by a Soviet Union nuke that had been made and sold to them by a western corporation. And that wasn’t an illusion, not a case of a fake war covert-coup style; in order for the money to change hands, the other side had weapons that might well have been used against us. Real war, real destruction, is incentivized by the capitalist profit motive. (WWII ended the Great Depression.) This basically means the capitalist profit motive bears the seeds of its own destruction from its conception–that it has the very real potential to destroy itself.

Because as Jimi Hendrix pointed out, “castles made of the sand fall into the sea, eventually.”

So if you figure the capitalist profit motive as evil in this scenario, which isn’t hard to do if you’re (or I’m) identifying it as the source of unnecessary war and death, that means that this evil–an evil specifically characterized by duplicitousness–is self-destructive. And this, this is the idea that King loves to the extent that it might even be designated a Kingian idea, which I say at this point based on how The Shining plays out and also on how The Stand plays out, since I’m reading the books a lot faster than I can write about them.

The Shining (and The Stand) more specifically play out the idea that using duplicitous rhetoric for evil purposes is self-destructive, and/or that duplicitous rhetoric must be inherently evil. The climax of the novel’s plot seems to hinge on Danny’s conception about lying and “false faces,” a label he appends to the Overlook’s ghosts that ties back to the mask motif–the masked revelers in the ballroom, the emergent 1%, whose masks symbolize the duplicitousness of their capitalist maneuvers facilitated by their networking which is facilitated by the institution of the Overlook itself:

“You’re a mask,” Danny said. “Just a false face. The only reason the hotel needs to use you is that you aren’t as dead as the others. But when it’s done with you, you won’t be anything at all. You don’t scare me.”

“I’ll scare you!” it howled. The mallet whistled fiercely down, smashing into the rug between Danny’s feet. Danny didn’t flinch. “You lied about me! You connived with her! You plotted against me! And you cheated! You copied that final exam!” The eyes glared out at him from beneath the furred brows. There was an expression of lunatic cunning in them. “I’ll find it, too. It’s down in the basement somewhere. I’ll find it. They promised me I could look all I want.” It raised the mallet again.

Here Jack is confusing his own writing with his own life, and he’s confusing the truly “conniving” party with the innocent one–the Overlook has convinced Jack that his family is conniving against him when really it’s the Overlook who’s conniving against him. The Overlook essentially used Hegelian rhetoric to do this–it accused someone else of doing the opposite of what that party was really doing, accused that party of doing the very thing the Overlook itself was doing itself as a means of distracting from the fact that it was doing it!

The way the hotel manipulates Jack (which is analyzed in more detail in my previous post) is principally duplicitous, the equivalent of psychological warfare: it does not attack him outright, is not overt about its diabolical nature, but covert–or put another way, it masks its true nature. It seduces him by making him think it wants him rather than Danny and manipulates his weaknesses in ways that he can’t see what it’s doing; when Danny confronts it as a “false face,” he specifically points out how it’s exploited Jack’s weakness for alcohol to do so. The way the hotel has apparently planted a scrapbook of newspaper articles in the basement as part of its means of manipulating Jack is reminiscent of the way the CIA distributed leaflets and literature to populations it wanted to encourage to support its coups. The Overlook uses deception as its primary weapon, rendering its tactics “dirty”–it doesn’t fight fair. The success of the Overlook’s dirty tactics with Jack in getting him to transfer his loyalty from his family to it would seem to imply that the adult demographic, weighed down with increasing emotional baggage as more time passes, is necessarily more susceptible to such duplicitous tactics–to manipulations of their unconscious fears and desires–than children, whose innocence and concurrent moral superiority will become an extended Kingian motif that we’ve seen developed through Mark in ‘Salem’s Lot and with Danny here. (Children’s susceptibility to to fun and colorful Bernaysian advertisements for sugary cereals notwithstanding.)

And so, the way to defeat the duplicitous monster is to articulate, quite explicitly it would seem, what it’s doing. Danny, the pure, innocent child, does not resort to any “dirty” covert tactics, but comes out of hiding to face the monster head on and to call it out for what it is. Danny’s overt up-front tactics defeat the monster’s covert ones. But then there’s the evil/duplicitousness-is-self-destructive element, since it’s not so much something Danny does that ultimately defeats the monster as something the monster doesn’t do, in time, at least–dump the boiler. (Though some of the other ghosts, including the mobsters, vanish when Danny calls them “false faces,” intimating that his method does have some power in and of itself.) The monster apparently gets so distracted with its covert machinations, and possibly with the proximate success of its goal, that it shoots itself in the foot by neglecting its fundamental responsibilities, the basic maintenance of the entity that it wanted Danny’s powers to enhance in the first place. This could be read as a rebuke of covert tactics/Hegelian rhetoric and a warning against their continued use: a message that they will inherently destroy the very thing they were designed to protect (i.e., America’s superpower status).

And the advent of the Trump administration might show us how prescient this potential warning is…next time.

-SCR

The Shining: Jack Torrance’s Breakdown

“I’m trying to help him find the difference between something real and something that was only a hallucination, that’s all.”

Excerpt From: Stephen King. “The Shining.” iBooks.

The Ghosts are Real

Considered King’s first masterpiece, The Shining (1977) is immensely more enjoyable of a read for me than ‘Salem’s Lot. Plot is integrated with character in The Shining in a way that seems infinitely more sophisticated than its immediate predecessor, some of my chief complaints about which were that its novelist-protagonist Ben Mears felt like a cardboard cutout, and that Ben’s writing, for all the emphasis it got, ultimately didn’t influence the plot that much.

Third time’s the charm. The Shining feels like King is splitting the difference between his first two novels, between the focused development of a primary character (Carrie) and the far-flung reaches of an ensemble cast (the Lot).

So is Jack Torrance The Shining‘s main character?

Fittingly enough, this question is directly related to the plot, or more specifically, the question that is the plot-driving engine: which member of the Torrance family does the Overlook really want? The Overlook itself turns out to be its own character, developed to the extent that I almost thought “The Overlook” would have been a more appropriate title for the novel. It’s interesting that King’s first book was named after a character, the second after a town (which also in essence became a character) and the third a concept/ability, which doesn’t seem to become a character as much as the hotel itself does, but I suppose the titular concept and the hotel are not unrelated…

At any rate, this gives us, in theory, four main characters: the Overlook, and the three members of the Torrance family–Jack, Wendy, and Danny. (I would argue Dick Hallorann is more plot device than character.) Of the three Torrances, Jack does get the most development, but Wendy and Danny are hardly flat. It seems almost necessary that Jack get the most development for the sake of the plot, because the hotel–or ghost of the hotel, or whatever it is–exploits Jack’s weaknesses (his emotional baggage/chronic tension) in an attempt to gain control of Danny, which we ultimately learn it believes will make it more powerful due to Danny’s powerful shining ability. A scene toward the end of the novel where Danny turns a key to wind a clock in the ballroom seems to confirm the theory that the intensity of his shining ability has enabled the hotel’s ghosts to cross a significant boundary from merely appearing as visions to actually interacting materially with the “real world,” which would theoretically intensify their capacity to do harm. (That Danny is the key also seems like an echo of Salem’s Lot‘s vague intimations that Ben Mears’ return to the Lot was somehow related to Barlow’s appearance in the Marsten house, to that house’s evil “dry charge” reigniting.)

The infamous scene where Danny encounters the dead woman in 217 is well placed as the climax of Part IV because it constitutes a significant escalation in the rising action: Danny is forced to confront that what Hallorann told him–that the hotel’s ghosts are “just like pictures in a book” and can’t hurt him–is not true, which makes the prospect of being trapped in the hotel with them that much more terrifying. The plot seems to pivot around this premise–that the ghosts are real, and the ghosts can hurt. While this novel might fit the descriptor “psychological horror,” it becomes clear that the ghosts cannot be written off as merely the product of a character(s)’ hallucinations.

That critical boundary King crosses in the initial room 217 scene seems very possibly inspired by one of his major influences, Shirley Jackson, who references this conceptual boundary in her novel The Haunting of Hill House (1959):

“No physical danger exists,” the doctor said positively. “No ghost in all the long histories of ghosts has ever hurt anyone physically. The only damage done is by the victim to himself. One cannot even say that the ghost attacks the mind, because the mind, the conscious, thinking mind, is invulnerable; in all our conscious minds, as we sit here talking, there is not one iota of belief in ghosts. Not one of us, even after last night, can say the word ‘ghost’ without a little involuntary smile. No, the menace of the supernatural is that it attacks where modern minds are weakest, where we have abandoned our protective armor of superstition and have no substitute defense.”

An image for the Netflix adaptation of the novel struck me as an apt representation of the psychological horror embodied in Jackson’s haunted house:

And Jackson’s novel actually strikes me as a critical nexus between ‘Salem’s Lot and The Shining via the horror trope of the haunted house. King virtually broadcasts this connection by having both of his novels invoke Jackson’s Hill House directly, the former in the epigraph for its Part One, using Hill House‘s opening lines:

No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream. Hill House, not sane, stood by itself against its hills, holding darkness within; it had stood for eighty years and might stand for eighty more. Within, walls continued upright, bricks met neatly, floors were firm, and doors were sensibly shut; silence lay steadily against the wood and stone of Hill House, and whatever walked there, walked alone.

SHIRLEY JACKSON
The Haunting of Hill House

And The Shining directly in the text, in Part IV, referencing that same Hill House passage (so to speak):

The Overlook was having one hell of a good time. There was a little boy to terrorize, a man and his woman to set one against the other, and if it played its cards right they could end up flitting through the Overlook’s halls like insubstantial shades in a Shirley Jackson novel, whatever walked in Hill House walked alone, but you wouldn’t be alone in the Overlook, oh no, there would be plenty of company here.

But the different–if not polar opposite–approaches King’s second and third novels take to the haunted-house trope potentially illuminate why the latter is narratively stronger. In the Lot, some of the action takes place inside the Marsten House, but the majority takes place outside of it. The Shining inverts this ratio: the majority of the action takes place inside the haunted house. This internal/external approach to the house matches up with the novels’ respective approaches to character: The Shining goes much further in developing its characters’ interiority and chronic tension. (I’m tempted to think a lack of such development is going to be a pitfall of the ensemble cast in general…we’ll see if King’s able to combine the best of both worlds in The Stand.)

The Simple Screen

If comparing The Shining to the Lot illuminates the strength of the former’s character development by way of juxtaposition to an explicit lack thereof, comparing the novel version of The Shining to Stanley Kubrick’s infamous 1980 film adaptation yields a similar result. King himself disliked Kubrick’s adaptation to the extent that he helped write a new miniseries adaptation that aired in the 90s and hued more closely to his own source material.

While I do not think Kubrick’s adaptation is anywhere near as nuanced and thought-provoking as the novel, I don’t think a faithful execution of what happens in the novel’s pages translates well to the screen, which creates a kind of convoluted hierarchy wherein even though the novel is better than Kubrick’s film, Kubrick’s film is (far) better than the miniseries even though the miniseries sticks (far) closer to the novel. This more or less reveals a critical distinction between cinema and prose echoed by a major change made in Brian De Palma’s Carrie adaptation: in the novel Carrie stops her mother’s heart with her mind; in the movie she telekinetically crucifies her mother with sharp silverware. De Palma’s version is more visually stimulating, as film requires. Prose has the ability to rove between internal and external because it can utilize and invoke all five senses, while cinema is largely restricted to the visual and auditory, though able to use these to mimic and thus offer facsimiles of the remaining senses. (That prose’s invocation of the senses creates something more than mere facsimile is evidenced here.)

The Carrie film adaptation also reveals cinema’s more general budget and time constraints in comparison to prose. The special effects required to render Carrie’s full range of telekinetic destruction were too expensive to fully realize on screen, thus were limited to the high school rather than encompassing the entire town, and, due to time, none of the novel’s epistolary snippets exploring the aftermath of Carrie’s destruction made it into the movie, which a) robbed the movie of the depth of social commentary achieved in the novel, and b) is kind of funny because King only added those epistolary snippets about the aftermath in the first place to make the book long enough to qualify as a “novel.” b) would seem to reveal the general difference in temporal scope between genres, as does the Kubrick adaptation (especially when compared to the oh-so-faithful hours-long miniseries). The narrative that stays focused only on what happens in the present is too short to be a novel but pretty much the perfect length for a film, while the narrative that expands its scope to encompass a richer representation of the past and/or future (an expansion that necessarily enriches the perspective, aka the whole 20/20 hindsight thing…) achieves the scope of a novel but then becomes too unwieldy for a film.

At the same time, film can often achieve a narrative and emotional efficiency/economy that you can especially see in adaptations by way of comparison to the book versions, which makes me wonder if it might be a product of having more people’s input, or the medium itself, or both. Take, for instance, all the exposition in The Shining about Jack breaking Danny’s arm. Kubrick’s version artfully condenses this into a monologue Wendy delivers to the doctor that conveys not only the information of the event itself, but also her own denial about it that hints at a rich emotional history for her personally.

But this is pretty much the only piece of backstory/chronic tension the film incorporates; there is mention that Jack lost his job, to the point that it seems the viewer is specifically being made to wonder why he lost his job, and that the answer to this question is being specifically withheld, because we never get it. Basically, as far as Jack is concerned in the movie, he’s crazy from the beginning, while in the novel, the Overlook’s slow seduction of Jack unfolds in a way that feels more character-based specifically because the Overlook’s seduction occurs via exploitation of Jack’s chronic tension, which the movie negates to represent at all. I guess this is the work all Jack Nicholson’s random creepy staring is supposed to do, but while his eyebrows are admittedly impressive, they can’t carry that much. In the film, Jack is not a developed character. He’s a pure monster.

History Lives

The plot utility of Jack’s chronic tension is quite well executed in the novel–that is, it works in tandem with the acute tension rather than the acute tension doing all the work, in which case the plot is something that happens to the character(s), a pitfall that can often lead to the character(s) lacking agency and thus development. So if the acute tension is the Overlook gig and the chronic tension is everything before that, then we see the novel opens with a natural starting point for the acute tension, the interview for the Overlook gig. Jack’s chronic tension–the chain of events (and the factors influential therein) that led to his having to apply for the gig–is directly invoked in this acute scene when Ullman mentions Jack having lost his teaching job, thereby creating a platform for a larger exploration of the theme of history (aka chronic tension), in relation to which the name “Overlook” (changed from the name of the hotel’s real-life counterpart, the Stanley) attains more than one meaning…but more on that another time.

Conjointly with booze (the hotel’s means of exploiting/triggering/exacerbating Jack’s chronic tension issues), the Overlook’s history is precisely the mechanism through which it sinks its ghosty talons into Jack’s personhood, advancing the process that the novel’s main thread of rising action is predicated upon–Jack’s being seduced to transfer his loyalties from his family to the Overlook. (This thread of the Overlook’s history is also omitted by the movie more or less entirely.) We see this when Jack discovers a scrapbook detailing the Overlook’s sordid history in the basement, a critical escalation in the rising action of this loyalty transfer:

It seemed that before today he had never really understood the breadth of his responsibility to the Overlook. It was almost like having a responsibility to history.

In terms of the chronic tension that ultimately enables the Overlook to seduce Jack–in effect seducing him through a manipulation of his own personal history–we get quite a bit. We have Jack’s general drinking problem, then three specific events: 1) Jack breaking Danny’s arm, 2) Jack deciding to stop drinking after hitting a kid’s bike in a car with Al Shockley some time after he broke Danny’s arm, and 3) Jack assaulting George Hatfield and getting fired some time after he decided to stop drinking. This trifecta of chronic-tension events might initially seem clunky (it did to me) but actually makes sense in that the third event sheds new light on the first: initially, like Wendy, you might see Jack’s breaking Danny’s arm as a product/result of his drinking, meaning the threat should diminish after he stops drinking, but the third event reveals that the threat hasn’t actually diminished, laying the groundwork for the discord the Overlook will further stoke in the acute tension, and revealing that Jack’s (and thus the family’s) chronic tension isn’t the drinking itself, but the factors that are motivating/influencing the drinking/urge to drink.

For the most part, I think King avoids the trap fiction writer Robert Boswell articulates in his craft essay “Narrative Spandrels” (which I explain further here). Basically, the trap is writing scenes in which the only thing that “happens” is a character thinks about something as a means to provide expository info to the reader, and/or the scene exists specifically to plant something that will be needed later for the plot’s sake and has no other narrative reason to exist. This turns out to be a trap a lot of amateur (and more experienced) writers fall into when they’re attempting to provide expository info deemed narratively “necessary” in order to identify/clarify the chronic tension that will make the acute tension relevant/meaningful. It’s more impressive that King (mostly) avoids this trap while delivering so much chronic tension expository info (the breadth of which is in large part, again, why his character development is so strong). In addition to the trifecta of chronic events we get in Part I as Jack goes through his interview, once the Torrances settle in at the Overlook, we start to get even more information about his chronic-tension events as Jack thinks about them.

The first extended sequence where Jack does this is when he’s fixing shingles on the Overlook’s roof at the beginning of Part III. This is actually a master class in how to handle exposition, so let’s back up and talk about the possible ways a writer might handle it. There’s straight-up “telling” it, which writers can pull off if they include details along the way that “show” what they’re “telling.” Imagine The Shining beginning with “Jack hadn’t meant to break his son Danny’s arm, but…”, providing Jack’s whole account of that before winding around to something like “That was two years ago, and now here he was sitting before this officious little prick…”

In this example, exposition is provided before scene, and, correspondingly, chronic tension is thus provided before acute. A writer could get away with this back in Queen Victoria’s time, but by the end of WWII, it’s basically putting the cart before the horse, or, to put it more bluntly, narrative suicide. Our brains have changed since we wrote letters by hand and the light of a candle. Readers with increasingly short attention spans need the hook of the plot before being plied by exposition.

Having a character think about whatever it is you need to convey exposition about might seem like a less clunky way to convey it than straight-up telling, but is often more. Clunky. Clunkier. The first issue with providing exposition by having a character think about it is that there has to be a specific reason they’re thinking about it when and where they’re thinking about it–this is a reason that must necessarily transcend (which might be another way of saying disguise) the reason that the writer needs to supply this particular information. The reason King the writer needs the reader to know about the George Hatfield incident is because he needs the reader to know that Jack still has the potential to be violent even though he’s no longer drinking: the introduction of this knowledge introduces/creates suspense. The official technical problem King the writer has to solve is when/where/how to show/tell the reader about the George Hatfield incident. And so: the official narrative reason Jack is thinking about the George Hatfield incident is because he’s discovered a wasp’s nest beneath the roof’s shingles. In the description of it, King himself seems to acknowledge that this vehicle for the character’s thoughts might be clunky:

He felt that he had unwittingly stuck his hand into The Great Wasps’ Nest of Life. As an image it stank. As a cameo of reality, he felt it was serviceable. He had stuck his hand through some rotted flashing in high summer and that hand and his whole arm had been consumed in holy, righteous fire, destroying conscious thought, making the concept of civilized behavior obsolete. Could you be expected to behave as a thinking human being when your hand was being impaled on red-hot darning needles? Could you be expected to live in the love of your nearest and dearest when the brown, furious cloud rose out of the hole in the fabric of things (the fabric you thought was so innocent) and arrowed straight at you? Could you be held responsible for your own actions as you ran crazily about on the sloping roof seventy feet above the ground, not knowing where you were going, not remembering that your panicky, stumbling feet could lead you crashing and blundering right over the rain gutter and down to your death on the concrete seventy feet below? Jack didn’t think you could. When you unwittingly stuck your hand into the wasps’ nest, you hadn’t made a covenant with the devil to give up your civilized self with its trappings of love and respect and honor. It just happened to you. Passively, with no say, you ceased to be a creature of the mind and became a creature of the nerve endings; from college-educated man to wailing ape in five easy seconds.

He thought about George Hatfield.

And thus, on the heels of this description that is basically an extended metaphor for what the Overlook will eventually do to Jack, we get the full-blown detailed story of what happened with George Hatfield–or Jack’s version of it anyway. And here’s what else we get along the way: Jack’s version is unreliable. The way King reveals this, and his depiction of how Jack’s mind works in general, was one of my favorite aspects of the book. After a description of a confrontation in which George accuses Jack of setting the timer ahead during a practice debate, we get:

You hate me because you know …

Because he knew what?

What could he possibly know about George Hatfield that would make him hate him? That his whole future lay ahead of him? That he looked a little bit like Robert Redford and all conversation among the girls stopped when he did a double gainer from the pool diving board? That he played soccer and baseball with a natural, unlearned grace?

Ridiculous. Absolutely absurd. He envied George Hatfield nothing. If the truth was known, he felt worse about George’s unfortunate stutter than George himself, because George really would have made an excellent debater. And if Jack had set the timer ahead—and of course he hadn’t—it would have been because both he and the other members of the squad were embarrassed for George’s struggle, they had agonized over it the way you agonize when the Class Night speaker forgets some of his lines. If he had set the timer ahead, it would have been just to … to put George out of his misery.

But he hadn’t set the timer ahead. He was quite sure of it.

By the end of this passage it should be pretty clear to the reader from these denials that Jack did set the timer ahead, and the reader will likely be less disturbed by that than by Jack’s capacity to convince himself that he didn’t. Likewise, that capacity for denial reveals that Jack does in fact envy George Hatfield, which will connect to other threads of his chronic tension that the hotel will eventually exploit to drive him crazy, as we will see. But in terms of plot construction, using the wasps’ nest as the vehicle for the Hatfield exposition–not to mention all the other wasp symbolism that does end up getting perhaps a tad (or more so) heavy-handed–technically works because the wasps’ nest does not remain in the realm of mere symbol, but, as my former fiction teacher Justin Cronin puts it, “participate[s] in the story’s kinetic action.” If Jack had finished his thinking and climbed down from the roof without the wasps’ nest that triggered his thoughts coming up again, the scene would not have justified itself. Because Jack bug-bombs the nest and then gives it to Danny, the nest comes to play a material role in the (kinetic) action that justifies the scene–something has “happened” here more than Jack just thinking about something that has already happened: he found the nest. This becomes relevant to the rest of the plot when the wasps turn out to not be dead and emerge to sting Danny in what becomes the first concrete manifestation/iteration of something at the hotel being alive/inflicting harm even though it should be dead. This is something that happens because of that scene that justifies it as more than just a placeholder for Jack’s thinking.

In addition to being a vehicle for the Hatfield exposition, the wasps’ nest also becomes a link to an even deeper chronic tension for Jack. The reason Jack decides to give the nest to Danny in the first place is mentioned almost offhandedly:

Two hours from now the nest would be just so much chewed paper and Danny could have it in his room if he wanted to—Jack had had one in his room when he was just a kid, it had always smelled faintly of woodsmoke and gasoline. He could have it right by the head of his bed. It wouldn’t hurt him.

And then, a bit later when he actually gives the nest to Danny, to Wendy’s discomfort, we get:

“Are you sure it’s safe?”

“Positive. I had one in my room when I was a kid. My dad gave it to me. Want to put it in your room, Danny?”

Here’s the critical link that will take us to our next point in the plot of Jack sitting and thinking about his chronic tension. At this next point, the reasons that Jack envies George Hatfield will be further illuminated, as we move further back to where it seems Jack’s drinking issues ultimately originate: his father.

Before we get there, I’d like to note one of King’s effective suspense-building techniques: repetition. He builds an ominous tone around the Overlook from the beginning, or almost the beginning–from the beginning of the first time we get Danny’s point of view near the beginning, and Tony shows him the Overlook with a skull and crossbones over it, and then the vision of something chasing him yelling at him things like “come here, you little shit,” and, somewhat more distinctively, “take your medicine.” (Another instance of effective repetition are creepy descriptions of the jungle-like carpet.) This vision and these phrases are repeated throughout the novel until they are of course ultimately played out in real time in the climax. At some point fairly early on, the reader, if not Danny, realizes that the figure chasing him in these visions is Jack–or at least, a version of Jack.

So back to the next chronic tension exposition sequence. Notably, King saves this sequence for the beginning of Part IV; this is good for pacing because Part III ended with a high-action climax, that aforementioned boundary-crossing, of the dead woman grabbing Danny by the throat. The reader desperately wants to know what’s happening with this, which means King has us right where he wants us–by the balls. We’re not going anywhere, so now he can patiently unspool some more exposition. Again, this exposition will all be entirely justified by becoming directly relevant to the kinetic action of the acute tension.

When we open with Jack in Part IV, he’s dozing in the basement while going through the old Overlook records that have begun to increasingly obsess him. Notably, King does a lot less work here to trigger Jack’s train of thought pivoting to his father:

He slipped down farther in his chair, still holding a clutch of the receipts, but his eyes no longer looking at what was printed there. They had come unfocused. His lids were slow and heavy. His mind had slipped from the Overlook to his father, who had been a male nurse at the Berlin Community Hospital. Big man.

There’s no ostensible external reason for Jack to suddenly start thinking about his father here, but this could potentially be excused by this point as the Overlook manipulating him, or something. Basically, Jack’s been primed. The Overlook is haunted, but everyone’s ghosts are different. Different, but the same: your parents.

So here we learn that Jack’s father was an alcoholic, but that when Jack was very young, circa Danny’s age, Jack loved him and would play a game called “elevator” with him (which is of course a relevant object in the hotel). There are some creepy details already present in this period of love: Jack’s father is usually drunk when he returns home, as evidenced by a “mist” of beer always hovering around his face (in another effective instance of creepy repetition), and that sometimes causes him to drop Jack during their elevator game. The critical paternal trauma is a night when Jack is nine and his father beats his mother for no reason. We get this in a full-blown flashback, which is remarkable for a couple of reasons. The first is it reveals the source of one of those other effective instances of creepy repetition:

Momma had dropped to the floor. He had been out of his chair and around to where she lay dazed on the carpet, brandishing the cane, moving with a fat man’s grotesque speed and agility, little eyes flashing, jowls quivering as he spoke to her just as he had always spoken to his children during such outbursts. “Now. Now by Christ. I guess you’ll take your medicine now. Goddam puppy. Whelp. Come on and take your medicine.” (emphasis mine)

The second is how King handles a potentially clichéd scene of domestic violence by dwelling on a couple of weird off-putting details:

He and Becky crying, unbelieving, looking at their mother’s spectacles lying in her mashed potatoes, one cracked lens smeared with gravy.

In my fiction classes, I often talk about the craft concept of the “bloody potato” (which I explain in more detail here). This is basically a symbol that carries emotional weight but also participates in the story’s action, an objective correlative. It overlaps with a concept that often comes in handy when depicting violence: don’t look at it head on, but look at the side effects, which serve as a stand-in for the head-on thing by providing evidence of its occurrence. It might seem counterintuitive, but looking at the evidentiary side effects is usually more powerful than looking at the head-on thing directly. (Think of someone being shot in a movie, but the moment the gunshot sounds, the camera cuts to a flock of birds simultaneously exploding into flight from the naked branches of a tree.)

The “bloody potato” comes from Anton Chekhov’s story “The Murder”; in it, instead of looking at the corpse of the man who’s been murdered, the man who has murdered him is stunned by the sight of a potato lying in the murdered man’s blood. This is a captivating image on its own for its juxtaposition of the violent with the mundane/domestic, but its meaning is deepened in the context of this particular narrative, in which one man has murdered another precisely because he was eating a potato, or more precisely, because he was eating it with oil on a religious day of fasting (the bottle of oil is the murder weapon). Hence the potato not only highlights the absurdity of murder in general, but in murder for the sake of defending a religious principle.

Funnily enough, I’ve also analyzed a potato being used in a similar but different way as an objective correlative in a Pulitzer-Prize-winning novel here; that potato is boiled, not bloody. King’s potato(es) here is bloody but not–the spectacles aren’t literally bloody, but the way the potato’s gravy is described dripping down them invokes blood, substituting for it, and is creating that same horrifying juxtaposition of the violent and the domestic. King leans on this mundane-detail tactic again in another memorable detail about this incident for Jack:

Momma getting slowly to her feet, dazed, her face already puffed and swelling like an old tire with too much air in it, bleeding in four or five different places, and she had said a terrible thing, perhaps the only thing Momma had ever said which Jacky could recall word for word: “Who’s got the newspaper? Your daddy wants the funnies. Is it raining yet?”

But now we have to ask again, does this scene do something more than just provide more chronic tension information? Yes: it plays a direct role in the acute tension when this recollection of Jack’s father beating his mother evolves into a nightmare of his father shouting at him through the radio to kill Wendy and Danny, which then leads to Jack destroying the radio, cutting off one of their critical links to the outside world in what creates a critical escalation in the acute tension’s rising action.

The specific chronic tension this scene of thinking/dreaming hones in on will play a critical role in a turning point in the acute tension, but King saves it for awhile. First, he deploys the George Hatfield chronic tension in the acute when Jack finds himself in room 217 again; instead of seeing the dead lady Danny saw, Jack sees George Hatfield in the tub with a knife in his chest. The exchange they have escalates the rising action by revealing that mentally, Jack has crossed a certain threshold:

“First you tried to run me over on my bike and then you set the timer ahead and then you tried to stab me to death but I still don’t stutter.” George was coming for him, his hands out, the fingers slightly curled. He smelled moldy and wet, like leaves that had been rained on.

“It was for your own good,” Jack said, backing up. “I set it ahead for your own good. Furthermore, I happen to know you cheated on your Final Composition.”

“I don’t cheat … and I don’t stutter.”

George’s hands touched his neck.

Jack turned and ran, ran with the floating, weightless slowness that is so common to dreams.

“You did! You did cheat!” he screamed in fear and anger as he crossed the darkened bed/sitting room. “I’ll prove it!”

There are actually a couple of revelations about Jack’s mentality here: first, he admits outright that he did set the timer ahead, a marked contrast to his denial of doing so in his thoughts to himself up on the roof fixing shingles. Second, there is conflation upon conflation happening here: the George ghost says Jack tried to run him over on his bike, which directly invokes the chronic-tension incident that caused Jack to finally stop drinking in a way that might make the reader note it involved a figurative ghost, if it didn’t before–the ghost of the kid who was not on the bike, whose body he and Al spent two hours searching the highway shoulder for but never found. The ghost of the death Jack might have caused, had he kept drinking…a version of Danny. Jack then starts to conflate the real-life incident with George with the version he’s writing in his play when he starts accusing the George ghost of cheating on his final composition, reinforcing that Jack was writing about the Hatfield incident in some kind of fictionalized version in his play, and, ultimately, that he’s going crazy, precisely because he’s having trouble telling what’s “real” from what’s not.

This is how Jack’s fictional writing project plays a role in the plot’s kinetic action in a way that Ben Mears’ in ‘Salem’s Lot markedly does not: we’ve seen that a critical escalation of the rising action (positioned as the climax of Part III for being so critical) was the dead woman in 217 actually harming Danny (an acute event intersecting with chronic when Wendy assumes it must have been Jack who hurt Danny); Jack then tells them he didn’t see anything in 217 afterward when he in fact did, showing the reader that his loyalties are starting to transfer to the Overlook, since it doesn’t really seem like he’s lying to his wife and son about this for their own good. Later that same afternoon, Jack looks over his play and realizes it’s “puerile.” This is another marked contrast to his earlier attitude, when he’d thought being at the hotel had enabled him to overcome his writer’s block and arrive at new productive insights about his characters. This change in attitude about his play is reflective of larger changes in attitude about the Overlook v. his family. It’s not a good sign, in short.

The conflation of Jack’s play with “real life” that he makes in his encounter with the George ghost in 217 is a mental erosion with a similar parallel in the one Jack is experiencing with the hotel’s ghosts. The scene enacts another conflation when Jack attacks the George ghost and the George ghost transmutes into a version of Danny. It seems telling that Danny sees a “real” ghost in 217, the woman who died in the room (whom he’ll later call a “false face”), while Jack sees his own personalized chronic-tension ghost in George Hatfield. This is part of what makes the Overlook so scary: its potential to manipulate/enlist your personal demons.

Acutely Kubrick

It’s worth noting how some of these acute developments are handled in Kubrick’s adaptation in the absence of the chronic context that packs them with such power in King’s version. Since Kubrick never explains why Jack lost his pre-Overlook job, George Hatfield can’t appear in the bathtub. In his place, Kubrick has the arrestingly stunning set of the bathroom itself:

And of course Kubrick also has the original dead woman–except she doesn’t look dead, at first. She’s the full-frontally nude equivalent of a supermodel who seduces Jack but then rots away in his arms once he’s making out with her in a sequence that invokes a seemingly universal fear of decomposition, decay, death that lurks beneath the surface of even the most beautiful living things. Powerful, sure, but as I try (often unsuccessfully) to explain to my 14-year-old writing students, the specific is actually more powerful than the universal.

The Kubrick bathroom scene seems like an exercise in the male gaze more than anything else. How horrifying, that a beautiful woman will ultimately grow old and decrepit! Since, in the novel, Jack does not see the hotel’s ghost in the bathroom, but his own (making the sequence more specific than universal), the potential corollary in the novel of Jack’s experiencing the hotel’s seduction in the overtly sexual way Kubrick presents is a scene where Jack is dancing in the ballroom during a ghost party in full swing:

She was wearing a small and sparkly cat’s-eye mask and her hair had been brushed over to one side in a soft and gleaming fall that seemed to pool in the valley between their touching shoulders. Her dress was full-skirted but he could feel her thighs against his legs from time to time and had become more and more sure that she was smooth-and-powdered naked under her dress,

(the better to feel your erection with, my dear)

and he was sporting a regular railspike. If it offended her she concealed it well; she snuggled even closer to him.

In this scene there’s some restraint in comparison to Kubrick’s since the woman’s not actually naked. The cat’s-eye mask the woman is wearing is an object that’s accrued some unnerving connotations since Wendy recently pulled one out of the elevator after Jack tried to claim there was nothing there–though it’s true this is not as horrifying as the horror that comes to be associated with the naked woman in Kubrick’s version.

In addition to affecting the 217 bathroom scene, the movie jettisoning the George Hatfield chronic tension means that it’s lost the primary means through which the original narrative derives horror/suspense via Jack’s writing project. The way the film is still able to generate horror from this writing project I thought was ultimately stronger than its modifications to Jack’s 217 encounter. Wendy eventually discovers that Jack’s pages all say nothing but the infamous phrase “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy,” a phrase that never actually appears in the novel. In what must have been quite the typing project for some lowly production assistant, every page that Wendy looks at is covered with these lines in a different configuration:

This almost seemed an homage to the way the content of Jack’s writing project operates in the novel, specifically how his conflations in the bathroom scene between real life and his written fictionalized version of it show us he’s going crazy. In the film, the different versions of the same thing (different formatting of the same line) do the same work–show us Jack’s going crazy, or is crazy already.

Chronic King

So we see that Jack’s chronic tension ultimately traces back to his father. King’s biographer Lisa Rogak notes that after The Shining came out, King commented on this aspect more directly than he did a lot of his work:

“People ask if the book is a ghost story or is it just in this guy’s mind. Of course it’s a ghost story, because Jack Torrance himself is a haunted house. He’s haunted by his father. It pops up again, and again, and again.”

Rogak, Lisa. Haunted Heart (p. 85). St. Martin’s Publishing Group. Kindle Edition.

Here King is implicitly highlighting the general appeal of his work, the popularity of which has started to explode around this time (the late 70s) thanks to the Carrie adaptation. I don’t think there’s much ambiguity in The Shining about whether the ghosts are supposed to be “real” in the literal sense–I could cite plenty of evidence, predominantly consisting of the fact that multiple characters have experiences with ghosts or evidence of them, like Wendy pulling the cat’s-eye mask from the elevator. I’ve already mentioned that the book does derive a fair amount of its horror/tension from the fact that the ghosts are literally real, but it actually derives more horror/tension from the figurative ghosts the characters are haunted by, which is another way of saying their chronic tension(s). Everyone has the chronic tension of emotional baggage in some form that is inherently “haunting,” hence the general appeal of horror; the acute horrific/supernatural situations King concocts are literalized versions of his characters’ emotional monsters. And this is appealing because we all have emotional monsters. (This all probably also means that it doesn’t really matter whether the ghosts in the narrative are literally “real” or not…)

A lot of the acute situations King concocts in his novels, as with those of probably most writers of conventional genre thrillers, happen to the characters (giving plot primacy) rather than because of the characters (giving characters primacy). To make a gross generalization, giving plot primacy in the traditional genre fiction mode seems to appeal to more short-term pleasure sensors; it might make a reader fly through the pages faster, but giving character primacy in the more literary mode of fiction has the potential to make a longer-term impact on the reader, like thinking about what they would do in the character’s shoes, or actually remembering the book later. I’m starting to develop a theory that plot-based thrillers that subvert character to action are having a detrimental effect on our brains in encouraging us to dehumanize others…but at any rate, the point here is, The Shining really qualifies as a King masterpiece because it represents a near-perfect balance of character and action in how the action happens because of the characters. Even better, this novel’s particular acute situation makes this true not just for a single main character, but for all three members of the Torrance family.

Weeping Wendy

Which brings us to Wendy. Wendy is a developed character–though not as developed as the main white guy, it’s true–because she gets her own chronic tension that affects her decisions in the acute situation (which in turn affects how the acute situation plays out). Wendy’s chronic tension is that her mother blamed Wendy when Wendy’s father divorced her, and she has treated Wendy as an emotional punching bag ever since. Her being with Jack in the first place seems in large part due to how he enabled her a certain emotional independence from her mother, but it also means that in the acute situation, Wendy’s between a rock and a hard place. This is overtly clarified right before they take Danny to the doctor in Sidewinder:

“If there’s something wrong, I’m going to send you and him to your mother’s, Wendy.”

“No.”



“I can’t go to my mother, Jack. Not on those terms. Don’t ask me. I … I just can’t.”

This comes up again in a conversation Wendy and Danny have in the car shortly before they know they will be snowed in at the Overlook and won’t be able to escape if something happens:

“And if you … he … think we should go, we will. The two of us will go and be together with Daddy again in the spring.”

He looked at her with sharp hope. “Where? A motel?”

“Hon, we couldn’t afford a motel. It would have to be at my mother’s.”

“I know how you feel about her,” Danny said, and sighed.

“How do I feel?”

“Bad,” Danny said, and then rhyming, singsong, frightening her: “Bad. Sad. Mad. It’s like she wasn’t your mommy at all. Like she wanted to eat you.” He looked at her, frightened. “And I don’t like it there. She’s always thinking about how she would be better for me than you. And how she could get me away from you. Mommy, I don’t want to go there. I’d rather be at the Overlook than there.”

Wendy was shaken. Was it that bad between her and her mother? God, what hell for the boy if it was and he could really read their thoughts for each other. She suddenly felt more naked than naked, as if she had been caught in an obscene act.

“All right,” she said. “All right, Danny.”

If Wendy’s mother would have welcomed them with open arms, this would obviously have been a very different story…or rather, not much of a story at all. This also speaks to an interesting overlap between King’s supernatural horror and how it reflects the horrific underbelly of the natural realist domestic (also a trend in his first two novels). Wendy’s chronic tension leads to her decision to trap herself in the Overlook with Jack and its ghosts, but this acute situation becomes symbolic/reflective of how she’s trapped herself in her marriage with Jack in general in a way that probably reads as familiar to more women than we’d like to think; we see how Wendy potentially used the marriage as an escape hatch from her mother, and now, that escape hatch is becoming worse than what she was trying to escape in the first place. The volatile nature of this marriage is underscored when we see Jack specifically use Wendy’s chronic tension against her:

Don’t you dare leave us alone!” she shrieked at him. Spittle flew from her lips with the force of her cry.

Jack said: “Wendy, that’s a remarkable imitation of your mom.”

She burst into tears then, unable to cover her face because Danny was on her lap.

In the immediate/surface situation here, Wendy does not want Jack to leave them alone in the face of a potentially supernatural element–the elevator that requires someone to run it has just started running by itself–but this passage symbolically encapsulates the potential horror of marriage in general, especially when it begets a kid. Here the intimacy of marriage has enabled Jack, more aware of Wendy’s chronic tension with her mother than anyone, to deploy it against her, an attack she is defenseless against specifically because her energy is entirely taken up by having to care for their son.

And speaking of the son, Danny’s declaration that he “‘want[s] to stay with Daddy'” by the end of this car conversation is also a critical decision on his part to seemingly ignore the implications of the horrific visions Tony has been sending him. So he, as the third main character (or more accurately second if we’re really ranking them in terms of development), also makes a critical decision facilitating the continuation of the acute tension. This decision is made out of love, which also contributes to the novel’s horror via the tragic, horrific truth that love is so often our downfall. And the way the situation eventually plays out with the hotel apparently taking over Jack so that he’s not himself anymore seems to encode a powerful emotional truth about how people can stay with abusers by perceiving that abuser as two different people…a form of emotional compartmentalizing.

In his dream, Jack’s father tells him “a real artist must suffer,” but the Torrances show that really it’s your characters who have to suffer if they’re going to undergo any meaningful development:

She had never dreamed there could be so much pain in a life when there was nothing physically wrong.

The Ending(s)

At the point when Jack wakes from his nightmare of killing the George ghost in room 217 that turns into Danny, he still seems to be trying to fight off the Overlook’s influence. That will ultimately change not long afterward, when Jack is seduced into tossing away the snowmobile’s battery, their last link to the outside world after the radio is destroyed. This is another critical escalation in the rising action. Yet another comes after this when Jack openly turns on Wendy, which happens after he gets thoroughly drunk in the Colorado Lounge. This acute escalation gains power from the invocation of Jack’s chronic tension via the aforementioned creepy repetition associated with his father’s drinking:

Jack was stirring. She went around the bar, found the gate, and walked back on the inside to where Jack lay, pausing only to look at the gleaming chromium taps. They were dry, but when she passed close to them she could smell beer, wet and new, like a fine mist. (emphasis mine)

When Jack fully wakes up and tries to strangle Wendy, she manages to knock him out (with, appropriately enough, a wine bottle), then she and Danny drag him to the pantry and lock him in. When Jack wakes there, we get another of his extended thought sequences, and it’s precisely their contrast to the previous two described (the one on the roof and the one in the basement) that drives the narrative forward by showing us that Jack has passed the point of no return in his loyalties transferring away from his family, and it all begins with this line:

He could begin to sympathize with his father.

We get a kind of rehashing of the chronic-tension incident we got earlier with the non-bloody mashed potatoes, only this time instead of being appalled at his father’s random viciousness, Jack frames his father’s actions as entirely justified and his mother as fully to blame. This marked transfer of loyalties in his initial nuclear unit signifies a parallel transfer in the acute situation with his latter nuclear unit. As a reader, I found this to be a very effective narrative strategy. Showing how deranged Jack has become by this point by showing him rationalizing his father’s obviously deranged actions that had previously horrified him was truly chilling. We see that the hotel has effectively turned him into his father (as played out by him yelling his father’s “take your medicine” phrase at Danny). This is a scene that seems to successfully further the action by having a character merely sit in a room and think (and throw a box of Triscuits). The tension has risen enormously because you see how far gone he truly is.

At this point, the Grady ghost lets Jack out of the pantry, after he promises to kill Wendy and bring the manager Danny (seeming to answer the question of how “real” the ghosts are, for any readers who care to have that question answered definitively). Now we’re really off to the races, because we know from being shown Jack’s frame of mind that he is capable of redrum.

So Wendy gets a bad feeling and, brave gal that she is, goes to check Jack’s still locked in the pantry, at which point there’s an exciting confrontation. Jack breaks some of Wendy’s ribs and something in her back with the roque mallet Grady left him, and Wendy ends up stabbing Jack in the back with a butcher’s knife. This slows Jack down some, but just some, and we get one of my favorite sequences as a hobbled Jack relentlessly pursues a hobbled Wendy up the grand staircase:

“Right behind you,” he panted through his bloody grin, as if reading her mind. “Right behind you now, bitch. With your medicine.”

The repetition of that medicine phrase, to borrow a phrase of Holden Caulfield’s, kills me. Not to mention that the physical damage this husband and wife have wrought on each other here seems a powerful manifestation/representation of the emotional damage they’ve inflicted on each other (though probably mostly Jack on Wendy). In the context of this reading, the Overlook itself represents marriage as a terrifying institution of entrapment ultimately conducive to cabin fever:

“It’s a slang term for the claustrophobic reaction that can occur when people are shut in together over long periods of time. The feeling of claustrophobia is externalized as dislike for the people you happen to be shut in with. In extreme cases it can result in hallucinations and violence—murder has been done over such minor things as a burned meal or an argument about whose turn it is to do the dishes.”

Being a month away from my own wedding as I read this (as stay-at-home orders were imposed for the coronavirus, no less), it gave me some feelings to say the least…

Kubrick effectively economized for the film version by combining this staircase scene with the aforementioned scene of Jack first openly attacking Wendy; in Kubrick’s scene, Wendy is backing up the stairs facing Jack instead of having her back to him like she does in King’s version. Kubrick dispensed with the knife in Jack’s back, but now Jack also has no weapon to make good on his threats:

In both versions, Jack ends up in the pantry and gets out and chases Wendy into their apartment’s bathroom, where he’s stopped short of killing her by hearing Dick Hallorann arrive. Then pretty much everything after this point in the narrative is changed in the movie. In the movie, Jack kills Hallorann about five seconds after he walks in, while in the book, Hallorann survives (a stark contrast I intend to discuss further in a future post). In the movie, Danny flees outside instead of upstairs, and Jack pursues him into the hedge maze that was one of the better changes the movie made (from the novel’s attacking hedge animals); Danny outsmarts Jack by stepping backwards through his own footprints in the snow so Jack can’t follow him, and Danny and Wendy escape in the snowplow that Hallorann very conveniently brought while Jack freezes to death in the maze.

In the book, Jack finds Danny upstairs, as Danny’s visions foreshadowed, and the two have a face-to-face confrontation. (Which means Kubrick inverted a face-to-face confrontation in the book to a chase scene in Jack and Danny’s case, and inverted a chase scene to more of a face-to-face confrontation in Jack and Wendy’s case….) The novel’s confrontation had a critical verbal component: Danny yells a bunch of stuff at his dad to the effect that he knows he’s not really his dad but the hotel:

“You’re not my daddy,” Danny told it again. “And if there’s a little bit of my daddy left inside you, he knows they lie here. Everything is a lie and a cheat. Like the loaded dice my daddy got for my Christmas stocking last Christmas, like the presents they put in the store windows and my daddy says there’s nothing in them, no presents, they’re just empty boxes. Just for show, my daddy says. You’re it, not my daddy. You’re the hotel. And when you get what you want, you won’t give my daddy anything because you’re selfish. And my daddy knows that. You had to make him drink the Bad Stuff. That’s the only way you could get him, you lying false face.”

“Liar! Liar!” The words came in a thin shriek. The mallet wavered wildly in the air.

But of course, Danny’s words are true, as we’re effectively shown when the “real” Jack Torrance peeks out one last time to assure Danny he loves him and beat himself with the roque mallet before he’s fully swallowed up by the hotel monster, whom Danny then reminds to dump the boiler. Then Hallorann gets Wendy and Danny out just in time while Jack and/or the hotel ghost die when the boiler explodes.

The verbal element of the climactic confrontation in the book struck a very familiar chord. It reminded me of the climax of King’s The Outsider from 2018, which I read last year before I started reading King’s work from the beginning, and in which, as one Goodreads reviewer noted, “this latest [big baddie] was defeated with a few impotence jibes and a weighted sock. I wish I was joking.” The key word here being the “jibes”–the verbal insults that amount to explanations of the monster’s existence while helping to defeat it. I have to say these verbal confrontations–or perhaps the ease of their success–felt fairly absurd to me in both books. This absurd pattern played out a third time when I happened to watch the It: Chapter Two movie adaptation not long after finishing The Shining. The climax was stunningly similar: the group fighting the monster finally succeeds in destroying it–It–by hurling verbal epithets at…It. I have yet to read It; there were a bunch of jokes in the movie about one of the characters not writing good endings to his novels which seemed to be references to the ending of It itself being notoriously bad (or maybe I have this impression because I remember a student specifically complaining about how bad it was when the rest of the book was good).

But for now, I’m sensing a pattern in King’s work. The Shining is another key development in the ethos of the King universe by expanding on the concept of precognition, but also on the plot pattern that amounts to a theme that through apparent repeated iterations over decades seems to amount to an almost Kingian religion: you have to face your fears head-on to be able to defeat them.

In light of what potentially appears to be King’s severe reverence to this tenet, it’s really no surprise that he hated what Kubrick did with his story: not only did Kubrick stripping Jack of his chronic tension turn the narrative into a rudimentary finger painting of its former self, but his adjustment of the ending changed the ultimate message from “face your fears” to “flee your fears.”

-SCR

Carrie: Reading Monsters

Scary monsters, super creeps
Keep me running, running scared
Scary monsters, super creeps
Keep me running, running scared

Scary Monsters (and Super Creeps)” by David Bowie

Reading for…

To me the world of academia frequently feels cloistered and condescending, conjuring that clichéd image of the Ivory Tower, defined when googled as “a state of privileged seclusion or separation from the facts and practicalities of the real world” and “a metaphorical place—or an atmosphere—where people are happily cut off from the rest of the world in favor of their own pursuits, usually mental and esoteric ones.” So here I’m going to try to apply some of the theory I learned in the Tower and connect the project of analyzing a fictional text to current issues in the real world.

I was an English major at Rice and got my MFA in Creative Writing at UH, the latter requiring several academic literature credits in addition to the creative ones. While I generally hated the academic classes and the impenetrable language in the articles we had to read, in hindsight I do think I got some valuable things out of applying abstract theories to texts. No doubt anyone who’s ever majored in English has been interrogated at some point about the practicality of the degree. We didn’t do it for money. We did it for love.

Literature provides different lenses on our culture. As I frequently discuss in my fiction classes, fiction in particular offers us the opportunity to experience what it’s like to be someone else: studies show that our brains can feel things described in what we’re reading as though we’re experiencing them directly. But along with all the different types of characters and experiences it’s possible to depict are all the different types of readers who will be reading the depictions. That the author does not have full authority over the meaning of the text–that texts are joint constructions between writer and reader–is a contentious idea in the history of literary analyses, and in that vein Roland Barthes’ seminal academic essay “The Death of the Author” will be unpacked in more detail at a later point.

A good illustration of the general idea of applying different readings to texts–of how to “read”–is offered in a recent SNL sketch in which Ru Paul visits a library to read to children.

But instead of reading these classic children’s books in the traditional word-for-word sense one might expect, Ru starts roasting them, saying things like the character Eloise “needs to get a hot-oil treatment for that broom on her head.” This greatly confuses the parents in the audience; one wonders aloud, “What is happening?” Ru explains that he’s “reading these book girls for filth.” As Ru roasts some more, the parents and curators debate how educational the process is, with one parent claiming it’s the most fun she’s had since her kid “blasted” out of her.

For the purposes of our discussion, one of the most symbolically helpful elements of the sketch is the use of glasses for reading:

As everyone in the audience puts them on–note that they are colorful and fancy, each pair unique–Ru says, “Now, I’ll show you how to read. Then, you try.” He dons a different pair of glasses from his previous ones before he starts to “read”:

It is also significant that these are more colorful than the plain black square ones he had on before. These are the lenses through which he will “read for filth,” in essence, reading through the perspective of a drag queen, showing how one can put on these particular symbolic lenses to read any text. By dramatizing the confusion in reaction to Ru’s applying his specific way of reading, the sketch shows how we’re frequently trapped in limited perspectives when consuming content and narratives, and thereby the sketch implicitly highlights the importance of considering other perspectives. Applying theory can help us with this.

Monster Theory

Via the King of the mainstream, I’d like to make theory more accessible. I’ve already used academic theory once in the period post when I applied Toni Morrison’s reading of the Africanist presence to Carrie. Since probably no one’s played in prose with monsters more than King, another academic theory that will be applicable to King’s work in particular is Jeffrey J. Cohen’s Monster Theory: Reading Culture. As this book’s Amazon blurb says, “Monsters provide a key to understanding the culture that spawned them.”

Cohen’s monster theory has seven theses:
1. the monster’s body = the cultural body
2. the monster always escapes
3. the monster is a harbinger of category crisis
4. the monster dwells at Gates of Difference
5. the monster polices the borders of the possible
6. the fear of the monster is really a sort of desire
7. the monster stands at the threshold of becoming

Number 6 speaks to a tenet of fiction in general; the writer Steve Almond points out that plot is pushing your characters up against their deepest fears and/or desires. As I frequently note in my comp classes when explaining how rhetorical techniques work, emotional appeals of the sort perhaps most frequently made in advertisements exploit people’s fears and desires, which often amount to the same thing: sending the message that you should buy this pickup truck so you will appear more masculine and thus more attractive to women is exploiting a desire to be more masculine/attractive and a fear that you are not masculine/attractive enough. Fears and desires, I end up pointing out to my composition and creative-writing classes alike, are the twin engines of human motivation. The ultimate reason we’re doing anything we’re doing can be traced back to being afraid of something, wanting something, or both. (The documentary Century of the Self is a fascinating road map to the history of the marketing industry’s massively successful exploitation of this Freudian principle, spearheaded by Freud’s own nephew.)

Related to this idea is the tenet that humans are not rational creatures but rather primarily emotional ones, something important to grasp for the craft element of character development, among other things. Our fears and desires are emotion-based, hence our motivation is emotion-based. Something I’ve been using lately to illustrate this idea is a study done by the University of Houston Marketing Department showing that people are more likely to not waste food if the food is anthropomorphized, in essence, if it has a face on it:

from here

(This is also a tenet that Steve Jobs’ fundamental understanding of was a key factor in his success, as well as a critical element of Horacio Salinas’s collaged found-object creatures.)

King is essentially putting a human face on horror and vice versa in the construction of his monsters. Carrie is like the spotted banana we’re now willing to eat instead of throwing away because we’ve lived her experience and she is human to us. And she is human to us because King gives us access to her interiority and thus her fears and desires.

Cohen’s reading the culture through its monsters is indicative of how pop culture both reflects and shapes the culture. A particularly fascinating tenet of his theory to me is that zombie narratives are more prevalent in the culture when Republicans are in political control because they represent the “great unwashed masses” being a threat to wealthy, conservative government (the supposed danger to society that things like welfare “handouts” and the like represent from a conservative perspective), while vampire narratives are more prevalent when Democrats are in control, representing the wealthy and aristocratic arising in response to and as a threat toward liberal government.

As Cohen has it, monsters are what we project our cultural fears and desires onto in order to express them as an attempt to rid ourselves of them–though according to Cohen’s second tenet, we can’t. Take the shark in Jaws–a monster hidden and lurking beneath the surface, more likely to rise for the bait of bared flesh. Almost like a zombie-vampire hybrid… And Darth Vader in Star Wars–the monster turns out to be our father.

Monsters in Carrie

With Carrie we’re not quite at the zombie versus vampire dichotomy yet (the whole vampire element will come into play in ‘Salem’s Lot), but Carrie the character offers an interesting look at the narrative and cultural construction of a monster. The thing about monsters generally is that they’re frequently oversimplified manifestations of fear that reflect a cultural unconscious desire to empower ourselves by ostracizing others (Cohen tenet #4): I can only feel good about myself via the relativity of feeling better than somebody else–a posture that potentially highlights an implicit problem with our country’s foundational tenet of all men being created equal. Any politician worth his salt knows how helpful going to war can be in creating an us v. them mentality that unites the country and boosts political approval ratings. Hence a shadow justification of othering can be traced through our cultural narratives–just look at the treatment of terrorists in shows like 24 after the cultural turning point of 9/11.

The privileging of certain narratives over others is indicative of the binary us-v.-them brand of thinking. (Perhaps it makes a certain unconscious eponymous sense that the U.S. might indulge in this brand more than others.) The Ru Paul sketch implicitly demonstrates the primacy of the patriarchal lens: these heteronormative families were initially powerless to process Ru’s way of seeing things, or really even to process the idea that Ru might have a different way of seeing things than their own–indeed, they’re powerless to process the very idea that there even could be a different way of seeing things. And it’s that very feeling of powerlessness that is itself very threatening to the patriarchy. Ru, whose perspective was once on the margin, is now taking control of the narrative.

Who has control of the narrative is an integral element of defining the monster in Carrie. As discussed in my initial analysis, King goes to great lengths to humanize the figure who would be considered a monster from an external perspective, and to dramatize the shortcomings of limited perspectives in knowing the “full story” of “what happened.” Were we to only get others’ perspectives of Carrie, she’d remain a monster. Because we get Carrie’s perspective–occupying her interiority to the extent that we get the experience of feeling like we are her, mirrored in Sue’s feeling what it’s like to be Carrie via Carrie’s telepathy in the novel’s climax–she transcends the monstrous and becomes human, even though notably, she’s not human in the traditional sense due to her telekinetic and telepathic powers. And yet she is. Human.

That does not mean there are not other monsters in the book. The figuring of the monstrous comes into play in tracing the true origins of the destruction that occurs in Chamberlain, Maine. The monstrous figure of Carrie covered in blood and enacting bloody fiery retribution that we eventually build up to is merely a vessel containing a convergence of monstrous factors that can also be parsed from my initial analysis. One of the biggest factors influencing what happens is the extremity of Carrie’s religious upbringing–this is shown to be a critical factor in the alienation that makes her think the pig’s blood was a more elaborate setup than it actually was, finally pushing her over the edge. Hence, religious extremity is figured as part of the monstrous–arguably extremity of religion more than religion itself, since Margaret’s brand of religion is dramatized as a more extreme brand than most in seeming to believe that life itself is a sin. Margaret’s brand manifests an erasure of self that Carrie’s enactment of violence is an attempt to recast in a way that connects to the reading of Carrie as anticipating the age of school shooters enacting violence as a way to make themselves known, and, in their figuring, instantly immortal.

General adolescent cruelty and lack of empathy is also figured as part of the monstrous in being shown to help cause Carrie to become a monster.

But in unpacking the monstrous influences on Carrie, King goes even further in unpacking the monstrous influences on the monstrous influences. Particularly, Margaret. If the extremity of her worldview was so formative for Carrie, what was so formative in influencing that extreme worldview? Fittingly, Margaret being Carrie’s parent, this can be traced back to Margaret’s parents; as I concluded before, “Margaret’s extreme beliefs are twisted projections of Freudian familial fallout,” specifically, Margaret’s psychological inability to deal with her mother having sex with someone who is not Margaret’s father. So the ultimate monster, then, is really our psychological frailties?

Monsters Like Carrie

One can see how the monstrous in Carrie is, in a sense, figured as Frankensteinian, an amalgamation of pieces jammed together to make a monster rather than the monster being a singular creature. In the recent Netflix documentary Killer Inside: The Mind of Aaron Hernandez, a modern amalgamation of the monstrous reared a head full of formative Freudian psychological frailties alongside a serious case of football-induced brain trauma.

As the child of parents born and raised in Dallas, Texas, I once basked in the Roman-arena glories of football, donning an oversized Troy Aikman jersey to cheer for the Cowboys in the Super Bowl appearances whose commemorative posters hang framed and now extremely faded in the garage of the house I grew up in. The Cowboys were a sort of lifeline for our young family, who’d been exiled from Texas to Memphis for my father’s job–a way to remember who we were and where we’d come from. It was in the midst of the Cowboys’ peak years, sandwiched not-so-neatly between their Super Bowl wins in ’93 and ’95, that O.J. happened, and the country got a glimpse of how the violence they loved to cheer for on the field might manifest in more troubling ways. Of course, he was acquitted, and nothing about the system of professional sports seemed to change even as evidence for brain damage incurred by contact-induced concussions of the sort endlessly showcased on ESPN mounted in the intervening decades. But I quit watching, even if I’m still wearing my dead father’s Cowboys slippers as I write this.

(For a deep dive into a lifelong fan’s reckoning with the ethics of the sport he loves, see Steve Almond’s Against Football: One Fan’s Reluctant Manifesto.)

Aaron Hernandez was a more recent professional football player accused of murder. The former New England Patriot was convicted in 2015 of the murder of Odin Loyd (frequently described as his “friend”) and acquitted in 2017 of the murders of Daniel de Abreu and Safiro Furtado just days before he hung himself in prison with an appeal in his 2015 conviction ongoing.

The Netflix doc tackles Hernandez’s life from beginning to end, presenting several factors in the formation of what might look like a monster from a certain surface perspective, if you conclude that he really is a killer (which the comp teacher in me must point out the title “Killer Inside” is implicitly directing you to do).

Hernandez’s Formative Factors:
-sexual abuse by a teenaged boy when he was a child,
-sexual relationships with males and females as a teen,
-his masculinity-centric father dying suddenly when he was sixteen,
-his mother having an affair with his closest relative’s husband,
-his being pulled out of high school early to go play football at a huge faraway state school less than a year after his father died,
-marijuana addiction,
-his being the youngest draft in the NFL at 20 years old
-his brain in autopsy revealing advanced CTE

The portrayal of these factors means the doc goes beyond just painting Hernandez as a monster, indicting along the way several mainstays of our culture: Hernandez’s life becomes a lens through which larger cultural problems are magnified. One monster that emerges with barbed tentacles is the football-industrial complex. There’s always been a narrative that football is a way “out” for some kids who might have remained trapped in untenable impoverished situations for the rest of their lives otherwise, but this comes at a cost. Football players are effectively chattel sacrificed to the whims of our thinly disguised bloodlust, but we’re able to overlook this because generally they’re well compensated; it distinguishes them from the Christians in the lion pits and slaves in general, even though their bodies are still commodities. Hernandez was taking regular beatings on the field from a young age on his path to multimillion-dollar stardom. He was 27 when he died, and the CTE in his brain was more advanced than anything doctors had seen in someone so young to date. CTE affects areas of the brain that deal with decision-making, amplifying rashness and impulsivity. Combined with his professional training and daily practice in literally physically violent confrontation, this seems like a volatile mix.

This fundamental difference borne out in brain biology also bears echoes of the critical differences in Carrie’s brain from her peers, as confirmed in the novel via an autopsy. (Though Hernandez’s brain changed after he was born due to the external factor of football, while Carrie was presumably born with her brain differences based on the pains the novel takes to establish telekinesis as genetic.) And like Carrie’s trigger for channeling her powers into vengeful violence, the triggers for Hernandez’s physically violent confrontations off the football field were not random. Enter another monster: the culture’s construction of the brand of masculinity now frequently dubbed “toxic.”

Hernandez’s sexuality became a matter of much speculation after his death largely because his suicide came on the heels of a sports radio show interview with a journalist who claimed that the police had been investigating his sexuality as a factor in the motive for Lloyd’s murder. The journalist, Michele McPhee, and hosts then engaged in a bunch of crass homophobic wordplay implying Hernandez was gay. This was 2017. The theory that Hernandez’s suicide was somehow related to all of this seemed bolstered by the fact that he’d been acquitted of two murders just days before and still stood a chance to get out of his current life sentence–in theory, he should have been hopeful, not suicidal.

The doc has testimony from a high school teammate of Hernandez’s who claims to have had a sexual relationship with him at the time–more intriguingly, the teammate testifies alongside his own father, who speaks to the utter lack of acceptance the boys would have faced at the time had their relations been exposed, and to the acceptance of his bisexual son he’s come to now. There’s also separate testimony from a former NFL player who I’m not even sure knew Hernandez but who is gay and who spoke to how completely he felt the need to hide who he was, describing how he deliberately gained weight to make himself unattractive so people wouldn’t question why he didn’t have a girlfriend, and who said he had fully intended to kill himself when he reached the point he was no longer able to play football.

According to testimony in the doc, Hernandez blamed his attraction to men on the sexual abuse he’d suffered as a child. One can see how, combined with the rigid and unaccepting culture he grew up in, this would create a perfect cocktail of self-loathing. This combined with the impulsivity spurred on by his CTE is what creates the killer. Hernandez was short-tempered, as he himself acknowledged in recordings, and a major trigger for his temper seemed to be any perceived threat to his masculinity, and, despite being arguably one of the greatest athletes in the world–indeed, it starts to seem, because he was one of the greatest athletes–he perceived threats to it everywhere.

Perhaps one of the most significant similarities between Hernandez’s story and Carrie’s is the formative role of a parent’s sexual relationship outside the parents’ marriage, which in Hernandez’s case seems to be a big crack in the foundation of his masculinity. In Carrie, Margaret turns to religious extremism as a way to conceive of retribution against her widowed mother and mother’s boyfriend, and in that way King seems to show that unresolved emotional trauma can lead to dire unforeseen and extreme consequences later. In Hernandez’s case, not only did his father die when his masculine identity was still in adolescent formation–despite his father’s influence being shown to be toxic in a lot of ways, much was made in the doc of the significance of his loss of a critical male role model at a critical time–but around then Hernandez finds out not only that his mother has been having an affair, but that it’s with the husband of the female cousin he’s become most emotionally dependent upon. And then this guy up and moves into the house with him and his mom.

It’s hard for me to conceive of a more emasculating scenario for somebody growing up in an environment that’s more or less a shrine to traditional conceptions of masculinity. And Hernandez’s emotional inability to cope with such a severe degree of emasculation seems to be a big part of why he consistently scored as emotionally and socially immature on any evaluation of these metrics he ever got. But of course his scoring that way, alongside numerous other red flags including incidents of violence, never stopped his football career from advancing apace–though it looked like it might, for a second, when the Patriots took until the fourth round to draft him in 2010. But draft him they did–at 20, he was the youngest draft pick to enter the NFL–eventually offering him a contract for $40 million.

The discipline necessitated by the Patriots’ dynasty was apparently cancelled out by the convenient proximity of the team’s location to certain unsavory acquaintances Hernandez had grown up with and now continued to see. One of these was a drug dealer that Hernandez apparently shot at one point, and when the guy didn’t die, Hernandez’s paranoia that the guy would seek retribution reached extreme levels. He installed an elaborate surveillance system around his mansion that wound up recording a lot of the most incriminating evidence that he’d murdered Odin Lloyd. Narratively, this is Oedipal, him causing his own downfall directly by trying to avoid it. (Carrie does this in some sense by choosing to attend the prom with the belief that it offers the only possibility of escape from her dreary domestic prospects.) But the point is that the formation of the character who makes self-destructive choices for the sake of self-preservation is reflective of the culture they come from.

The construction of a monster is the construction of a man.

Some have faulted the doc for putting too much emphasis on the sexuality factor–evidence for which remains largely speculative, though according to Hernandez’s brother’s DJ’s memoir, Hernandez came out to him, their mother, and his lawyer–and not enough emphasis on the CTE, but along the lines of Carrie capturing the tragedy of a specific convergence of circumstances, I feel like the doc captured the possible combination of factors at play and did not let the NFL off the hook for treating its players as expendable. I came away with the impression reinforced that the stakes and scale of the capitalist-driven football complex dwarf concerns for individual well-being. But not all of the individuals that this NFL culture and the potential CTE affect become murderers.

I can understand how some might think that the doc leaned on the sexuality angle for the sake of sensationalism (which might echo a larger debate about King’s treatment and the culture’s consumption of dark subject matter), but the people who are unwilling to entertain the notion that Hernandez could have murdered someone simply because they knew he was gay or bi strikes me as naive, as do attempts to apply “logic” to Hernandez’s rationale:

But it’s such a strange path — to murder someone, risking a record-breaking, $40 million annual contract with the most successful football team in recent memory, just to avoid suspicion of being gay. It’s so strange, in fact, that it’s unlikely — and indeed the documentary later thoroughly debunks this idea as purely speculative.

Vox.com

Yes, the doc concedes we still have no actual idea why Hernandez killed Lloyd; it also points out that his motive in the double murder he ended up acquitted of was never stronger than his being angry that one of the guys had spilled a drink on him. We’re at the point where we have to make some educated guesses. And these guesses aren’t primarily important for the light they shed on Hernandez’s case per se, but for what light the existing possibilities shed on the culture. It may still technically be speculative that his CTE was responsible for his impulsivity and aggression. It’s a case that reminds me of sociopaths: not all sociopaths become serial killers, even if serial killers are usually sociopaths; it’s about the other circumstances that shape the sociopath that determine if they’ll become a killer. Similarly, lots of current and former football players probably have CTE by now. Clearly not all of them have ended up killing people. So while the CTE factor is definitely something we need to be aware of–and reason enough to abolish football altogether as far as I’m personally concerned–we have to also be mindful of the factors that might exacerbate it. CTE is an injury more likely to occur in the world of contact sports–boxing and football. Which is to say that the environments in which CTE is more likely to develop come with preconceived ideations of masculinity attached that seem almost especially designed to exacerbate it. This would be how Hernandez enacts Cohen’s seventh tenet–when he says monsters stand at the “threshold of becoming,” he means the monsters turn out to be creatures of our own creation–we did it to ourselves, just like Hernandez recording himself with incriminating evidence.

The Monster’s Body

“…This bond doth give thee here no jot of blood;
The words expressly are ‘a pound of flesh.’”

Merchant of Venice, Act-IV, Scene I

When Cohen posits that the monster’s body is the cultural body in his first thesis, he means our monsters reflect the needs of our time period. Football has been revered in our culture for decades, but the continued reverence in light of the more recent revelations about its pitfalls to the physical body reflects the current trend of plunging ahead with our pleasures in the face of increasingly blatant knowledge of dire consequences (global warming, anyone?), enacting a kind of gulf between cultural brain and cultural body.

And speaking of bodies, even though Hernandez is not figured as the monster by the Netflix doc itself, it does offer a glimpse of how those who prosecuted him for murder attempted to read his body as that of a monster. Hernandez was known for his tattoos as a football player, and his tattoo artist testified at one of his murder trials about inking on him a head-on view of a gun barrel, a bullet chamber with one bullet missing, “God forgives”–backwards. A prosecutor explicates this as a confession. Circumstantial, I’d tell my students, but in conjunction with all the other pieces of evidence, not insignificant.

The factoring of Hernandez’s physical body into the equation harkens back to Carrie’s body and the period, and in particular the Fleabag period speech about men’s psychological need to seek out the blood and pain they weren’t born with like women were:

[Men] have to seek it out, they invent all these gods and demons and things just so they can feel guilty about things, which is something we do very well on our own. And then they create wars so they can feel things and touch each other and when there aren’t any wars they can play rugby.

The show being British, the character cites rugby, but football is the perfect American parallel. Unfortunately, in Hernandez’s case it seems that the sport that’s supposed to serve as our surrogate for bloodlust had the opposite effect and amplified that bloodlust in multiple ways.

If the monster’s an individual creature instead of an amalgamation of factors, it’s easier to kill–so in (monster) theory, it’s the amalgamation that’s more horrifying. But in analyzing this amalgamation, there’s the risk of potentially mitigating individual responsibility: does contextualizing Hernandez’s crimes as products of larger monstrous forces in the culture let him off the hook? Does King let Carrie off the hook (especially if you read her as vengefully dismantling the patriarchy who forged her)? Possibly not, since both of their stories end in their deaths, which is to say, the destruction of the bodies that served as vessels to enact the impulses of their addled brains….

Monsters Continued

The question of whether humanizing potential monsters is itself monstrous is one I’ll return to as King’s work continues to explore different monstrous dimensions, but it’s worth noting that we’re currently in a significant cultural moment with the ongoing trial of Harvey Weinstein. Jia Tolentino demonstrates how revisiting fictional texts refracts insight both on the texts and the current moment by re-reading J.M. Coetze’s novel Disgrace, and x glimpses the trial via the lens of the Oscars ceremony with particularly monstrous undertones:

The night before Salinas’s appearance in court, the Academy Awards had taken place in Los Angeles, and there was something instructive to me in witnessing the two events in such quick succession. Clearly, there was much to distinguish Hollywood’s glitz-fest from the grim proceedings of the People of New York v. Harvey Weinstein, which, by February 10th, had entered its fourth week. But, sitting at the trial, which I had attended intermittently since its opening, I found myself thinking of the beautiful actresses who took the stand, one by one, as the shadow doubles of those posing on the red carpet of a Hollywood awards show. The latter had seemingly bested the system, ascending to its highest point, while the former had fallen victim to it.

If we’re technically in the throes of a conservative political administration, then pop culture should be replete with zombies: and indeed, The Walking Dead is still somehow going strong, and The Passage, a vampire narrative in 2019, was cancelled. But Weinstein strikes me (and others) as a vampire figure, so I’ll save that cultural commentary for the lens of ‘Salem’s Lot, if I ever get there…

-SCR

Carrie: A Period Piece

My first post about Carrie covered how Stephen King is able to derive horror from the real as much as the fantastical–in particular a horror of the domestic and the mundane. But there’s definitely more to say about the horror King derives from a particular plot device. What could better straddle the cross-section between the horrific and the mundane than not just bleeding from your vagina, but bleeding from it on a regular basis?

So let’s talk about the fact that the book that launched the career of the King opens with a scene of a teenaged girl getting her first period.

It’s a birth scene. Or, a scene of a birth of a birth, literal birth not happening here but rather the starting point of the biological process that enables birth, which would make this starting point a metaphorical birth, or possibly birth’s literal birth? Metaphorical birth also being an appropriate metaphor for how narrative/plot works in that the actual event of the birth is big enough to constitute a narrative climax (which is perhaps where all of this really starts–except no, first is the period) and whatever this climactic event is in the novel you are writing (in this novel, Carrie’s destroying most of the town, and/or killing her mother), you the writer have to trace that event back to its starting point, and open the novel there. Hence, we open in the girl’s locker room when Carrie gets her period.

This is where it all starts. King’s career; Carrie’s now inevitable destruction. But neither could have started without…some conducive circumstances.

The Period in Pop Culture

If one need evidence of the period’s destructive power still reigning resonant in pop culture, perhaps one need look no further than a recent SNL sketch with Adam Driver that aired in the first episode of 2020, in which a young girl’s trying to manage her period results in significant plumbing damage:

“Just tell the hot dad that your period broke his whole house.”

And if one wants period commentary that digs a little deeper, a scene from the stunning second season of Fleabag not only directly invokes Carrie:

but offers large-scale insights that deserve to be quoted in full:

“Women are born with pain built in. It’s our physical destiny: period pains, sore boobs, childbirth, you know. We carry it within ourselves throughout our lives, men don’t.

“They have to seek it out, they invent all these gods and demons and things just so they can feel guilty about things, which is something we do very well on our own. And then they create wars so they can feel things and touch each other and when there aren’t any wars they can play rugby.

“We have it all going on in here inside, we have pain on a cycle for years and years and years and then just when you feel you are making peace with it all, what happens? The menopause comes, the f***ing menopause comes, and it is the most wonderful f***ing thing in the world.

“And yes, your entire pelvic floor crumbles and you get f***ing hot and no one cares, but then you’re free, no longer a slave, no longer a machine with parts. You’re just a person.”

I guess we need look no further for the ultimate explanation of why King writes horror fiction filled with “demons and things”…

The Period in Carrie

It seems significant that the onset of Carrie’s menstrual cycle is the onset of the plot of the book on two fronts:

Both medical and psychological writers on the subject are in agreement that Carrie White’s exceptionally late and traumatic commencement of the menstrual cycle might well have provided the trigger for her latent talent.

There’s the period itself as trigger: Carrie is coming into her true powers at this moment because this is the moment at which she becomes a woman. But she might not have come to exercise her powers the way she does had this advent of womanhood not occurred in the traumatic fashion it does, a potential commentary that the onset of womanhood is always inherently traumatic, though this is potentially undermined by Ms. Desjardin’s attitude toward her first period:

A terrible and black foreknowledge grew in Rita Desjardin’s mind. It was incredible, could not be. She herself had begun menstruation shortly after her eleventh birthday and had gone to the head of the stairs to yell down excitedly: “Hey, Mum, I’m on the rag!”

Yet Carrie’s name itself seems to be potential commentary on that burden of womanhood further elaborated on so articulately in the Fleabag speech–she carries the burden of womanhood!

Carrie’s terror at what is happening in the locker room, her belief that she is dying, offers a defamiliarized look at the period that makes its horrific aspects all the more salient. It’s interesting that through the defamiliarized lens of Carrie’s ignorance, the period appears a harbinger of death rather than its opposite. This ties back into the horror of the domestic: the birth of the child = the death of the parent, in terms of personal identity.

The period symbolism potentially comes to a climax in the moments after Carrie’s death, in the final lines of Part Two:

[Sue’s] rapid breathing slowed, slowed, caught suddenly as if on a thorn—

And suddenly vented itself in one howling, cheated scream.

As she felt the slow course of dark menstrual blood down her thighs.

On the surface the description of this coursing blood itself reads as horrific. But if, as discussed previously, Sue’s possible pregnancy up to this point is the true horror, then her period coming here should actually be a relief (unless, now that Tommy’s dead, she wants his baby to remember him by, but this would be pure speculation because there’s no clear reference to indicate she might feel this way). Since King leaves the reader to make this connection, the horrific undertones surrounding the period in this climactic moment remain.

King’s descriptions of menstrual flow in moments like this one (and of Carrie in the opening shower scene) feel a bit off; if you must know and don’t already, blood does not come gushing down your thighs the moment you start your period. But I’m assuming that King’s wife would have told him this, so it seems almost intentional that he would have left these exaggerated descriptions in to serve more as symbolism and set a more ominous tone. When I think of the idea that dictates discussion in the pop-culture composition classes I teach at UH–that pop culture both reflects and shapes our world–Carrie seems to express anxiety over a power women inherently have that men expressly do not–the power to grow life. It’s also probably responsible for amplifying that anxiety through the decades; one way to look at the narrative (that may or may not be oversimplifying things) is that it’s just an exaggerated version of PMS, or PMS taken to its most extreme, “logical” conclusion: Carrie’s just a crazy cartoonish bitch on the rag.

I guess it’s open to debate whether this is an admirable acknowledgment of the true power women hold coiled within them, or just a bad joke. Certainly my analysis up to this point would seem to show the novel is more than just the latter. But I’m still having trouble discerning if the female rage this narrative expresses through the period is feminist or derogatory.

It is not insignificant that the figure who will become monstrous is herself initially the one who is horrified–Carrie thinks that bleeding from her vagina must mean she is dying. Then there are the disgusted reactions of her classmates and teacher; Ms. Desjardin remarks on it:

“I understand how those girls felt. The whole thing just made me want to take the girl and shake her. Maybe there’s some kind of instinct about menstruation that makes women want to snarl, I don’t know.”

That last remark feels a little on the nose, but fine. Part of the horror is simply being a woman, because women are inherently more cruel than men:

“It seemed like . . . oh, a big laugh. Girls can be cat-mean about that sort of thing, and boys don’t really understand. The boys would tease Carrie for a little while and then forget, but the girls . . . it went on and on and on and I can’t even remember where it started any more.”

Of course, a period is a starting point, the starting point of the life cycle. King has effectively written a scene of his own birth as a writer.

Now let’s talk more about the woman who gave birth to Carrie.

Margaret and the Serpent

In the initial background we get on Carrie’s mother, Margaret White, it’s noted that she might not even have known she was pregnant before she gave birth to Carrie:

We have records of at least three letters to a friend in Kenosha, Wisconsin, that seem to prove conclusively that Mrs. White believed, from her fifth month on, that she had “a cancer of the womanly parts” and would soon join her husband in heaven. . . .

As far as Carrie’s mother Margaret is concerned, her pregnancy might as well have been a cancer. Her religious beliefs are so extreme that she believes sex itself is a sin, even if the man and woman are married. By this “logic,” human life itself is an abomination. We see in one of Margaret’s rants that this “logic” seems to have derived from a slightly different interpretation of the biblical Garden of Eden story than most of us might be used to, the usual version being that Adam and Eve were banished from the garden for eating the fruit from the one tree God told them not to after the serpent tempted Eve with it. In this version, it’s generally interpreted to have been the woman’s fault (and not the serpent’s) for eating the fruit and getting Adam to eat it, and thus the woman’s fault that humankind lost paradise (hence gender inequality thence forward). Margaret’s version of the story is similar but slightly different:

“And Eve was weak and loosed the raven on the world,” Momma continued, “and the raven was called Sin, and the first Sin was Intercourse. And the Lord visited Eve with a Curse, and the Curse was the Curse of Blood. And Adam and Eve were driven out of the Garden and into the World and Eve found that her belly had grown big with child.”

The first sin is usually interpreted as eating the fruit that was forbidden, not intercourse itself. Margaret recasts Eve’s period and pregnancy as a punishment. In the dozens of times we went over this story in my twelve years of Catholic schooling, this was not an interpretation I was ever presented with. We Catholic students were taught that sex was sacred precisely because it was a gateway to life (and that blocking that gateway with things like birth control was a sin precisely because of its potential interference with life, by which “logic” one might then argue that not having sex at any given point is a sin because it’s interfering with the potential production of life…). At any rate, this is what Margaret tells Carrie when Carrie first comes home with her period saying it’s “not her fault.”

Margaret returns to the topic much later in the book when she and Carrie have their climactic final confrontation, explaining that she became pregnant with Carrie after Carrie’s father raped her:

“At first it was all right. We lived sinlessly. We slept in the same bed, belly to belly sometimes, and o, I could feel the presence of the Serpent, but we. never. did. until.”

This is an intriguing passage to me due to its invocation of the Serpent. From the physical description, there’s no getting around that Margaret is saying she can feel his erection as they sleep facing each other, that that’s what the Serpent physically symbolizes here, but of course it’s still the snake from the Garden of Eden that tempts Eve. In this passage then, the erect penis becomes the temptation, and the source of danger. In a way, then, this is a passage that implicitly places the blame for the fall of man back on…the man.

The book opens with a short article about the time stones rained down on the White house when Carrie was three, and it’s not too long before this incident is elaborated on in more detail in a magazine interview with Carrie’s former next-door neighbor. This neighbor was a teenager at the time and liked to sunbathe in a bathing suit in the yard, which upset Carrie’s mother. One day her bathing suit top slipped off when she was sleeping, leading Carrie to ask about her breasts:

So I fixed it and said, ‘Those are my breasts, Carrie.’

Then she said—very solemnly: ‘I wish I had some.’

I said: ‘You have to wait, Carrie. You won’t start to get them for another . . . oh, eight or nine years.’

‘No, I won’t,’ she said. ‘Momma says good girls don’t.’ She looked strange for a little girl, half sad and half self-righteous.

I could hardly believe it, and the first thing that popped into my mind also popped right out my mouth. I said: ‘Well, I’m a good girl. And doesn’t your mother have breasts?’

She lowered her head and said something so softly I couldn’t hear it. When I asked her to repeat it, she looked at me defiantly and said that her momma had been bad when she made her and that was why she had them. She called them dirtypillows, as if it was all one word.

It’s interesting that this idea of divine punishment that Margaret has conceived (so to speak) will likely register as ridiculous and extreme to the reader, yet the structure of the book itself is in fact a model of retribution–Carrie’s.

Margaret figures that her sin of Intercourse is responsible for the abomination of Carrie’s being a witch–“Thou shalt not suffer a witch to live” is her justification for attempting to murder her own daughter because that daughter decided to go to a school dance. In Margaret’s estimation, sex is truly what is horrifying, though this is complicated by the fact that she claims to have enjoyed being raped. Through 2020 hindsight lenses, this is a little problematic.

The Historical Period

Moving on to less literal interpretations of the period, we might discuss how the larger historical period of the 1970s is reflected via the text of Carrie. I can’t really pinpoint why King decided to set the book a few years ahead of the time he was actually writing it (the book was published in 1974, but in it Prom Night occurs in 1979). I noted in my first post that the Vietnam references in Carrie pale in comparison to those that will populate Salem’s Lot, and have already unpacked the JFK references. Now I’m interested in the racial references.

One of the seminal academic texts about the treatment of race–particularly of African Americans–in western literature is Toni Morrison’s Playing in the Dark: Whiteness and the Literary Imagination (1992). In it, Morrison asks:

When does racial “unconsciousness” or awareness of race enrich interpretive language, and when does it impoverish it?

p. xii

Our American literary landscape is rife with texts that treat race “unconsciously,” which is certainly interesting to note in light of King’s recurring themes about the horrors that stem from our unconscious–his treatment of “psychological” horror. Morrison tracks instances of blackness in literature figured as a “dark, abiding, signing Africanist presence” that the “major and championed characteristics of our national literature–individualism, masculinity, social engagement versus historical isolation; acute and ambiguous moral problematics; the thematics of innocence coupled with an obsession with figurations of death and hell” (p. 5) exist in response to. This is a classic example of texts reflecting cultural attitudes in an unconscious (which is to say, unintentional) way. The Africanist presence exists in the marginal shadows of the white mainstream that has dominated literature–the Africanist presence is the white mainstream’s shadow self, implicitly a site of horror that whiteness can define itself in relation to.

So where can we detect the Africanist presence in Carrie?

There are a handful of references in the text that gesture toward this presence. The n-word that would seem to be the most overt signifier of outright racism appears one time, in the passage where Sue projects her domestic horrors most patently:

The word she was avoiding was expressed To Conform, in the infinitive, and it conjured up miserable images of hair in rollers, long afternoons in front of the ironing board in front of the soap operas while hubby was off busting heavies in an anonymous Office; of joining the P.T.A. and then the country club when their income moved into five figures; of pills in circular yellow cases without number to insure against having to move out of the misses’ sizes before it became absolutely necessary and against the intrusion of repulsive little strangers who shat in their pants and screamed for help at two in the morning; of fighting with desperate decorum to keep the n*****s out of Kleen Korners, standing shoulder to shoulder with Terri Smith (Miss Potato Blossom of 1975) and Vicki Jones (Vice President of the Women’s League), armed with signs and petitions and sweet, slightly desperate smiles.

I’ve censored the text here; the actual word does appear in the original. (We can have a debate about literary censorship; this is the only word I personally have been moved to censor in disseminating texts, whether in blog form or to students.) I don’t know what “Kleen Korners” is referring to, but it’s referenced a couple of other times, always in relation to the country club; a questionable google result claims it’s a kind of mop, which would make the reference figurative. This is a passage filtered through Sue’s disdain for the domestic, which makes it more of a commentary on the town’s racism that Sue, and via her King, is making, rather than engaging in herself–she does not want to be subsumed into the town’s values, including its casual racism. The casual racism seems here, in fact, to be part of what’s so horrific about the small-town lifestyle. Here King seems to be potentially acknowledging the marginalizing of the Africanist presence rather than engaging in that marginalizing himself.

But other racial references in the text do not seem to be made with such deliberate commentary, though it might be hard to tell:

When I was a little girl I had a Walt Disney storybook called Song of the South, and it had that Uncle Remus story about the tarbaby in it. There was a picture of the tarbaby sitting in the middle of the road, looking like one of those old-time Negro minstrels with the blackface and great big white eyes. When Carrie opened her eyes it was like that. They were the only part of her that wasn’t completely red.

This passage is from a memoir by Prom Night survivor Norma Watson. What makes the racial aspect more difficult to parse is its placement in an epistolary snippet rather than a direct scene. One could say this is Norma’s casual racism, not King’s, and that King is merely representing it (in a more conscious way than might be delineated by the term “reflecting” it). The passage then also potentially comments on how Norma’s casual racism is a product of the culture’s in a way that shows how pop culture texts can disseminate such problematic attitudes–thanks, Walt Disney! It’s interesting that Norma’s invocation of this Disney text is to explain why everyone was laughing at Carrie in the moments after the blood dumped: the tarbaby is figured as a source of humor, a joke. Its connection to Carrie, then, provides potential further commentary in that the other students’ laughing at Carrie prompts her bloody retribution, is, in a way, responsible for it. And if it’s responsible for it, then it’s potentially being pinpointed as problematic. Hence the humorous positioning of the tarbaby could be figured as more consciously than unconsciously problematic–again meaning that King is deliberately commenting on racism being problematic rather than problematically engaging in that racism himself. And yet, Carrie’s face in the moments after the blood dumps is a defining image in the text, and reaching for an image encapsulating both the humorous and the horrific and finding a “tarbaby” is a problem. The most damning evidence that it’s a problem for the author, and not just the character, would be this subsequent minstrel reference:

They came in pajamas and curlers (Mrs. Dawson, she of the now-deceased son who had been a very funny fellow, came in a mudpack as if dressed for a minstrel show); they came to see what happened to their town, to see if it was indeed lying burned and bleeding. Many of them also came to die.

We get this in a direct scene, and not only in a direct scene but in an omniscient voice in the scene rather than through a specific character’s point of view, which means this can’t be written off as showcasing small-mindedness rather than actively engaging in it. Why does a cosmetic mud mask need to be compared to blackface (even if it’s in parentheses)? The comparison seems to speak to casual cultural prejudices ingrained in King more than anything else, as does this line:

“Would you take me with you?” [Chris] asked. She looked at him from the floor, her lip puffed to negroid size, her eyes pleading.

This passage is also from a direct scene, but in it we’re squarely located in Billy’s point of view rather than in an omniscient description. This potentially means this description could be written off as Billy’s small-mindedness, but that problematic description in the omniscient point of view potentially undermines this, as it does with more charitable readings of the other instances of well, like the Disney one. King’s offhandedly using blackface as a point of reference makes me think he probably wasn’t calling out Disney’s negative influence on the culture, but that King’s description (and not just Norma’s) was rather a symptom of this negative influence.

The description of Chris’s lip is the last reference to an Africanist presence I can find, but while we’re on Chris and Billy, it’s worth noting the dynamic the above passage and its implicit racism is a part of depicting: they’re fighting over whether the buckets with the pigs’ blood can be traced back to them, and Billy has slapped Chris because she’s freaking out. Chris, in turn, is “pleading” for Billy to take her with him to California immediately after he’s used violence on her. Violence being a significant element of their sexual attraction has been well established in their previous interactions, and Billy’s titillation has more than clearly escalated in response to assaulting Carrie:

When this was over he was going to have [Chris] until every other time she’d been had was like two pumps with a fag’s little finger. He was going on her like a raw cob through butter.

(The homophobia in this passage could arguably be attributed to Billy, not King, but we’ll see a more stringent and questionable thread of homophobia emerge in ‘Salem’s Lot.)

The sexual violence between Chris and Billy is an interesting subplot in relation to other aspects of the book, specifically Carrie’s powers and Margaret White’s attitude toward sex. It’s also interesting through the post-MeToo lens of the year 2020, as their relations smear the boundaries of consent:

If she had not given in willingly on Monday, he would have taken her by force.

Chris’s attraction to Billy starts to appear to exist due to his violence toward her rather than existing in spite of it. A scene that depicts the complexities of this attraction while potentially crossing the line into gratuitous titillation for titillation’s sake encapsulates the combination of highbrow and low that’s really quintessential King: while Billy’s driving them in his car the tire blows out and Chris thinks they’re going to die in an accident; when they don’t and she gets mad at him afterward, he orders her around to help him fix the tire, which she initially resists but then gives in to, a dynamic of submission and desire realized in the sex they have immediately afterward that’s exacerbated by her near-death experience and symbolized by the grease that gets smeared all over her expensive clothes. (As it happens, the only specific thing I remember from my first read of the book as a teenager was when Billy “groped greedily.”) Chris’s attraction to Billy is also interesting in light of her father the lawyer, he who tries to bully the principal through nonphysical means. Billy’s delinquency and raw potential for violence is what patently distinguishes him from Chris’s other lovers, another conflation of violence with sex that’s all over the book (and likely King’s work in general).

Some might argue over whether Chris’s attitudes are a reflection of 1970s misogyny ingrained in the author or a more complex expression of female subjectivity. I’d say Chris’s character reflects the shallow attitudes of the time in a way that tries to call attention to their being problematic more than expressing them in an actively problematic way, though King is not above using a character for both meaningful commentary and shock value/the aforementioned gratuitous titillation. It’s the combo that makes him the King, and when he claims his work is the “Big Mac” of the literary landscape, as he did once in a 60 Minutes interview, I like to think it’s this combo element he’s implicitly invoking. But the fact that King has basically positioned Carrie’s subjectivity at the center of the narrative would seem to support more complex readings of his representations of femalehood, and make his Big Mac comment a self-deprecating underestimation of his own work potentially surprising for its being uttered by a white male….

There’s an especially interesting passage where the conflation of sex and violence seems most explicit, describing Sue’s feeling in her climactic confrontation with Carrie when Carrie uses her telepathy to access Sue’s interior:

The feverish feeling of being raped in her most secret corridors began to fade.

While rape has reared its ugly head in not just one but two relationships in the novel (Chris and Billy; Margaret and Ralph), this passage is the only time the word itself appears in the book–in a figurative rather than literal description. This passage is actually describing Carrie retracting her telepathic powers out of Sue’s mind, which she does immediately after she’s gleaned the most relevant information from Sue’s psyche:

But no ill will for Carrie personally, no plan to get her in front of everyone and undo her.

Carrie may or may not realize here that a lot of the destruction she’s wrought this night might have been unwarranted; regardless, the likening of telepathically reading someone to a sexual violation seems a critical link to an allegorical reading of how the horrors of the fantastical express the horrors of the real, and sexual violence is irrevocably linked to the two primary causes of Carrie’s destruction–Carrie’s literal birth and the procurers of the pigs’ blood. Also, the violation of secrecy that telepathy entails as invoked in the rape passage connects back to the period themes:

Someone began to laugh, a solitary, affrighted hyena sound, and she did open her eyes, opened them to see who it was and it was true, the final nightmare, she was red and dripping with it, they had drenched her in the very secretness of blood, in front of all of them and her thought

(oh . . . i . . . COVERED . . . with it)

was colored a ghastly purple with her revulsion and her shame. She could smell herself and it was the stink of blood, the awful wet, coppery smell.

We can connect this back to the first minstrel passage, that defining image looking externally at Carrie opening her eyes–here we’re re-experiencing that moment, but from Carrie’s perspective, returned to her female subjectivity. This return might redeem some potential misogyny, but does nothing to address or mitigate the racism of the tarbaby image. Instead, we’re getting more complex associations with shame and the period figured in the act of pig’s blood being dumped on Carrie, an act that, according to Carrie’s take on it in the wording of this passage, externalizes and advertises something women should be ashamed of. I previously commented on the symmetry of the narrative (which the narrative itself points out) in starting with Carrie getting her period in the shower and ending with showering her in blood; Billy wasn’t able to get buckets full of period blood, but, as he keeps subtly chuckling to himself (“Pig blood for a pig”), he got the next best thing. The pig is woman and woman is pig… But it’s the symmetry of the horror that amplifies and associates that horror specifically with the period (which is to thus symbolically associate it with womanhood itself)–it’s nightmarish enough to start your period in a public place, made more so if you don’t have a clue what this blood between your legs actually is, and the blood shower in front of the entire school is that original nightmare wrought extreme: “drenched…in the very secretness of blood.” The period has symbolically been rendered an on-stage spectacle with associations that don’t seem especially positive. But then: Carrie enacts bloody revenge (blood for blood; Billy ought to like that), with the power she holds in her mind. Described this way, Carrie suddenly sounds like an allegory for righteous female vengeance against the patriarchy that has made women ashamed of the very menstrual cycles that are responsible for the literal existence of every patriarchy member (so to speak).

So, it’s complicated.

To circle back to the setting of the figurative telepathic rape–a roadhouse parking lot–also connects back to the literal idea of rape, since the “roadhouse” is an integral element of Margaret White’s attitude toward sex:

The Something was dangerous, ancient, unutterably evil. It could make you Feeble. Watch, Momma said. It comes at night. It will make you think of the evil that goes on in parking lots and roadhouses.

and Margaret prays:

“—protect us from he with the split foot who waits in the alleys and in the parking lots of roadhouses, O Saviour—”

It’s revealed that Margaret’s parents owned a roadhouse, which, combined with the fact that this is apparently the reason her father died, would seem to be the source of Margaret’s tracing the sinful origin point of sexual desire back to this precise location:

Her parents were fairly well-to-do; they owned a prosperous night spot just outside the Motton town limits called The Jolly Roadhouse. Margaret’s father, John Brigham, was killed in a barroom shooting incident in the summer of 1959.

The roadhouse being the source of her father’s death is also significant because this death leaves Margaret’s mother available to take up with another man. One might postulate/psychoanalyze from the clues King drops that it’s Margaret’s inability to cope with this familial intruder that leads her to channel her complex emotions into a righteous religious indignation that reaches the beyond-fundamentalist extreme level of believing that sex and thus life itself is a sin: Margaret essentially comes to believe her own existence should be cancelled out.

Self-loathing, much?

It is thus not insignificant that Chris and Billy abscond to a roadhouse after dumping the blood on Carrie, or that Carrie dies in the parking lot of a roadhouse that she’s specifically heading toward for the sake of her mother:

It was three miles out to The Cavalier, even cross country, as Carrie was going. …

It was really amazing that she kept going. But of course it was for Momma. Momma wanted her to be the Angel’s Fiery Sword, to destroy—

If we can glean how Margaret’s extreme beliefs are twisted projections of Freudian familial fallout, here we’re definitely seeing the twists and turns tangling Carrie’s maternal influence: here she is still wanting to please the woman who just tried to kill her–the woman who’s essentially been trying to kill her her entire life, and who’s essentially responsible for the carnage Carrie wreaks on the town if we want to play the blame game (which novels/narratives are more or less always playing, to varying degrees of complexity), based on this passage that seems to trace the origin point of Carrie’s alienation to the religious influence of her mother:

She had defied Momma in a hundred little ways, had tried to erase the red-plague circle that had been drawn around her from the first day she had left the controlled environment of the small house on Carlin Street and had walked up to the Barker Street Grammar School with her Bible under her arm. She could still remember that day, the stares, and the sudden, awful silence when she had gotten down on her knees before lunch in the school cafeteria—the laughter had begun on that day and had echoed up through the years.

The red-plague circle was like blood itself—you could scrub and scrub and scrub and still it would be there, not erased, not clean.

This invocation of blood-as-marker–aside from being reminiscent of Lady Macbeth–reads with certain shall-we-say negative connotations that complicate readings of the novel’s treatment of the period. Blood as unclean, blood as signifier of death rather than life. Blood as the trigger of destruction, both in the onset of Carrie’s menstrual cycle heralding the true advent of her powers and in the dumping of pig’s blood being the trigger for her using those powers to consciously enact a massacre. Blood as secret and not-so-secret shame.

As we can see (by my massive segue away from the initial Africanist presence discussion if nothing else), female subjectivity is explored in depth here while the Africanist presence is not just a shadow, but a shadow of a shadow: there are not even actual characters on the margin representing this presence; instead the presence is only invoked in absentia for the sake of (white) comparisons on three separate occasions (one in parentheses), with a fourth reference that still does not invoke a specific individual character.

It will be interesting to see if/how/when the Africanist presence becomes less shadowy in King’s work with time (and to revisit his appearance on The Chappelle Show during which he seems to reveal his general racial cluelessness), though it is worth noting just how shadowy it is at the outset in the work of a white man who came of age in the 1960s. I’m not by any means calling King a racist, but in the vein of Toni Morrison trying to highlight how the text reflects the author’s internalized worldview of this presence–how the author figures this presence unconsciously.

Thinking about representations of marginalized groups in literature is also interesting in light of the publishing industry’s most recent controversy surrounding Jeanine Cummins’ American Dirt published earlier this year, a much-hyped novel that King hailed as “an extraordinary piece of work” (and we all know what an endorsement from Stephen King can do). Here a white writer has represented Latinx characters rather than relegating them to the shadowy margins, and that representation has been called into question by the people represented. (You can read more about the backlash and the backlash against the backlash here.) The main takeaway seems to be that white people are still largely clueless about such issues, and if King’s blurb is any indication, so is he.

-SCR

Here We Go: Carrie

“All right. What happened?”

…. “Nobody knows, not yet.”

Stephen King. “Carrie.” iBooks.

Carrie, Stephen King’s first novel, was published in 1974. The book juxtaposes epistolary snippets from newspapers, books, and even graffiti scrawled about Carrie White on classroom desks with direct scenes of the titular character and those surrounding her who will play pivotal roles in her taking revenge on the small town of Chamberlain, Maine, where Carrie has always been treated as an outcast.

The book is divided into three parts. Part One, “Blood Sport,” opens with a newspaper story about stones raining down on Margaret White’s house when her daughter Carrie was three. We then go into a direct scene of a morning when Carrie, now a high-school senior, is showering in the locker room after gym class when, unbeknownst to her, she gets her period for the first time. Having never been informed about this standard occurrence by her mother, Carrie believes the blood means she is dying and freaks out while her fellow classmates jeer and throw tampons at her. As Carrie is distressed, weird things happen like a light fixture popping and an ashtray flipping off the principal’s desk when he dismisses her for the day. On her walk home, Carrie notes that the muscle in her brain she can use to move things sometimes seems to be getting stronger. When she then confronts her zealously religious mother for never informing her about periods, her mother says that the blood is a mark of sin, and she locks Carrie in the prayer closet for hours.

Meanwhile, one of the girls in the locker room during the incident, Sue Snell, confides to her popular boyfriend Tommy that she feels bad about what happened. The sentiment is not shared by another girl involved, Chris Hargensen, who refuses to participate in the gym teacher Ms. Desjardin’s detentions for the incident and is thus banned from attending the prom (or Spring Ball). Sue asks Tommy to take Carrie to the prom as her own penance, and he agrees; he has some trouble convincing Carrie he really wants to take her, but she eventually agrees. Discovering Tommy and Carrie’s names on the ballots for Ball King and Queen, Chris enlists her delinquent boyfriend Billy to procure some pig’s blood, which he does with his delinquent group of friends.

In Part Two, “Prom Night,” Carrie’s mother of course does not want her to go to the prom and is enraged Carrie’s sewn a sinful red dress for the occasion, but Carrie goes (after enduring some anxiety that Tommy will not actually show up). She enjoys herself at first, until she and Tommy are called up on stage after being voted King and Queen, and Billy and Chris unleash the buckets of pig blood Billy’s rigged above the stage, dousing Carrie and knocking Tommy out with a falling pail. A bit later, Sue, at home, notices that the school she can see through her kitchen window from a distance is on fire. We learn through other accounts that somehow in the gym the doors shut and locked themselves, trapping the majority of the students inside while the fire-sprinkler system starts deploying. Carrie is later seen walking around town starting fires and disabling the fire hydrants that might put them out.

We circle back to Carrie’s point of view of what happened when the blood dropped, seeing that she mentally shut the gym doors and started the sprinklers in response to her classmates’ laughter. After leaving, she stops at a church to pray (but fails to sense God) before heading home to confront her mother, who confesses that when Carrie’s father raped her, she liked it, before stabbing Carrie in the shoulder. Carrie is still able to kill her by using her telekinesis to stop her mother’s heart, then leaves. When Billy and Chris pass by her driving and Billy tries to run her over, Carrie flips their car and kills them, then collapses in a parking lot. Sue is able to find her by tapping into the psychic energy Carrie’s exuding that everyone seems to notice, and when Sue finds her, they communicate telepathically so that Sue is able to feel what it’s like to be teased and tortured like Carrie, and Carrie sees that Sue didn’t plan on Tommy taking her to the prom as a trick. Sue feels Carrie die.

In Part Three, “Wreckage,” we see the mass funerals and debates in the books about the incident and what to make of it, including the official investigative body’s conclusion that there’s “no reason to believe that a recurrence is likely or even possible” before we get a final letter from a woman describing her child clearly exhibiting telekinetic powers. The End.

The narrative of Carrie might be more familiar to people from Brian DePalma’s movie adaptation in 1976 that launched the career of Sissy Spacek (who, to my joy, narrated my audiobook version of the novel), but the film omits some of the critical elements that give the book a lot more depth. The first is the epistolary snippets. These provide more context about the before and after of the novel’s present timeline–things like Carrie having had at least one major telekinetic incident in the past with the raining stones, and, perhaps more importantly, an attempt by others, including those directly involved like Sue but mainly those only made aware of it after the fact, like politicians and scientists, to reckon with what has happened. The movie narrows its focus on the effects of what happened to just Sue, ignoring the possibility of national awareness about the incident. But by threading this larger awareness into the novel, King achieves a few things the film doesn’t. The first is suspense: these snippets provide direct hints very early on that a major incident involving a lot of death is going to happen because of Carrie. The second is a more meaningful cultural commentary than the film manages to make by refusing to look outside the present timeline. And finally, one could also argue that in representing the larger reverberations of this incident and the existence of telekinesis as supposed scientific fact, Carrie is the entry portal into the King extended universe.

Suspense

King actually tells us a few things outright early on. On the second page (of the ebook at least), we’re told:

What none of them knew, of course, was that Carrie White was telekinetic.

And the mere existence of epistolary snippets from books analyzing Carrie and an apparent tragedy she’s related to provides a hook that pulls the reader in. This is a hook that writers deploy frequently but when described seems counterintuitive: you’re basically giving away the end at the beginning. But even if the specifics of a high death toll are revealed, the reader’s interest is piqued by this knowledge rather than coming to the conclusion that the book has become pointless to read if we already know the end. We might know what happens–loosely–but now we want to know how it happens. And now the drama behind potentially low-stakes developments like who is or is not going to be able to go to a high-school dance is intensified, because we implicitly understand that these developments are pivotal to the development of a massacre.

King’s references to the tragedy the arc is building toward are somewhat vague at first but become more pointed in an escalation of their own. Very early on we get from one of the snippets of a book written about the incident:

The great tragedy is that we are now all Monday-morning quarterbacks . . .

Not long after that another one of the book snippet’s mentions:

One of her surviving classmates, Ruth Gogan…

A bit later, when we start getting excerpts from Sue’s memoir, she gives us a more specific estimate of the death toll that’s coming:

In the wake of two hundred deaths and the destruction of an entire town, it is so easy to forget one thing: We were kids.

One thing to note about this final passage is the double duty it’s doing: it reveals a suspenseful scale of upcoming destruction, but that scale is used as a springboard to characterize Sue and her attitude about what happened, not to mention that Sue, via the existence of her memoir, is also revealed to have survived.

Related to suspense is the novel’s structure: we start with a scene of Carrie getting her period in a shower. We build to a climax (or near-climax) of blood being dumped on her, in response to which she thinks (among other things):

They had finally given her the shower they wanted.

Something the pacing starts to do in the second part is circle back to describe the same incident through different points of view, specifically witnesses’ experiences of what happened juxtaposed with Carrie’s experience, a tactic that works to draw out the suspense of this extended action sequence and provide natural breaks that increase the tension. These competing accounts also complicate the dichotomy of monster versus victim.

Essentially there are two threads running through the rising action in the epistolary snippets and the direct scenes, and these build to a nice concurrent climax in the Carrie-Sue exchange when Sue’s contentious interview with the White Commission is juxtaposed with what “really” happened between her and Carrie. The film’s adaptation of the rising action’s penultimate and ultimate events also demonstrates a critical distinction between novels and film in how novels can depict action in the mind in a way films can’t. Hence, we have the climax of the film being when Carrie kills her mother by telekinetically hurling sharp objects at her, something that’s much easier to represent visually on a screen than Carrie’s visualizing her mother’s heart to bring it to a stop (an action that resonates more with themes of parental love and responsibility). Then immediately after Carrie kills her mother in the movie, the house implodes. I wasn’t sure if this was supposed to be a product of Carrie’s own psychic tumult in the wake of her matricide, but I do know that it was not as satisfying to me as the psychic exchange between Sue and Carrie in the novel’s climax, which in a way feels almost sexual as each feels what it’s like to be the other–two become one. This climax is also a potentially implicit commentary on the type of access that fiction-writing itself offers–direct access to someone else’s head, to what it feels like to be somebody else. And the film adaptation’s doing away with this element of the climax altogether seems–to this fiction writer at least–like an implicit admission of films’ inability to do what novels can.

Cultural Commentary

The movie, as mentioned, dispenses almost entirely with any reckoning with the aftermath of the tragedy, but this is in large part where the novel is able to derive its relevant commentary, perhaps most acutely via the primary investigative body dubbed the “White Commission,” an almost too on-the-nose label reminiscent of the real-life Warren Commission that investigated the assassination of JFK. If there was any doubt of the connection, one of the book snippets notes:

Morton Cratzchbarken, in an admittedly sensationalized address to The National Colloquium on Psychic Phenomena last year, said that the two most stunning events of the twentieth century have been the assassination of John F. Kennedy in 1963 and the destruction that came to Chamberlain, Maine, in May of 1979.

It’s also interesting that Carrie, published in 1974, is set a few years in the future, but in drafting it King himself would have been less than a decade out from JFK’s death. So what commentary is he making, exactly, with this likeness? What we see in snippets from the White Commission’s interviews, most climactically in its interview with Sue, is an unwillingness to listen to what the witnesses have to tell them–they seem to want to ignore the collective testimony serving as evidence for Carrie’s telekinesis and telepathy alike. Sue notes before we actually see her (post-)climactic interview with the Commission that they used her as a “handy scapegoat,” language that might call to mind a possible likeness to JFK-assassin Lee Harvey Oswald. But not long after Sue makes this claim, the passage cited above continues:

Cratzchbarken points out that both events were driven home to the citizenry by mass media, and both events have almost shouted the frightening fact that, while something had ended, something else had been irrevocably set in motion, for good or ill. If the comparison can be made, then Thomas Ross played the part of a Lee Harvey Oswald—trigger man in a catastrophe. The question that still remains is: Did he do so wittingly or unwittingly?

Here we’re seeing another element the epistolary structure introduces (lost in the film translation): the divide between what really happened and what people think happened. If the novel were purely epistolary, we’d have competing accounts that we’d be left on our own to make sense of, meaning we wouldn’t know an objective “truth” about what happened. But by intercutting these accounts with direct scenes of what happened that include access to different characters’ actual thoughts (and not just what they tell others), the reader is provided the objective truth of what “really” happened, which we’re then able to compare to the version of events recounted by others. This means that we do know the answer to the question posed by the passage above of whether Tommy is a witting or unwitting “trigger man”–he is patently unwitting. Anyone looking at the events from outside can’t be sure whether Tommy and Sue set Carrie up as a joke intentionally, but the reader knows definitively that their motives were pure, which heightens the tragedy. But if Tommy (and/or Sue) is an Oswald figure, then there’s potential commentary that our culture’s historical conception of Oswald as “witting” trigger man is fallible. By showing us how potentially off-base the White Commission’s interpretation of events is, King seems to be showing us that such investigatory bodies by their inherent nature not only cannot offer us a full picture of what “really” happened, but will actively obscure it.

And even if isolation could be made successful, would the American people allow a small pretty girl-child to be ripped away from her parents at the first sign of puberty to be locked in a bank vault for the rest of her life? I doubt it. Especially when the White Commission has worked so hard to convince the public that the nightmare in Chamberlain was a complete fluke.

Indeed, we seem to have returned to Square One . . .

If Sue is the Oswald figure, she is left having to reckon with the massively negative fallout that resulted from what she’d intended to be a good deed. This could be potential commentary on our country’s foreign policy–we think we know best, so we go meddle with some other country’s affairs and leadership (in Guatemala, Chile, El Salvador…the list goes on)–but then it turns out to have consequences we were unable to foresee (migrant caravans, anyone?). The CIA, our country’s potential shadow self, orchestrated the assassination of many others’ country’s leaders, so even if they aren’t directly responsible for JFK’s death, they are in many ways responsible indirectly. Even if Lee Harvey Oswald was the trigger man, the larger animosity between nations that the trail of a bullet between two individual men represented is still the product of our government’s actions that make JFK’s shooting much more than a mere “fluke.” King seems to be pointing out the dangers of ignoring such implications:

In conclusion, I would like to point out the grave risk authorities are taking by burying the Carrie White affair under the bureaucratic mat—and I am speaking specifically of the so-called White Commission. The desire among politicians to regard TK as a once-in-a-lifetime phenomenon seems very strong, and while this may be understandable it is not acceptable. The possibility of a recurrence, genetically speaking, is 99 per cent. It’s time we planned now for what may be. . . .

The White Commission’s problematic conclusion ends up being the penultimate statement of the novel:

. . . and so we must conclude that, while an autopsy performed on the subject indicates some cellular changes which may indicate the presence of some paranormal power, we find no reason to believe that a recurrence is likely or even possible . . .

The final piece of Carrie‘s epistolary puzzle, snapped into place immediately after this conclusion, is a letter in which a woman describes seeing her young daughter exhibiting telekinetic powers. This juxtaposition would seem to make a fairly clear–and foreboding–statement about the fallibility of the White Commission’s conclusion. The evidence is right in front of their faces, and yet they ignore it. This would seem to be another critical element of how King injects “real-life” horror into his fantastical scenarios.

I’d posit that King’s ability to inject “real-life” horror into such scenarios is potentially one of his defining features and a major element of his success. Carrie’s powers aren’t the truly horrifying thing here, but rather the combination of circumstances that give rise to her deploying them in such a horrifying way. These factors are the religious oppression of her mother and the mockery of her classmates, the latter seeming to stem directly from the former. But it’s definitely worth noting, if risking stating the obvious, that these factors are both things that could occur in the “real” world, and through this lens this narrative seems a harbinger of the modern-day school shooter: a high-school student who is alienated due to relentless mocking uses the potentially destructive powers at her disposal to take revenge on a mass scale (the death toll mentioned at the end is 400+ and counting). In this reading, Carrie’s powers become the equivalent of the modern ease of access to the AK-47, foreshadowing a trend of predominantly teenaged retribution in school hallways that won’t be fully realized in the culture for another two decades.

Related to these themes of alienated teens and the country’s dicey foreign policy in the seventies, Carrie is not pocked by as many references to what was likely the most salient and horrific political flashpoint of the time, the Vietnam War, as its followup Salem’s Lot will be. But Carrie‘s image of the bodies for a collective mass funeral of high school students seems to be commenting on the senseless carnage of youth in Vietnam:

They were buried on June 1 and 2 in three mass ceremonies. A memorial service was held on June 3 in the town square. It was the most moving ceremony that this reporter has ever witnessed. Attendance was in the thousands, and the entire assemblage was still as the school band, stripped from fifty-six to a bare forty, played the school song and taps.

If the horror of Vietnam is a mere trickle of an undercurrent in Carrie, the horror of the potential mundanity of domesticity is closer to a riptide–sneaky and powerful enough to suck you under and carry you away. Take Sue’s consideration of her potential future:

The word she was avoiding was expressed To Conform, in the infinitive, and it conjured up miserable images of hair in rollers, long afternoons in front of the ironing board in front of the soap operas while hubby was off busting heavies in an anonymous Office; of joining the P.T.A. and then the country club when their income moved into five figures; of pills in circular yellow cases without number to insure against having to move out of the misses’ sizes before it became absolutely necessary and against the intrusion of repulsive little strangers who shat in their pants and screamed for help at two in the morning; of fighting with desperate decorum to keep the n*****s out of Kleen Korners, standing shoulder to shoulder with Terri Smith (Miss Potato Blossom of 1975) and Vicki Jones (Vice President of the Women’s League), armed with signs and petitions and sweet, slightly desperate smiles.

After we momentarily marvel at the datedness of an income aspiring to “five figures” (and return to the casual racism in a future post), let’s note Tommy’s teasing response to Sue’s ennui:

“I’ll probably end up working at my dad’s car lot,” he said. “I’ll spend my Friday and Saturday nights down at Uncle Billy’s or out at The Cavalier drinking beer and talking about the Saturday afternoon I got that fat pitch from Saunders and we upset Dorchester. Get married to some nagging broad and always own last year’s model, vote Democrat—”

“Don’t,” she said, her mouth suddenly full of a dark, sweet horror. She pulled him to her. “Love me. My head is so bad tonight. Love me. Love me.”

Interestingly, Sue’s response to these visions of domestic horror is to want Tommy to have sex with her; also interestingly, this will be the first time the sex is actually good for her. Later, the possibility that Sue is pregnant is briefly noted:

Her period was late. Almost a week late. And she had always been as regular as an almanac.

I didn’t notice any followup references to this, but it comes very close to the climactic dumping of the pig’s blood, seeming to underscore its potential horror.

Sue’s horror of domesticity seems to serve as reinforcement for Carrie’s domestic conundrum and how her going to the prom with Tommy comes to represent the one possibility for escape she has:

And if he didn’t come, if she drew back and gave up? High school would be over in a month. Then what? A creeping, subterranean existence in this house, supported by Momma, watching game shows and soap operas all day on television at Mrs. Garrison’s house when she had Carrie In To Visit (Mrs. Garrison was eighty-six), walking down to the Center to get a malted after supper at the Kelly Fruit when it was deserted, getting fatter, losing hope, losing even the power to think?

No. Oh dear God, please no.

(please let it be a happy ending)

This passage complicates how to read the ending that we do get. Carrie’s apparently subconscious–to judge from the parentheses–clinging to the idea of a happy ending shows to an extent how she’s been conditioned by the culture despite the restrictions of her upbringing, and it certainly humanizes someone about to engage in a monstrous spree of destruction–which is more or less the novel’s entire project. It also invites us to consider the alternative to her not engaging in this monstrous spree. Her moment of choice has come, but the real tragedy is not so much the eventual death toll as the fact that she has no good choice. She’ll either attempt to step out of her shell and be pushed over the edge, or she’ll stay stuck in the swamp of a domestic nightmare. (There’s also the interesting detail that Carrie’s mother works at a laundry, and that this is specifically noted more than once to be a source of the brute physical strength she sometimes uses on Carrie.) Is not her escape from this swamp, no matter the means, a version of a happy ending?

Cultural Commentary II: Narrative Stance

In The Art of Perspective, writer Christopher Castellani notes the advent of shows like The Affair, which uses a plot device frequently noted from the Japanese movie Rashomon, according to Wikipedia:

The film is known for a plot device that involves various characters providing subjective, alternative, self-serving, and contradictory versions of the same incident.

With this device, the viewer/reader is never shown the objective, true reality of what “really” happened, but is left with the understanding that in a world where we’re all trapped in our own necessarily limited perspectives, truly there is no objective reality. This development is part of a trend that can be tracked through literary movements: look at 19th-century novels, like Tolstoy’s Anna Karenina, and we have omniscient narrators espousing about what becomes through their omniscient perspective official facts about human nature, implying that there is a universal objective reality. Around the time we get to Henry James’ The Portrait of a Lady (1881), narrative focus starts to pivot from the external to the internal–action is based in the internal vagaries of the mind, and narrative climax defined by the James Joycean epiphany. In the wake of the First World War’s apparent evidence of a lack of any all-knowing and -loving deity, the modernists become obsessed with the limitations of the individual subjective experience, and we get Proust mining from his own thoughts and memories enough material for a seven-volume novel. The postmodernists take the conundrum of subjectivity’s limitations to absurdist levels, bringing the backlash of minimalist realism and then something called post-postmodernism. Granted, this is a narrative of literary history distilled from my years of myopic patriarchal western imperialist classical education, but it seems more or less true that we’ve arrived at a point in time where the all-knowing narrator has bitten the dust, due in large part to the now abundantly obvious issues of 1) omniscience/objective reality not actually being a thing that exists, and 2) any all-knowing narrator has to be written by a decidedly not-all-knowing individual human person.

(This issue of a lack of an all-knowing entity who can offer a comprehensive and infallible account of “what happened” permeates not only fiction, but history as well. History is written by the victors, as Winston Churchhill is said to have said, which connects directly to theme raised by JFK.)

Basically, who now has the ego to aspire to godhood, omniscience-wise? The Victorians doing so was a symptom of the hubris that drove their ruthless colonialist expansion. But America was and is also an empire. Enter a young Stephen King. Who could have more hubris than a white American male under the age of 25 (except for maybe one over the age of 25)?

King gives us competing accounts of what happened this night in Chamberlain, but does not limit these to subjectivity. These “direct scenes” often strip psychic distance to the bone to give us direct access to different characters’ thoughts, and King plays with the technique that critics like James Wood have dubbed “free indirect discourse/style” in which characters’ thoughts are given to us directly in their pure unmediated substance by doing this in the traditional sense and seeming to penetrate to an even deeper layer of the mind by depicting some thoughts within parentheses. This reinforces the King tenet of potential horror lurking in the hidden corners of the mind (more on that below) and is a nice setup to allow us to see Carrie’s telepathy at play in other characters’ minds later (also more on that below).

But King frequently give us lines that transcend the subjectivity of individual experience into a broader objectivity, latitude King sets up for himself in the opening lines of the first “direct scene”:

Nobody was really surprised when it happened, not really, not at the subconscious level where savage things grow. On the surface, all the girls in the shower room were shocked, thrilled, ashamed, or simply glad that the White bitch had taken it in the mouth again. Some of them might also have claimed surprise, but of course their claim was untrue.

By incorporating this omniscience into his narrative stance, King seems to imply that fiction is more substantive than official history in being able to provide a full and complete accounting of “what happened.” This omniscience also transcends historical themes to connect to the book’s religious ones about the nature of God. Take this passage:

If someone had been there to watch, he would have been struck by the resemblance between [Carrie and her mother].

It’s interesting that King constructs this hypothetical entity in this passage when, having given himself the latitude of a purely omniscient narrator, King doesn’t really need to position this supposition as being from this hypothetical entity’s perspective but could just tell us that a strong resemblance exists between mother and daughter. But the hypothetical entity King conjures here is of course reminiscent of God, with the construction of the sentence–“If someone had been there…”–calling into question whether God might really be there or not. The existence of God is not something that this omniscient narrator is prepared to take a definitive stance on, apparently. (We’ll put the gendering of this potential omniscient entity aside for a future post.)

The conflict between religion and science is on full display as Carrie’s mother reckons with Carrie’s powers as some kind of divine punishment while the scientific community reckons with the evidence of Carrie’s telekinesis. King takes great pains to establish another critical element the film omits–the scientific basis of telekinesis:

With the TK phenomenon, the male appears to be the carrier; the TK gene may be recessive in the female, but dominates only in the female.

There’s also the fact that Carrie’s autopsy revealed abnormalities in her brain, something the White Commission acknowledges before immediately dismissing as a one-time anomaly. While that dismissal allows for a pointed commentary on the fallibility of human reasoning within the space of this one novel, King’s ending the book with the implication that others do indeed have powers like Carrie’s is a punt outside the confines of this book into future ones.

The King Universe

Carrie seems primarily driven by the concept of telekinesis, but the novel also establishes a link between telekinesis and telepathy that we’ll no doubt see recur in other novels (this link is the main basis for his most recent release, The Institute). In the second half of the book detailing the destruction that occurs on Prom Night, several witnesses are able to identify Carrie White by name despite having never seen her before. Tommy notes hearing her name echoing in his head:

Carrie drew in a startled, smothered gasp, and Tommy again felt (but for only a second) that weird vertigo in his mind

(carrie carrie carrie carrie)

that seemed to blank out all thought but the name and image of this strange girl he was with. For a fleeting second he was literally scared shitless.

Then one witness interviewed later not only recognizes Carrie without ever having seen her, but seems to know what she’s thinking:

And she kept looking at her hands and rubbing them on her dress, trying to get the blood off and thinking she’d never get it off and how she was going to pour blood on the whole town and make them pay. It was awful stuff.

Q. How would you have any idea what she was thinking?

A. I don’t know. I can’t explain.

Q. For the remainder of your testimony, I wish you would stick to what you saw, Mr. Quillan.

and

“Tom Quillan flinched back. “Carrie. Carrie White.”

“Who? How do you know?”

Quillan blinked slowly. “I dunno. It just sort of . . . came to me.”

and

Q. Mrs. Simard, how did you know it was Carrie White?

A. I just knew.

Q. This knowing, Mrs. Simard: was it like a light going on in your head?

A. No, sir.

Q. What was it like?

A. I can’t tell you. It faded away the way a dream does. An hour after you get up you can only remember you had a dream. But I knew.

Q. Was there an emotional feeling that went with this knowledge?

A. Yes. Horror.

Carrie’s “psychic energy” encompassing both telekinesis and telepathy is relevant to another significant tenet of the King universe, one conveyed in the first line of the novel we get that’s a direct scene rather than an epistolary snippet:

Nobody was really surprised when it happened, not really, not at the subconscious level where savage things grow.

The true horror, King implies almost immediately, originates from within the self, rather than from external factors. This would seem to be why so many of King’s books are dubbed “psychological thrillers,” and seems reinforced here in that one of the main books he’s fabricated about the White incident is called “The Shadow Exploded.” This dichotomy of an internal versus external starting point for narrative action is potentially a key to a broader point I’ll return to about the distinction between “genre fiction” and “literature” as plot-based (something happens to characters) and character-based (something happens because of characters).

By its very title, Carrie would seem to be a character-based narrative. Notably, few novels in the King canon are named for characters: there’s Misery (which isn’t the character’s real name), and Dolores Claiborne, and Mr. Mercedes (also not the character’s real name). (Cujo and Christine might in a sense be named for characters, but those characters being a dog and a car, respectively, don’t really count.) This means King’s first three most character-based narratives are female-centric (though Misery might split the difference, being from a man’s perspective; we’ll see).

Carrie‘s being character-based, by the classifying definition I offered above, would put it more in the realm of literary than genre–the action happens because of the character. And yet if Carrie causes the action to happen via her telekinetic powers, she’s exercising them in response to external stimuli–she snaps because of her classmates’ excessive teasing, a narrative thread that can be traced back to her mother’s fundamentalist restrictions marking her as an outcast from day one. These are all things that happen to Carrie, not things that she causes. But the root causes of these external factors also have a basis in human nature that potentially makes them more literary, as the aforementioned referenced line points out, and which connects back to King frequently deriving horror from the real in the midst of the fantastical–in this case, the horror of the human capacity for cruelty. What makes Carrie a complex character is that we understand her motivations; we’ve been granted access to her selfhood and situation, and we sympathize. We might, in her situation, have done the very same thing.

-SCR